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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 614 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which strong verb means “walked around with no plan”? (a) slammed (b) wandered (c) tumbled
  2. 2.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The stars were diamonds in the night sky.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  3. 3.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The shimmering peacock spread its tail.”
    (a) shimmering (b) peacock (c) spread
  4. 4.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Meera ___ to the bus stop before it left.”
    (a) came (b) dashed (c) ran
  5. 5.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) garden (b) meow (c) teacher
  6. 6.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Where did you put my blue pencil” asked Imran. (b) “Where did you put my blue pencil?” asked Imran. (c) “Where did you put my blue pencil”? asked Imran.
  7. 7.What makes the sound “crunch”? (a) a crisp papad (b) a horse (c) a snake
  8. 8.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The squishy cushion sank under me.”
    (a) cushion (b) sank (c) squishy
  9. 9.What makes the sound “hoot”? (a) a sheep (b) an owl (c) thunder
  10. 10.Which strong verb could replace “flew” in this sentence?
    “A butterfly flew from flower to flower.”
    (a) raced (b) giggled (c) fluttered
  11. 11.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Let us keep the surprise a secret,” ___ Rohan.
    (a) asked (b) shouted (c) whispered
  12. 12.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Joseph is hungry? (a) Joseph licked his lips as the smell of dosas drifted in. (b) Joseph was hungry. (c) Joseph’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.
  13. 13.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) buzz (b) mango (c) teacher
  14. 14.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The wet soap slipped from my hands. (b) The scent of Grandma’s perfume filled the room. (c) I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row.
  15. 15.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake”, whispered Arjun. (b) “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake” whispered Arjun. (c) “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake,” whispered Arjun.
  16. 16.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Fatima drummed her fingers and stared at the clock.”
    (a) sad (b) hungry (c) bored
  17. 17.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The dog barked at the postman.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  18. 18.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Diya’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  19. 19.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Look out, the shelf is falling!” ___ Vihaan.
    (a) whispered (b) shouted (c) giggled
  20. 20.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Neel is hungry? (a) Neel hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (b) Neel was hungry. (c) Neel kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.
  21. 21.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Stop that runaway goat!” ___ Imran.
    (a) whispered (b) giggled (c) shouted
  22. 22.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) hoot (b) garden (c) window
  23. 23.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen. (b) The bees buzzed around the hive. (c) Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.
  24. 24.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I miss my grandma so much___” sobbed Riya.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  25. 25.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Kabir could barely keep his eyes open at dinner.”
    (a) tired (b) happy (c) scared
  26. 26.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The fluffy kitten curled up on my lap.”
    (a) fluffy (b) curled (c) kitten
  27. 27.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ lemon made Riya pull a face.”
    (a) nice (b) fine (c) sour
  28. 28.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The fog was a grey curtain over the town. (b) Dad’s voice boomed like thunder. (c) The dog barked at the postman.
  29. 29.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The cow gave a long moo from the shed.”
    (a) moo (b) shed (c) cow
  30. 30.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Help, the boat is sinking___” shouted Sneha.
    (a) an exclamation mark (!) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  31. 31.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Meera beamed and hugged everyone in sight.”
    (a) scared (b) happy (c) sad
  32. 32.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Can I have one more laddoo, please___” asked Dev.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  33. 33.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ market buzzed with voices.”
    (a) crowded (b) nice (c) fine
  34. 34.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “Dad gave a loud achoo in the dusty room.”
    (a) dusty (b) achoo (c) room
  35. 35.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Her bedroom is a pigsty.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  36. 36.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Where did you put my blue pencil?” ___ Farhan.
    (a) asked (b) sobbed (c) giggled
  37. 37.What makes the sound “tick-tock”? (a) a crisp papad (b) a car horn (c) a clock
  38. 38.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “My father bought a new umbrella.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  39. 39.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers. (b) The road was as straight as a ruler. (c) The baby slept in the afternoon.
  40. 40.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Sahil is tired? (a) Sahil’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door. (b) Sahil was tired. (c) Sahil rubbed his eyes and nodded off on the sofa.

Answer key

  1. wandered
  2. metaphor
  3. shimmering
  4. dashed
  5. meow
  6. “Where did you put my blue pencil?” asked Imran.
  7. a crisp papad
  8. squishy
  9. an owl
  10. fluttered
  11. whispered
  12. Joseph licked his lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.
  13. buzz
  14. The wet soap slipped from my hands.
  15. “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake,” whispered Arjun.
  16. bored
  17. neither
  18. showing
  19. shouted
  20. Neel kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.
  21. shouted
  22. hoot
  23. Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.
  24. a comma (,)
  25. tired
  26. fluffy
  27. sour
  28. Dad’s voice boomed like thunder.
  29. moo
  30. an exclamation mark (!)
  31. happy
  32. a question mark (?)
  33. crowded
  34. achoo
  35. metaphor
  36. asked
  37. a clock
  38. neither
  39. Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers.
  40. Sahil rubbed his eyes and nodded off on the sofa.

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