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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 623 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.What makes the sound “sizzle”? (a) a bee (b) pakoras in hot oil (c) a snake
  2. 2.Which sense does this line use?
    “The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy.”
    (a) taste (b) hearing (c) sight
  3. 3.What makes the sound “honk”? (a) a cow (b) a campfire (c) a car horn
  4. 4.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Why is the sky blue?” ___ Vihaan.
    (a) sobbed (b) giggled (c) asked
  5. 5.Which strong verb could replace “put” in this sentence?
    “Nani put sugar over the hot pancakes.”
    (a) peered (b) hurled (c) sprinkled
  6. 6.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) teacher (b) pencil (c) clang
  7. 7.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The gloomy cave echoed with our voices.”
    (a) echoed (b) gloomy (c) cave
  8. 8.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Catch the ball___” shouted Diya.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) an exclamation mark (!) (c) a question mark (?)
  9. 9.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a tortoise”
    (a) slow (b) loud (c) fast
  10. 10.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The puppy gave a happy woof at the gate.”
    (a) woof (b) gate (c) puppy
  11. 11.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) teacher (b) river (c) moo
  12. 12.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Help, the boat is sinking!” ___ Nisha.
    (a) shouted (b) giggled (c) whispered
  13. 13.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock, giggled Zoya. (b) “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock,” giggled Zoya. (c) “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock” giggled Zoya.
  14. 14.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Our teacher is a fountain of ideas.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  15. 15.Which sense does this line use?
    “The sunset painted the sky orange and pink.”
    (a) touch (b) taste (c) sight
  16. 16.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Neel is tired? (a) Neel sighed and flipped through the same comic again. (b) Neel dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed. (c) Neel was tired.
  17. 17.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ dosa crackled on the pan.”
    (a) nice (b) fine (c) crispy
  18. 18.Which strong verb means “walked unsteadily, almost falling”? (a) scrubbed (b) staggered (c) peered
  19. 19.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Yash’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again.”
    (a) scared (b) cold (c) tired
  20. 20.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The clouds were cotton balls in the sky. (b) The cat sat on the warm mat. (c) The fireworks burst like giant flowers.
  21. 21.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ chilli made my eyes water.”
    (a) fiery (b) fine (c) nice
  22. 22.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) gentle (b) window (c) hoot
  23. 23.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “Grandpa walked through the park after dinner.”
    (a) whispered (b) fluttered (c) strolled
  24. 24.Which sense does this line use?
    “I heard waves crashing on the rocks.”
    (a) hearing (b) smell (c) touch
  25. 25.Which sense does this line use?
    “The earth smelled lovely after the first rain.”
    (a) hearing (b) smell (c) taste
  26. 26.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The fish market had a strong smell. (b) Lightning flashed across the night sky. (c) The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet.
  27. 27.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The shop sells pencils and erasers.”
    (a) simile (b) neither (c) metaphor
  28. 28.Which sentence is a simile? (a) My little brother is a chatterbox. (b) Kabir finished his homework early. (c) My little sister is as busy as a bee.
  29. 29.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The fireworks burst like giant flowers. (b) We planted a mango tree in the garden. (c) The old car was a tired donkey on the hill.
  30. 30.Which sense does this line use?
    “The mint chutney tasted sour and salty.”
    (a) taste (b) hearing (c) touch
  31. 31.Which sense does this line use?
    “The crowd cheered loudly for our team.”
    (a) hearing (b) sight (c) touch
  32. 32.Which sense does this line use?
    “The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) touch
  33. 33.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “My goldfish has gone missing___” sobbed Aryan.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  34. 34.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “My little brother is a chatterbox.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  35. 35.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ clouds floated across the sky.”
    (a) nice (b) puffy (c) fine
  36. 36.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ tree towered over the house.”
    (a) fine (b) gigantic (c) okay
  37. 37.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ananya is tired? (a) Ananya was tired. (b) Ananya rubbed her eyes and nodded off on the sofa. (c) Ananya’s heart thumped, and she hid under the sheet.
  38. 38.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The children chattered like a flock of parrots. (b) Grandpa reads the newspaper every day. (c) The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang.
  39. 39.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Nisha was scared.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  40. 40.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose___” giggled Tara.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)

Answer key

  1. pakoras in hot oil
  2. taste
  3. a car horn
  4. asked
  5. sprinkled
  6. clang
  7. gloomy
  8. an exclamation mark (!)
  9. slow
  10. woof
  11. moo
  12. shouted
  13. “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock,” giggled Zoya.
  14. metaphor
  15. sight
  16. Neel dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.
  17. crispy
  18. staggered
  19. tired
  20. The clouds were cotton balls in the sky.
  21. fiery
  22. hoot
  23. strolled
  24. hearing
  25. smell
  26. Lightning flashed across the night sky.
  27. neither
  28. My little sister is as busy as a bee.
  29. The old car was a tired donkey on the hill.
  30. taste
  31. hearing
  32. touch
  33. a comma (,)
  34. metaphor
  35. puffy
  36. gigantic
  37. Ananya rubbed her eyes and nodded off on the sofa.
  38. The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang.
  39. telling
  40. a comma (,)

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