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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 545 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ thunder shook the windows.”
    (a) okay (b) booming (c) good
  2. 2.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Ishaan was bored.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  3. 3.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ ant carried a crumb.”
    (a) tiny (b) okay (c) nice
  4. 4.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) We heard the train whistle far away. (b) I saw a rainbow over the green fields. (c) The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy.
  5. 5.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Ha ha, the goat ate your hat,” ___ Rohan.
    (a) asked (b) sobbed (c) giggled
  6. 6.What makes the sound “quack”? (a) a leaking tap (b) an owl (c) a duck
  7. 7.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Help, the boat is sinking!” shouted Tara. (b) Help, the boat is sinking! shouted Tara. (c) “Help, the boat is sinking” shouted Tara.
  8. 8.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The crispy dosa crackled on the pan.”
    (a) dosa (b) crackled (c) crispy
  9. 9.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The baby ___ across the carpet to her toy.”
    (a) had (b) moved (c) crawled
  10. 10.What makes the sound “neigh”? (a) a campfire (b) a horse (c) a frog
  11. 11.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ baby giggled in the cot.”
    (a) nice (b) good (c) chubby
  12. 12.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Meera was really sad.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  13. 13.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The microwave gave a beep when the milk was hot.”
    (a) milk (b) microwave (c) beep
  14. 14.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The kulfi tasted of cardamom and saffron. (b) The baby giggled when Dad made funny noises. (c) The golden sand glittered in the sun.
  15. 15.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Tenzin is cold? (a) Tenzin’s teeth chattered, and he pulled his shawl tighter. (b) Tenzin was cold. (c) Tears filled Tenzin’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.
  16. 16.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “My sandcastle got washed away___” sobbed Meera.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  17. 17.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “My goldfish has gone missing,” sobbed Aarav. (b) “My goldfish has gone missing” sobbed Aarav. (c) My goldfish has gone missing, sobbed Aarav.
  18. 18.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Rohan is sad? (a) Rohan was sad. (b) Rohan froze and held his breath as the floor creaked. (c) Rohan’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home.
  19. 19.Which strong verb means “drank in tiny mouthfuls”? (a) sipped (b) wandered (c) tiptoed
  20. 20.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Zoya is happy? (a) Zoya was happy. (b) Zoya rubbed her eyes and nodded off on the sofa. (c) Zoya laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.
  21. 21.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as an ox”
    (a) strong (b) tiny (c) weak
  22. 22.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “My sandcastle got washed away___” sobbed Imran.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  23. 23.Which sense does this line use?
    “The sea tasted very salty.”
    (a) taste (b) touch (c) smell
  24. 24.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “His heart was a drum during the race.”
    (a) simile (b) neither (c) metaphor
  25. 25.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ lemon made Riya pull a face.”
    (a) nice (b) okay (c) sour
  26. 26.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The eagle ___ above the hills.”
    (a) soared (b) flew (c) got
  27. 27.Which strong verb means “moved slowly and quietly”? (a) tumbled (b) gobbled (c) crept
  28. 28.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The bees ___ around the mango flowers.”
    (a) buzz (b) cock-a-doodle-doo (c) quack
  29. 29.What makes the sound “roar”? (a) a lion (b) thunder (c) a leaking tap
  30. 30.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sticky jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) dripped (b) jalebis (c) sticky
  31. 31.Which sense does this line use?
    “I heard the koel singing in the mango tree.”
    (a) touch (b) hearing (c) sight
  32. 32.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ elephant stomped across the river.”
    (a) enormous (b) fine (c) good
  33. 33.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ lion dozed in the shade.”
    (a) sleepy (b) nice (c) fine
  34. 34.Which strong verb means “burned brightly and fiercely”? (a) munched (b) blazed (c) gulped
  35. 35.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The spiky cactus pricked my finger.”
    (a) pricked (b) cactus (c) spiky
  36. 36.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock,” ___ Aisha.
    (a) sobbed (b) giggled (c) asked
  37. 37.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The night was as dark as ink. (b) The teacher wrote the date on the board. (c) His heart was a drum during the race.
  38. 38.Which sense does this line use?
    “The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy.”
    (a) smell (b) taste (c) sight
  39. 39.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose” giggled Arjun. (b) Ha ha, you have milk on your nose, giggled Arjun. (c) “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose,” giggled Arjun.
  40. 40.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Riya’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home.”
    (a) tired (b) sad (c) cold

Answer key

  1. booming
  2. telling
  3. tiny
  4. I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  5. giggled
  6. a duck
  7. “Help, the boat is sinking!” shouted Tara.
  8. crispy
  9. crawled
  10. a horse
  11. chubby
  12. telling
  13. beep
  14. The golden sand glittered in the sun.
  15. Tenzin’s teeth chattered, and he pulled his shawl tighter.
  16. a comma (,)
  17. “My goldfish has gone missing,” sobbed Aarav.
  18. Rohan’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home.
  19. sipped
  20. Zoya laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.
  21. strong
  22. a comma (,)
  23. taste
  24. metaphor
  25. sour
  26. soared
  27. crept
  28. buzz
  29. a lion
  30. sticky
  31. hearing
  32. enormous
  33. sleepy
  34. blazed
  35. spiky
  36. giggled
  37. The night was as dark as ink.
  38. taste
  39. “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose,” giggled Arjun.
  40. sad

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