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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 603 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.What makes the sound “achoo”? (a) a sneeze (b) a clock (c) a bee
  2. 2.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Hee hee, stop tickling me,” ___ Fatima.
    (a) asked (b) sobbed (c) giggled
  3. 3.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The crispy dosa crackled on the pan.”
    (a) crackled (b) dosa (c) crispy
  4. 4.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Tenzin is cold? (a) Tenzin was cold. (b) Tenzin gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut. (c) Tenzin rubbed his hands and blew on his fingers.
  5. 5.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The horse gave a ___ in the stable.”
    (a) roar (b) neigh (c) achoo
  6. 6.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Zoya is cold? (a) Zoya’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap. (b) Zoya was cold. (c) Zoya’s eyelids drooped, and she yawned again and again.
  7. 7.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The stale bread crumbled in my fingers.”
    (a) bread (b) stale (c) crumbled
  8. 8.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Maria was bored.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  9. 9.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The gloomy cave echoed with our voices.”
    (a) cave (b) echoed (c) gloomy
  10. 10.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The tired dog snored like a tractor. (b) Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers. (c) Grandpa reads the newspaper every day.
  11. 11.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) A whistle blew at the start of the race. (b) The river water felt icy on my feet. (c) The lemon juice tasted very sour.
  12. 12.What makes the sound “woof”? (a) a dog (b) a bee (c) a horse
  13. 13.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Nobody came to my party,” ___ Manav.
    (a) sobbed (b) asked (c) giggled
  14. 14.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “Ravi drank his lassi with a ___.”
    (a) oink (b) crackle (c) slurp
  15. 15.Which sense does this line use?
    “The clay cup felt hot in my hands.”
    (a) smell (b) sight (c) touch
  16. 16.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aarav grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  17. 17.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) We heard the train whistle far away. (b) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue. (c) The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek.
  18. 18.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The spiky cactus pricked my finger.”
    (a) pricked (b) spiky (c) cactus
  19. 19.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Rohan’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  20. 20.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Diya’s eyelids drooped, and she yawned again and again.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  21. 21.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The enormous elephant stomped across the river.”
    (a) elephant (b) enormous (c) stomped
  22. 22.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The playground was an oven in May. (b) Meera watered the plants in the morning. (c) The children chattered like a flock of parrots.
  23. 23.What makes the sound “pop”? (a) a jump into a pool (b) a balloon (c) a horse
  24. 24.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The snail felt slimy on my palm. (b) Colourful kites dotted the blue sky. (c) The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen.
  25. 25.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The train left the station at nine. (b) The road was as straight as a ruler. (c) The library is a treasure chest of stories.
  26. 26.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Joseph is happy? (a) Joseph was happy. (b) Joseph grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road. (c) Joseph gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut.
  27. 27.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aarav is angry? (a) A tear rolled slowly down Aarav’s cheek. (b) Aarav stamped his foot and slammed the door. (c) Aarav was angry.
  28. 28.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Our teacher is a fountain of ideas.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  29. 29.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Is it time for lunch yet? asked Yash. (b) “Is it time for lunch yet”? asked Yash. (c) “Is it time for lunch yet?” asked Yash.
  30. 30.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Why is the sky blue___” asked Tenzin.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  31. 31.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) river (b) click (c) garden
  32. 32.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Ishaan gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  33. 33.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “We walked home through the deep mud.”
    (a) scribbled (b) gobbled (c) trudged
  34. 34.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ishaan stamped his foot and slammed the door.”
    (a) angry (b) happy (c) hungry
  35. 35.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sour lemon made Riya pull a face.”
    (a) sour (b) pull (c) lemon
  36. 36.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The puppy’s nose was as cold as ice.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  37. 37.Which strong verb could replace “wrote” in this sentence?
    “Ishaan wrote a phone number on his hand.”
    (a) slammed (b) scribbled (c) strolled
  38. 38.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Tara is tired? (a) Tara rubbed her eyes and nodded off on the sofa. (b) Tara’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home. (c) Tara was tired.
  39. 39.Which strong verb could replace “went” in this sentence?
    “The cat went quietly towards the pigeon.”
    (a) crept (b) hurled (c) scribbled
  40. 40.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The steel plate hit the stone floor with a ___.”
    (a) croak (b) clang (c) meow

Answer key

  1. a sneeze
  2. giggled
  3. crispy
  4. Tenzin rubbed his hands and blew on his fingers.
  5. neigh
  6. Zoya’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap.
  7. stale
  8. telling
  9. gloomy
  10. The tired dog snored like a tractor.
  11. The lemon juice tasted very sour.
  12. a dog
  13. sobbed
  14. slurp
  15. touch
  16. showing
  17. The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek.
  18. spiky
  19. showing
  20. showing
  21. enormous
  22. The playground was an oven in May.
  23. a balloon
  24. The snail felt slimy on my palm.
  25. The library is a treasure chest of stories.
  26. Joseph grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.
  27. Aarav stamped his foot and slammed the door.
  28. metaphor
  29. “Is it time for lunch yet?” asked Yash.
  30. a question mark (?)
  31. click
  32. showing
  33. trudged
  34. angry
  35. sour
  36. simile
  37. scribbled
  38. Tara rubbed her eyes and nodded off on the sofa.
  39. crept
  40. clang

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