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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 621 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) knock (b) garden (c) table
  2. 2.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) We ate rice and dal for dinner. (b) Her hands were as cold as ice cubes. (c) The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang.
  3. 3.Which strong verb means “took hold of quickly and roughly”? (a) grabbed (b) shouted (c) trudged
  4. 4.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The stars were diamonds in the night sky.”
    (a) simile (b) neither (c) metaphor
  5. 5.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The clay cup felt hot in my hands. (b) The pressure cooker hissed three times. (c) The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet.
  6. 6.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aarav was scared.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  7. 7.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The hungry boy ___ all the samosas in a minute.”
    (a) gobbled (b) made (c) ate
  8. 8.Which sense does this line use?
    “The mint chutney tasted sour and salty.”
    (a) hearing (b) smell (c) taste
  9. 9.Which sense does this line use?
    “The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy.”
    (a) touch (b) taste (c) smell
  10. 10.Which sense does this line use?
    “The kulfi tasted of cardamom and saffron.”
    (a) touch (b) taste (c) smell
  11. 11.Which sense does this line use?
    “I smelled fresh coriander at the vegetable stall.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) hearing
  12. 12.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.”
    (a) smell (b) taste (c) sight
  13. 13.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Imran was really happy.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  14. 14.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) I saw a rainbow over the green fields. (b) The old door creaked as it opened. (c) The bitter gourd tasted bitter.
  15. 15.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tara’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap.”
    (a) sad (b) cold (c) tired
  16. 16.Which strong verb means “threw lightly”? (a) scribbled (b) glanced (c) tossed
  17. 17.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ quilt covered the bed.”
    (a) nice (b) good (c) patchwork
  18. 18.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tara was angry.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  19. 19.Which sense does this line use?
    “I heard waves crashing on the rocks.”
    (a) hearing (b) taste (c) touch
  20. 20.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy. (b) The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy. (c) I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row.
  21. 21.What makes the sound “clang”? (a) a lion (b) a steel plate falling (c) a cow
  22. 22.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a lion”
    (a) slow (b) soft (c) brave
  23. 23.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The rooster crowed cock-a-doodle-doo at dawn.”
    (a) dawn (b) rooster (c) cock-a-doodle-doo
  24. 24.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The snow was a white blanket on the hills.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  25. 25.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ananya is bored? (a) Ananya sighed and flipped through the same comic again. (b) Ananya folded her arms and glared at her brother. (c) Ananya was bored.
  26. 26.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My sandcastle got washed away,” ___ Tenzin.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  27. 27.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My goldfish has gone missing,” ___ Fatima.
    (a) sobbed (b) asked (c) giggled
  28. 28.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet,” ___ Nisha.
    (a) asked (b) sobbed (c) giggled
  29. 29.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) river (b) slowly (c) chirp
  30. 30.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) His heart was a drum during the race. (b) The children played cricket after school. (c) The children chattered like a flock of parrots.
  31. 31.What makes the sound “drip”? (a) a leaking tap (b) a steel plate falling (c) a sparrow
  32. 32.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “My sandcastle got washed away” sobbed Nisha. (b) “My sandcastle got washed away,” sobbed Nisha. (c) “My sandcastle got washed away”, sobbed Nisha.
  33. 33.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Watch out for that car!” ___ Dev.
    (a) giggled (b) whispered (c) shouted
  34. 34.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Grandpa ___ through the park after dinner.”
    (a) made (b) walked (c) strolled
  35. 35.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The children ___ at the giant elephant in surprise.”
    (a) stared (b) looked (c) came
  36. 36.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ car zoomed past us.”
    (a) sleek (b) okay (c) nice
  37. 37.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Sneha was cold.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  38. 38.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “We ___ home through the deep mud.”
    (a) walked (b) trudged (c) got
  39. 39.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The river was a silver ribbon in the valley.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  40. 40.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Stop that runaway goat!” ___ Ananya.
    (a) shouted (b) giggled (c) whispered

Answer key

  1. knock
  2. The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang.
  3. grabbed
  4. metaphor
  5. The pressure cooker hissed three times.
  6. telling
  7. gobbled
  8. taste
  9. taste
  10. taste
  11. smell
  12. smell
  13. telling
  14. I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  15. cold
  16. tossed
  17. patchwork
  18. telling
  19. hearing
  20. The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy.
  21. a steel plate falling
  22. brave
  23. cock-a-doodle-doo
  24. metaphor
  25. Ananya sighed and flipped through the same comic again.
  26. sobbed
  27. sobbed
  28. giggled
  29. chirp
  30. His heart was a drum during the race.
  31. a leaking tap
  32. “My sandcastle got washed away,” sobbed Nisha.
  33. shouted
  34. strolled
  35. stared
  36. sleek
  37. telling
  38. trudged
  39. metaphor
  40. shouted

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