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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 637 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ cave echoed with our voices.”
    (a) okay (b) nice (c) gloomy
  2. 2.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “I miss my grandma so much”, sobbed Sahil. (b) I miss my grandma so much, sobbed Sahil. (c) “I miss my grandma so much,” sobbed Sahil.
  3. 3.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The booming thunder shook the windows.”
    (a) thunder (b) booming (c) shook
  4. 4.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ car zoomed past us.”
    (a) nice (b) sleek (c) good
  5. 5.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Nobody came to my party___” sobbed Priya.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  6. 6.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The new bicycle shone bright red. (b) The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour. (c) The snail felt slimy on my palm.
  7. 7.Which sense does this line use?
    “The fragrance of roses drifted through the window.”
    (a) sight (b) hearing (c) smell
  8. 8.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Let us keep the surprise a secret,” ___ Priya.
    (a) asked (b) shouted (c) whispered
  9. 9.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Ha ha, the goat ate your hat___” giggled Simran.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  10. 10.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Nobody came to my party,” sobbed Aisha. (b) “Nobody came to my party”, sobbed Aisha. (c) Nobody came to my party, sobbed Aisha.
  11. 11.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The bonfire ___ on Lohri night.”
    (a) got (b) burned (c) blazed
  12. 12.Which strong verb could replace “flew” in this sentence?
    “A butterfly flew from flower to flower.”
    (a) munched (b) fluttered (c) shouted
  13. 13.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Stop that runaway goat”! shouted Joseph. (b) “Stop that runaway goat!” shouted Joseph. (c) “Stop that runaway goat” shouted Joseph.
  14. 14.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as ice”
    (a) cold (b) loud (c) hot
  15. 15.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as snow”
    (a) noisy (b) black (c) white
  16. 16.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet___” giggled Simran.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  17. 17.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Where did you put my blue pencil?” asked Riya. (b) “Where did you put my blue pencil” asked Riya. (c) “Where did you put my blue pencil”? asked Riya.
  18. 18.Which sense does this line use?
    “The pressure cooker hissed three times.”
    (a) sight (b) taste (c) hearing
  19. 19.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ kitten curled up on my lap.”
    (a) okay (b) fluffy (c) fine
  20. 20.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Nisha hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  21. 21.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I dropped my ice cream in the mud___” sobbed Nisha.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  22. 22.Which strong verb means “walked around with no plan”? (a) wandered (b) gobbled (c) nibbled
  23. 23.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tara rubbed her eyes and nodded off on the sofa.”
    (a) sad (b) bored (c) tired
  24. 24.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap___” whispered Joseph.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  25. 25.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck. (b) Diyas twinkled on every windowsill. (c) The thunder crashed and roared.
  26. 26.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “A butterfly ___ from flower to flower.”
    (a) fluttered (b) came (c) flew
  27. 27.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The glue felt sticky between my fingers. (b) The baby giggled when Dad made funny noises. (c) The kulfi tasted of cardamom and saffron.
  28. 28.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The pigs ___ in the muddy farmyard.”
    (a) achoo (b) oink (c) thud
  29. 29.Which strong verb means “wrote quickly and untidily”? (a) whispered (b) muttered (c) scribbled
  30. 30.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The lion let out a mighty roar.”
    (a) roar (b) mighty (c) lion
  31. 31.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen.”
    (a) hearing (b) sight (c) smell
  32. 32.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “Dad gave a loud achoo in the dusty room.”
    (a) room (b) achoo (c) dusty
  33. 33.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Nisha threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!””
    (a) bored (b) cold (c) angry
  34. 34.Which sense does this line use?
    “The warm sand tickled my toes.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) touch
  35. 35.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Who painted this lovely picture?” ___ Simran.
    (a) sobbed (b) giggled (c) asked
  36. 36.Which sense does this line use?
    “The scent of Grandma’s perfume filled the room.”
    (a) smell (b) sight (c) taste
  37. 37.Which sense does this line use?
    “The medicine had a bitter taste.”
    (a) taste (b) hearing (c) sight
  38. 38.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Priya is scared? (a) Priya was scared. (b) Priya’s heart thumped, and she hid under the sheet. (c) Priya sighed and flipped through the same comic again.
  39. 39.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ peacock spread its tail.”
    (a) shimmering (b) nice (c) good
  40. 40.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet, giggled Meera. (b) “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet,” giggled Meera. (c) “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet”, giggled Meera.

Answer key

  1. gloomy
  2. “I miss my grandma so much,” sobbed Sahil.
  3. booming
  4. sleek
  5. a comma (,)
  6. The snail felt slimy on my palm.
  7. smell
  8. whispered
  9. a comma (,)
  10. “Nobody came to my party,” sobbed Aisha.
  11. blazed
  12. fluttered
  13. “Stop that runaway goat!” shouted Joseph.
  14. cold
  15. white
  16. a comma (,)
  17. “Where did you put my blue pencil?” asked Riya.
  18. hearing
  19. fluffy
  20. showing
  21. a comma (,)
  22. wandered
  23. tired
  24. a comma (,)
  25. Diyas twinkled on every windowsill.
  26. fluttered
  27. The kulfi tasted of cardamom and saffron.
  28. oink
  29. scribbled
  30. roar
  31. smell
  32. achoo
  33. angry
  34. touch
  35. asked
  36. smell
  37. taste
  38. Priya’s heart thumped, and she hid under the sheet.
  39. shimmering
  40. “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet,” giggled Meera.

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