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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 559 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Vihaan grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  2. 2.Which sense does this line use?
    “Colourful kites dotted the blue sky.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) taste
  3. 3.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) mango (b) whoosh (c) happy
  4. 4.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Rohan is scared? (a) Rohan was scared. (b) Rohan could barely keep his eyes open at dinner. (c) Rohan’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.
  5. 5.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Fatima is happy? (a) Fatima was happy. (b) Fatima grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road. (c) Fatima sat alone, hugging her knees and sniffing.
  6. 6.Which sense does this line use?
    “The temple bells rang out loudly.”
    (a) hearing (b) sight (c) touch
  7. 7.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) slurp (b) happy (c) river
  8. 8.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ fireworks lit up the sky.”
    (a) nice (b) dazzling (c) good
  9. 9.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Ishaan felt very sad.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  10. 10.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The sunset painted the sky orange and pink. (b) The snail felt slimy on my palm. (c) The bees buzzed around the hive.
  11. 11.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ rope scraped my hands.”
    (a) rough (b) nice (c) okay
  12. 12.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ishaan’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet.”
    (a) sad (b) cold (c) scared
  13. 13.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sticky jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) jalebis (b) dripped (c) sticky
  14. 14.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) pencil (b) honk (c) happy
  15. 15.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Saanvi kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  16. 16.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Is it time for lunch yet” asked Ananya. (b) “Is it time for lunch yet?” asked Ananya. (c) “Is it time for lunch yet”? asked Ananya.
  17. 17.Which strong verb could replace “looked” in this sentence?
    “Tara looked into the dark cupboard for her shoes.”
    (a) peered (b) wandered (c) munched
  18. 18.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The squishy cushion sank under me.”
    (a) sank (b) squishy (c) cushion
  19. 19.What makes the sound “crackle”? (a) a campfire (b) raindrops (c) a dog
  20. 20.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ owl hooted from the branch.”
    (a) speckled (b) nice (c) okay
  21. 21.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) good (b) sticky (c) okay
  22. 22.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Diya ___ her mother’s hand in the crowd.”
    (a) held (b) clutched (c) came
  23. 23.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The lake sparkled under the full moon. (b) The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink. (c) The crowd cheered loudly for our team.
  24. 24.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  25. 25.Which strong verb means “burned brightly and fiercely”? (a) glanced (b) blazed (c) tiptoed
  26. 26.Which strong verb means “fell over and over”? (a) gulped (b) tumbled (c) scribbled
  27. 27.Which strong verb means “chewed with a crunching noise”? (a) munched (b) hurled (c) sobbed
  28. 28.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ishaan is cold? (a) Ishaan drummed his fingers and stared at the clock. (b) Ishaan was cold. (c) Ishaan’s teeth chattered, and he pulled his shawl tighter.
  29. 29.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The fluffy kitten curled up on my lap.”
    (a) kitten (b) fluffy (c) curled
  30. 30.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The doorbell went ding-dong at noon.”
    (a) noon (b) ding-dong (c) doorbell
  31. 31.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The sunset painted the sky orange and pink. (b) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue. (c) The snail felt slimy on my palm.
  32. 32.What makes the sound “baa”? (a) a steel plate falling (b) a sheep (c) a horse
  33. 33.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The scissors went snip as Mum cut the thread.”
    (a) thread (b) snip (c) scissors
  34. 34.Which sense does this line use?
    “I heard waves crashing on the rocks.”
    (a) hearing (b) touch (c) taste
  35. 35.Which word fits the gap best?
    “How many stars are in the sky?” ___ Farhan.
    (a) sobbed (b) giggled (c) asked
  36. 36.Which strong verb could replace “wrote” in this sentence?
    “Ishaan wrote a phone number on his hand.”
    (a) scribbled (b) sipped (c) dashed
  37. 37.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Kavya hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  38. 38.Which strong verb could replace “held” in this sentence?
    “Diya held her mother’s hand in the crowd.”
    (a) clutched (b) gulped (c) munched
  39. 39.Which strong verb could replace “ate” in this sentence?
    “The mouse ate the corner of the cheese.”
    (a) crept (b) dashed (c) nibbled
  40. 40.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Imran’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.”
    (a) hungry (b) scared (c) happy

Answer key

  1. showing
  2. sight
  3. whoosh
  4. Rohan’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.
  5. Fatima grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.
  6. hearing
  7. slurp
  8. dazzling
  9. telling
  10. The bees buzzed around the hive.
  11. rough
  12. scared
  13. sticky
  14. honk
  15. showing
  16. “Is it time for lunch yet?” asked Ananya.
  17. peered
  18. squishy
  19. a campfire
  20. speckled
  21. sticky
  22. clutched
  23. The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink.
  24. metaphor
  25. blazed
  26. tumbled
  27. munched
  28. Ishaan’s teeth chattered, and he pulled his shawl tighter.
  29. fluffy
  30. ding-dong
  31. The sunset painted the sky orange and pink.
  32. a sheep
  33. snip
  34. hearing
  35. asked
  36. scribbled
  37. showing
  38. clutched
  39. nibbled
  40. hungry

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