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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 617 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.What makes the sound “sizzle”? (a) pakoras in hot oil (b) a leaking tap (c) a clock
  2. 2.Which sense does this line use?
    “Colourful kites dotted the blue sky.”
    (a) sight (b) smell (c) touch
  3. 3.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a peacock”
    (a) humble (b) proud (c) shy
  4. 4.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a lion”
    (a) slow (b) brave (c) soft
  5. 5.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row. (b) The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek. (c) The baby giggled when Dad made funny noises.
  6. 6.Which strong verb could replace “cleaned” in this sentence?
    “Mum cleaned the muddy floor until it shone.”
    (a) fluttered (b) tumbled (c) scrubbed
  7. 7.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The ducks ___ noisily near the pond.”
    (a) croak (b) crunch (c) quack
  8. 8.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) slowly (b) teacher (c) oink
  9. 9.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Imran froze and held his breath as the floor creaked.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  10. 10.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The little lamb gave a soft ___.”
    (a) baa (b) meow (c) quack
  11. 11.Which strong verb means “took tiny little bites”? (a) leapt (b) whispered (c) nibbled
  12. 12.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “It rained all night in our town.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  13. 13.Which strong verb means “moved on hands and knees”? (a) stared (b) clutched (c) crawled
  14. 14.What makes the sound “woof”? (a) a microwave (b) a cat (c) a dog
  15. 15.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Help, the boat is sinking! shouted Ananya. (b) “Help, the boat is sinking”! shouted Ananya. (c) “Help, the boat is sinking!” shouted Ananya.
  16. 16.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “My father bought a new umbrella.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  17. 17.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “After the race, Kabir ___ a whole bottle of water.”
    (a) drank (b) had (c) gulped
  18. 18.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The monkey ___ the banana from my hand.”
    (a) took (b) went (c) grabbed
  19. 19.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Catch the ball! shouted Yash. (b) “Catch the ball!” shouted Yash. (c) “Catch the ball”! shouted Yash.
  20. 20.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aarav is angry? (a) Aarav was angry. (b) Aarav folded his arms and glared at his brother. (c) Aarav sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.
  21. 21.Which sense does this line use?
    “The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.”
    (a) taste (b) smell (c) touch
  22. 22.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Grandpa ___ through the park after dinner.”
    (a) walked (b) strolled (c) had
  23. 23.Which strong verb means “flapped its wings quickly and lightly”? (a) grabbed (b) fluttered (c) tossed
  24. 24.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a bee”
    (a) silent (b) lazy (c) busy
  25. 25.Which strong verb means “walked in a slow, relaxed way”? (a) hurled (b) gobbled (c) strolled
  26. 26.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Rohan is happy? (a) Rohan’s nose turned pink, and he pulled on a woolly cap. (b) Rohan was happy. (c) Rohan beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  27. 27.Which strong verb could replace “drank” in this sentence?
    “Grandma drank her hot tea slowly.”
    (a) sipped (b) soared (c) plunged
  28. 28.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The lost child ___ until his mother found him.”
    (a) went (b) sobbed (c) cried
  29. 29.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The old door creaked as it opened. (b) The bitter gourd tasted bitter. (c) The warm sand tickled my toes.
  30. 30.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as an ox”
    (a) strong (b) weak (c) tiny
  31. 31.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Joseph is cold? (a) Joseph could barely keep his eyes open at dinner. (b) Joseph was cold. (c) Joseph shivered and stamped his feet in the snow.
  32. 32.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Meera’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door.”
    (a) hungry (b) happy (c) scared
  33. 33.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Ha ha, the goat ate your hat,” ___ Zoya.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  34. 34.Which sense does this line use?
    “The fish market had a strong smell.”
    (a) taste (b) smell (c) hearing
  35. 35.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Come back here, Moti___” shouted Joseph.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) an exclamation mark (!)
  36. 36.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aisha licked her lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  37. 37.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The pressure cooker hissed three times. (b) The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen. (c) I felt the cool breeze on my face.
  38. 38.What makes the sound “croak”? (a) a car horn (b) a frog (c) a duck
  39. 39.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tears filled Ishaan’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  40. 40.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The dry logs crackle in the campfire.”
    (a) dry (b) logs (c) crackle

Answer key

  1. pakoras in hot oil
  2. sight
  3. proud
  4. brave
  5. I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row.
  6. scrubbed
  7. quack
  8. oink
  9. showing
  10. baa
  11. nibbled
  12. neither
  13. crawled
  14. a dog
  15. “Help, the boat is sinking!” shouted Ananya.
  16. neither
  17. gulped
  18. grabbed
  19. “Catch the ball!” shouted Yash.
  20. Aarav folded his arms and glared at his brother.
  21. taste
  22. strolled
  23. fluttered
  24. busy
  25. strolled
  26. Rohan beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  27. sipped
  28. sobbed
  29. The warm sand tickled my toes.
  30. strong
  31. Joseph shivered and stamped his feet in the snow.
  32. scared
  33. giggled
  34. smell
  35. an exclamation mark (!)
  36. showing
  37. The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen.
  38. a frog
  39. showing
  40. crackle

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