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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 584 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Vihaan is scared? (a) Vihaan was scared. (b) Vihaan hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (c) Vihaan’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.
  2. 2.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The bitter gourd tasted bitter. (b) The temple bells rang out loudly. (c) The new bicycle shone bright red.
  3. 3.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Meera ___ to the bus stop before it left.”
    (a) went (b) dashed (c) ran
  4. 4.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Neel is scared? (a) Neel was scared. (b) Neel’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again. (c) Neel’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.
  5. 5.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Rohan ___ crossly under his breath.”
    (a) spoke (b) made (c) muttered
  6. 6.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The old bread was as hard as a rock. (b) The train left the station at nine. (c) My little brother is a chatterbox.
  7. 7.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The shop sells pencils and erasers.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  8. 8.Which word fits the gap best?
    “How many stars are in the sky?” ___ Ishaan.
    (a) sobbed (b) giggled (c) asked
  9. 9.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) Lightning flashed across the night sky. (b) The temple bells rang out loudly. (c) The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink.
  10. 10.Which strong verb means “dived down suddenly”? (a) plunged (b) scribbled (c) fluttered
  11. 11.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Riya ___ a crunchy apple on the bus.”
    (a) went (b) ate (c) munched
  12. 12.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The shiny pebbles sparkled in the stream.”
    (a) shiny (b) pebbles (c) sparkled
  13. 13.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) tall (b) honk (c) yellow
  14. 14.What makes the sound “thud”? (a) a heavy bag falling (b) an owl (c) a camera
  15. 15.Which sense does this line use?
    “The sea tasted very salty.”
    (a) smell (b) taste (c) sight
  16. 16.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tara grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  17. 17.Which sense does this line use?
    “Lightning flashed across the night sky.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) sight
  18. 18.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Run, the bus is leaving!” ___ Diya.
    (a) shouted (b) whispered (c) giggled
  19. 19.Which strong verb could replace “cried” in this sentence?
    “The lost child cried until his mother found him.”
    (a) sobbed (b) crawled (c) nibbled
  20. 20.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ananya is scared? (a) Ananya’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists. (b) Ananya froze and held her breath as the floor creaked. (c) Ananya was scared.
  21. 21.Which sense does this line use?
    “The crowd cheered loudly for our team.”
    (a) touch (b) taste (c) hearing
  22. 22.What makes the sound “pop”? (a) a pig (b) a balloon (c) the wind
  23. 23.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ ant carried a crumb.”
    (a) fine (b) good (c) tiny
  24. 24.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ pond had lots of frogs.”
    (a) muddy (b) nice (c) okay
  25. 25.Which strong verb means “walked quietly on your toes”? (a) tiptoed (b) giggled (c) blazed
  26. 26.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I dropped my ice cream in the mud___” sobbed Aryan.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  27. 27.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Zoya’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  28. 28.Which sense does this line use?
    “Dad sniffed the milk to check if it was fresh.”
    (a) taste (b) hearing (c) smell
  29. 29.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The puppy gave a happy woof at the gate.”
    (a) woof (b) puppy (c) gate
  30. 30.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Your silly face makes me laugh,” ___ Tenzin.
    (a) sobbed (b) giggled (c) asked
  31. 31.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as glass”
    (a) muddy (b) clear (c) soft
  32. 32.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Catch the ball”! shouted Kabir. (b) “Catch the ball” shouted Kabir. (c) “Catch the ball!” shouted Kabir.
  33. 33.Which sense does this line use?
    “We heard the train whistle far away.”
    (a) sight (b) taste (c) hearing
  34. 34.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The lion let out a mighty roar.”
    (a) roar (b) lion (c) mighty
  35. 35.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ parcel arrived on my birthday.”
    (a) good (b) fine (c) mysterious
  36. 36.Which sense does this line use?
    “The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.”
    (a) taste (b) smell (c) sight
  37. 37.Which strong verb means “ate very fast and greedily”? (a) gobbled (b) shouted (c) peered
  38. 38.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Simran rubbed her eyes and nodded off on the sofa.”
    (a) happy (b) tired (c) sad
  39. 39.Which sense does this line use?
    “The earth smelled lovely after the first rain.”
    (a) hearing (b) touch (c) smell
  40. 40.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The crowd cheered loudly for our team. (b) Lightning flashed across the night sky. (c) The river water felt icy on my feet.

Answer key

  1. Vihaan’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.
  2. The temple bells rang out loudly.
  3. dashed
  4. Neel’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.
  5. muttered
  6. The old bread was as hard as a rock.
  7. neither
  8. asked
  9. Lightning flashed across the night sky.
  10. plunged
  11. munched
  12. shiny
  13. honk
  14. a heavy bag falling
  15. taste
  16. showing
  17. sight
  18. shouted
  19. sobbed
  20. Ananya froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.
  21. hearing
  22. a balloon
  23. tiny
  24. muddy
  25. tiptoed
  26. a comma (,)
  27. showing
  28. smell
  29. woof
  30. giggled
  31. clear
  32. “Catch the ball!” shouted Kabir.
  33. hearing
  34. roar
  35. mysterious
  36. taste
  37. gobbled
  38. tired
  39. smell
  40. The river water felt icy on my feet.

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