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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 565 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Grab the rope!” ___ Aarav.
    (a) shouted (b) whispered (c) giggled
  2. 2.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, the baby is sleeping___” whispered Aarav.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  3. 3.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a feather”
    (a) heavy (b) dark (c) light
  4. 4.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Meera’s teeth chattered, and she pulled her shawl tighter.”
    (a) cold (b) hungry (c) tired
  5. 5.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Where did you put my blue pencil___” asked Farhan.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)
  6. 6.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The kitten’s fur felt like silk. (b) The stars were diamonds in the night sky. (c) The children played cricket after school.
  7. 7.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Maria is hungry? (a) Maria dragged her feet upstairs and flopped on the bed. (b) Maria was hungry. (c) Maria’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.
  8. 8.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Do not tell anyone about the party___” whispered Manav.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  9. 9.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The children ___ at the giant elephant in surprise.”
    (a) went (b) stared (c) looked
  10. 10.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Stop that runaway goat!” shouted Nisha. (b) “Stop that runaway goat”! shouted Nisha. (c) Stop that runaway goat! shouted Nisha.
  11. 11.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ lion dozed in the shade.”
    (a) okay (b) sleepy (c) good
  12. 12.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Vihaan is bored? (a) Vihaan could barely keep his eyes open at dinner. (b) Vihaan was bored. (c) Vihaan sighed and flipped through the same comic again.
  13. 13.Which strong verb could replace “threw” in this sentence?
    “Dad threw the keys onto the table.”
    (a) leapt (b) nibbled (c) tossed
  14. 14.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ road twisted up the mountain.”
    (a) fine (b) nice (c) narrow
  15. 15.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The deer ___ over the fallen log.”
    (a) came (b) jumped (c) leapt
  16. 16.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Shh, we are in the library,” ___ Ananya.
    (a) shouted (b) whispered (c) asked
  17. 17.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Where did you put my blue pencil___” asked Vihaan.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  18. 18.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The puffy clouds floated across the sky.”
    (a) floated (b) puffy (c) clouds
  19. 19.Which sense does this line use?
    “The wet soap slipped from my hands.”
    (a) touch (b) hearing (c) taste
  20. 20.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ teddy bear sat on my bed.”
    (a) cuddly (b) fine (c) nice
  21. 21.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ soup filled our bowls.”
    (a) good (b) steaming (c) nice
  22. 22.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Sahil was really bored.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  23. 23.Which strong verb means “walked quietly on your toes”? (a) munched (b) scribbled (c) tiptoed
  24. 24.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Manav grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) cold (b) angry (c) happy
  25. 25.What makes the sound “sizzle”? (a) pakoras in hot oil (b) a horse (c) a lion
  26. 26.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My best friend is moving away,” ___ Tara.
    (a) giggled (b) sobbed (c) asked
  27. 27.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet, giggled Arjun. (b) “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet,” giggled Arjun. (c) “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet”, giggled Arjun.
  28. 28.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a giraffe”
    (a) round (b) short (c) tall
  29. 29.Which strong verb could replace “moved” in this sentence?
    “The baby moved across the carpet to her toy.”
    (a) sobbed (b) crawled (c) slammed
  30. 30.Which strong verb means “looked closely at something hard to see”? (a) leapt (b) peered (c) clutched
  31. 31.Which sense does this line use?
    “The lake sparkled under the full moon.”
    (a) smell (b) sight (c) taste
  32. 32.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour. (b) Rain drummed on the tin roof all night. (c) I looked at the white peak of the mountain.
  33. 33.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) slurp (b) yellow (c) quickly
  34. 34.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Farhan is bored? (a) Farhan was bored. (b) Farhan kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard. (c) Tears filled Farhan’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.
  35. 35.Which strong verb means “moved on hands and knees”? (a) crawled (b) glanced (c) clutched
  36. 36.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Dev ___ past his sleeping baby sister.”
    (a) walked (b) tiptoed (c) got
  37. 37.Which sense does this line use?
    “The crowd cheered loudly for our team.”
    (a) taste (b) hearing (c) sight
  38. 38.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The cat ___ quietly towards the pigeon.”
    (a) made (b) crept (c) went
  39. 39.Which strong verb could replace “shut” in this sentence?
    “Kabir shut the door when he was cross.”
    (a) glanced (b) raced (c) slammed
  40. 40.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Help, the boat is sinking!” shouted Farhan. (b) “Help, the boat is sinking” shouted Farhan. (c) “Help, the boat is sinking”! shouted Farhan.

Answer key

  1. shouted
  2. a comma (,)
  3. light
  4. cold
  5. a question mark (?)
  6. The kitten’s fur felt like silk.
  7. Maria’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.
  8. a comma (,)
  9. stared
  10. “Stop that runaway goat!” shouted Nisha.
  11. sleepy
  12. Vihaan sighed and flipped through the same comic again.
  13. tossed
  14. narrow
  15. leapt
  16. whispered
  17. a question mark (?)
  18. puffy
  19. touch
  20. cuddly
  21. steaming
  22. telling
  23. tiptoed
  24. happy
  25. pakoras in hot oil
  26. sobbed
  27. “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet,” giggled Arjun.
  28. tall
  29. crawled
  30. peered
  31. sight
  32. I looked at the white peak of the mountain.
  33. slurp
  34. Farhan kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.
  35. crawled
  36. tiptoed
  37. hearing
  38. crept
  39. slammed
  40. “Help, the boat is sinking!” shouted Farhan.

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