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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 588 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which strong verb means “spoke very softly”? (a) leapt (b) whispered (c) tumbled
  2. 2.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Yash is sad? (a) Yash sighed and flipped through the same comic again. (b) A tear rolled slowly down Yash’s cheek. (c) Yash was sad.
  3. 3.What makes the sound “clang”? (a) a steel plate falling (b) pakoras in hot oil (c) a sparrow
  4. 4.Which strong verb could replace “looked” in this sentence?
    “The children looked at the giant elephant in surprise.”
    (a) leapt (b) stared (c) tiptoed
  5. 5.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The medicine had a bitter taste. (b) A whiff of incense floated from the temple. (c) The new bicycle shone bright red.
  6. 6.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, the film is starting___” whispered Farhan.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)
  7. 7.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, the exam has begun___” whispered Yash.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  8. 8.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ lion dozed in the shade.”
    (a) nice (b) fine (c) sleepy
  9. 9.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The bowler ___ the ball towards the stumps.”
    (a) did (b) hurled (c) threw
  10. 10.What makes the sound “tick-tock”? (a) an owl (b) a clock (c) a sparrow
  11. 11.Which sense does this line use?
    “The kulfi tasted of cardamom and saffron.”
    (a) hearing (b) taste (c) sight
  12. 12.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Nisha was hungry.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  13. 13.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) gentle (b) pitter-patter (c) pencil
  14. 14.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “It rained all night in our town.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  15. 15.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The horse gave a neigh in the stable.”
    (a) neigh (b) stable (c) horse
  16. 16.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) Diyas twinkled on every windowsill. (b) I smelled fresh coriander at the vegetable stall. (c) I tasted the soup and added more salt.
  17. 17.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Nobody came to my party,” ___ Tara.
    (a) giggled (b) sobbed (c) asked
  18. 18.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The polished floor squeaked under my shoes.”
    (a) floor (b) polished (c) squeaked
  19. 19.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Rohan was sad.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  20. 20.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Manav’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  21. 21.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aisha was really bored.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  22. 22.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Diya shivered and stamped her feet in the snow.”
    (a) hungry (b) bored (c) cold
  23. 23.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) quickly (b) window (c) croak
  24. 24.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a lion”
    (a) soft (b) brave (c) slow
  25. 25.Which strong verb means “walked unsteadily, almost falling”? (a) plunged (b) staggered (c) whispered
  26. 26.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The hungry boy ___ all the samosas in a minute.”
    (a) gobbled (b) ate (c) came
  27. 27.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The rusty bus rattled down the road.”
    (a) rattled (b) bus (c) rusty
  28. 28.What makes the sound “neigh”? (a) a visitor at the door (b) a horse (c) an owl
  29. 29.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet” giggled Maria. (b) “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet,” giggled Maria. (c) Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet, giggled Maria.
  30. 30.Which strong verb means “moved slowly and quietly”? (a) sobbed (b) munched (c) crept
  31. 31.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Rohan shivered and stamped his feet in the snow.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  32. 32.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” asked Aisha. (b) “Can I have one more laddoo, please” asked Aisha. (c) Can I have one more laddoo, please? asked Aisha.
  33. 33.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Mum ___ softly so that she would not wake the baby.”
    (a) made (b) spoke (c) whispered
  34. 34.Which strong verb could replace “jumped” in this sentence?
    “The deer jumped over the fallen log.”
    (a) shouted (b) plunged (c) leapt
  35. 35.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Saanvi gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed her eyes shut.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  36. 36.Which sense does this line use?
    “Lightning flashed across the night sky.”
    (a) hearing (b) sight (c) taste
  37. 37.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The monkey ___ the banana from my hand.”
    (a) took (b) had (c) grabbed
  38. 38.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The golden sun rose over the hills.”
    (a) golden (b) rose (c) sun
  39. 39.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Pooja is angry? (a) Pooja was angry. (b) Pooja’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists. (c) Pooja’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door.
  40. 40.Which sense does this line use?
    “The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink.”
    (a) sight (b) hearing (c) smell

Answer key

  1. whispered
  2. A tear rolled slowly down Yash’s cheek.
  3. a steel plate falling
  4. stared
  5. The medicine had a bitter taste.
  6. a comma (,)
  7. a comma (,)
  8. sleepy
  9. hurled
  10. a clock
  11. taste
  12. telling
  13. pitter-patter
  14. neither
  15. neigh
  16. I tasted the soup and added more salt.
  17. sobbed
  18. polished
  19. telling
  20. showing
  21. telling
  22. cold
  23. croak
  24. brave
  25. staggered
  26. gobbled
  27. rusty
  28. a horse
  29. “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet,” giggled Maria.
  30. crept
  31. showing
  32. “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” asked Aisha.
  33. whispered
  34. leapt
  35. showing
  36. sight
  37. grabbed
  38. golden
  39. Pooja’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists.
  40. smell

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