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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 533 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Catch the ball___” shouted Saanvi.
    (a) an exclamation mark (!) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  2. 2.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) Diyas twinkled on every windowsill. (b) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue. (c) The river water felt icy on my feet.
  3. 3.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ elephant stomped across the river.”
    (a) good (b) enormous (c) okay
  4. 4.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour. (b) The temple bells rang out loudly. (c) The clay cup felt hot in my hands.
  5. 5.Which strong verb could replace “put” in this sentence?
    “Nani put sugar over the hot pancakes.”
    (a) sprinkled (b) whispered (c) blazed
  6. 6.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The stars twinkled like tiny diamonds. (b) The old car was a tired donkey on the hill. (c) Kabir finished his homework early.
  7. 7.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “An owl gave a hoot from the banyan tree.”
    (a) hoot (b) tree (c) owl
  8. 8.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The dry logs crackle in the campfire.”
    (a) crackle (b) logs (c) dry
  9. 9.Which sense does this line use?
    “The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour.”
    (a) taste (b) hearing (c) touch
  10. 10.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “His heart was a drum during the race.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  11. 11.Which strong verb means “shut hard and loudly”? (a) raced (b) crawled (c) slammed
  12. 12.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake___” whispered Tenzin.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  13. 13.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Hee hee, stop tickling me___” giggled Simran.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  14. 14.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Ishaan ___ a phone number on his hand.”
    (a) scribbled (b) wrote (c) did
  15. 15.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “My little sister is as busy as a bee.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  16. 16.Which strong verb means “swallowed quickly in big mouthfuls”? (a) gulped (b) tiptoed (c) stared
  17. 17.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Riya ___ a crunchy apple on the bus.”
    (a) went (b) munched (c) ate
  18. 18.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Kavya rubbed her hands and blew on her fingers.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  19. 19.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The foaming river rushed over the rocks.”
    (a) foaming (b) river (c) rushed
  20. 20.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) hoot (b) kind (c) mango
  21. 21.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “Grandpa walked through the park after dinner.”
    (a) blazed (b) sipped (c) strolled
  22. 22.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The squishy cushion sank under me.”
    (a) squishy (b) sank (c) cushion
  23. 23.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Simran is tired? (a) Simran’s eyelids drooped, and she yawned again and again. (b) Simran grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road. (c) Simran was tired.
  24. 24.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Can I have one more laddoo, please”? asked Sahil. (b) “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” asked Sahil. (c) Can I have one more laddoo, please? asked Sahil.
  25. 25.What makes the sound “woof”? (a) thunder (b) raindrops (c) a dog
  26. 26.Which sense does this line use?
    “Colourful kites dotted the blue sky.”
    (a) hearing (b) sight (c) smell
  27. 27.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Kavya froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.”
    (a) hungry (b) happy (c) scared
  28. 28.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a mouse”
    (a) loud (b) huge (c) quiet
  29. 29.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as ice”
    (a) hot (b) loud (c) cold
  30. 30.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Meera rubbed her hands and blew on her fingers.”
    (a) scared (b) sad (c) cold
  31. 31.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ ladder wobbled under Dad’s feet.”
    (a) okay (b) nice (c) rickety
  32. 32.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “How many stars are in the sky”? asked Tenzin. (b) “How many stars are in the sky?” asked Tenzin. (c) How many stars are in the sky? asked Tenzin.
  33. 33.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The kitten’s fur felt like silk. (b) The cat sat on the warm mat. (c) His heart was a drum during the race.
  34. 34.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Stop that runaway goat!” shouted Aarav. (b) “Stop that runaway goat”! shouted Aarav. (c) “Stop that runaway goat” shouted Aarav.
  35. 35.What makes the sound “vroom”? (a) pakoras in hot oil (b) a bee (c) a motorbike
  36. 36.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The camera went click at the party.”
    (a) camera (b) party (c) click
  37. 37.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) I tasted the soup and added more salt. (b) The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen. (c) The temple bells rang out loudly.
  38. 38.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aarav is angry? (a) Aarav’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door. (b) Aarav was angry. (c) Aarav folded his arms and glared at his brother.
  39. 39.What makes the sound “baa”? (a) a sheep (b) a visitor at the door (c) a noisy drinker
  40. 40.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden. (b) The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek. (c) We heard the train whistle far away.

Answer key

  1. an exclamation mark (!)
  2. The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.
  3. enormous
  4. The clay cup felt hot in my hands.
  5. sprinkled
  6. The stars twinkled like tiny diamonds.
  7. hoot
  8. crackle
  9. taste
  10. metaphor
  11. slammed
  12. a comma (,)
  13. a comma (,)
  14. scribbled
  15. simile
  16. gulped
  17. munched
  18. showing
  19. foaming
  20. hoot
  21. strolled
  22. squishy
  23. Simran’s eyelids drooped, and she yawned again and again.
  24. “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” asked Sahil.
  25. a dog
  26. sight
  27. scared
  28. quiet
  29. cold
  30. cold
  31. rickety
  32. “How many stars are in the sky?” asked Tenzin.
  33. His heart was a drum during the race.
  34. “Stop that runaway goat!” shouted Aarav.
  35. a motorbike
  36. click
  37. The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen.
  38. Aarav folded his arms and glared at his brother.
  39. a sheep
  40. I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden.

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