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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 51 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sense does this line use?
    “The medicine had a bitter taste.”
    (a) hearing (b) smell (c) taste
  2. 2.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Watch out for that car___” shouted Farhan.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) an exclamation mark (!)
  3. 3.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Ha ha, the goat ate your hat,” ___ Arjun.
    (a) sobbed (b) asked (c) giggled
  4. 4.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “The lost calf walked through the fields.”
    (a) glanced (b) tumbled (c) wandered
  5. 5.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The deer ___ over the fallen log.”
    (a) leapt (b) jumped (c) did
  6. 6.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) garden (b) quickly (c) chirp
  7. 7.Which strong verb could replace “drank” in this sentence?
    “Grandma drank her hot tea slowly.”
    (a) stared (b) sipped (c) grabbed
  8. 8.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Fatima sat alone, hugging her knees and sniffing.”
    (a) hungry (b) scared (c) sad
  9. 9.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Farhan’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again.”
    (a) scared (b) hungry (c) tired
  10. 10.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ pond had lots of frogs.”
    (a) nice (b) muddy (c) okay
  11. 11.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I dropped my ice cream in the mud___” sobbed Vihaan.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  12. 12.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tenzin was really cold.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  13. 13.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Is it time for lunch yet”? asked Diya. (b) Is it time for lunch yet? asked Diya. (c) “Is it time for lunch yet?” asked Diya.
  14. 14.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Pooja felt very angry.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  15. 15.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Grandpa reads the newspaper every day. (b) Her bedroom is a pigsty. (c) My little sister is as busy as a bee.
  16. 16.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The balloon burst with a pop.”
    (a) burst (b) balloon (c) pop
  17. 17.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Fatima laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  18. 18.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Imran is scared? (a) Imran sighed and flipped through the same comic again. (b) Imran gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut. (c) Imran was scared.
  19. 19.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) happy (b) crackle (c) yellow
  20. 20.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The lost calf ___ through the fields.”
    (a) wandered (b) walked (c) went
  21. 21.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The new shoes shone like stars. (b) The bus stopped at the school gate. (c) The busy market was a beehive.
  22. 22.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The runner was as quick as lightning. (b) The river was a silver ribbon in the valley. (c) We ate rice and dal for dinner.
  23. 23.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The coach ___ to us from across the big field.”
    (a) spoke (b) shouted (c) came
  24. 24.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ dog barked at the stranger.”
    (a) shaggy (b) okay (c) fine
  25. 25.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ kitten curled up on my lap.”
    (a) nice (b) okay (c) fluffy
  26. 26.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The rickety ladder wobbled under Dad’s feet.”
    (a) ladder (b) wobbled (c) rickety
  27. 27.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ soup filled our bowls.”
    (a) nice (b) steaming (c) good
  28. 28.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) We ate rice and dal for dinner. (b) The playground was an oven in May. (c) The elephant moved like a slow grey hill.
  29. 29.Which sense does this line use?
    “The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek.”
    (a) touch (b) taste (c) hearing
  30. 30.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Manav shivered and stamped his feet in the snow.”
    (a) happy (b) angry (c) cold
  31. 31.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The baby slept in the afternoon.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  32. 32.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The pigs ___ in the muddy farmyard.”
    (a) cock-a-doodle-doo (b) oink (c) knock
  33. 33.Which sense does this line use?
    “The sunset painted the sky orange and pink.”
    (a) smell (b) taste (c) sight
  34. 34.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I dropped my ice cream in the mud___” sobbed Riya.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  35. 35.Which strong verb could replace “threw” in this sentence?
    “Dad threw the keys onto the table.”
    (a) sprinkled (b) wandered (c) tossed
  36. 36.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The tree bark felt rough under my fingers. (b) Rain drummed on the tin roof all night. (c) The new bicycle shone bright red.
  37. 37.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “My kite is torn to pieces” sobbed Yash. (b) My kite is torn to pieces, sobbed Yash. (c) “My kite is torn to pieces,” sobbed Yash.
  38. 38.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) mango (b) drip (c) garden
  39. 39.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Nani ___ sugar over the hot pancakes.”
    (a) put (b) sprinkled (c) got
  40. 40.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake”, whispered Diya. (b) Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake, whispered Diya. (c) “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake,” whispered Diya.

Answer key

  1. taste
  2. an exclamation mark (!)
  3. giggled
  4. wandered
  5. leapt
  6. chirp
  7. sipped
  8. sad
  9. tired
  10. muddy
  11. a comma (,)
  12. telling
  13. “Is it time for lunch yet?” asked Diya.
  14. telling
  15. Her bedroom is a pigsty.
  16. pop
  17. showing
  18. Imran gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut.
  19. crackle
  20. wandered
  21. The new shoes shone like stars.
  22. The runner was as quick as lightning.
  23. shouted
  24. shaggy
  25. fluffy
  26. rickety
  27. steaming
  28. The playground was an oven in May.
  29. touch
  30. cold
  31. neither
  32. oink
  33. sight
  34. a comma (,)
  35. tossed
  36. The new bicycle shone bright red.
  37. “My kite is torn to pieces,” sobbed Yash.
  38. drip
  39. sprinkled
  40. “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake,” whispered Diya.

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