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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 64 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sense does this line use?
    “The fish market had a strong smell.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) touch
  2. 2.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) A whistle blew at the start of the race. (b) The golden sand glittered in the sun. (c) The wet soap slipped from my hands.
  3. 3.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The rooster crowed cock-a-doodle-doo at dawn.”
    (a) rooster (b) dawn (c) cock-a-doodle-doo
  4. 4.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Rohan ___ crossly under his breath.”
    (a) came (b) spoke (c) muttered
  5. 5.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The medicine had a bitter taste. (b) The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek. (c) Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.
  6. 6.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour. (b) The tree bark felt rough under my fingers. (c) The golden sand glittered in the sun.
  7. 7.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The puppy gave a happy woof at the gate.”
    (a) puppy (b) gate (c) woof
  8. 8.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The girls ___ at the funny cartoon.”
    (a) laughed (b) giggled (c) did
  9. 9.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sour lemon made Riya pull a face.”
    (a) lemon (b) sour (c) pull
  10. 10.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Priya’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home.”
    (a) cold (b) sad (c) tired
  11. 11.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a giraffe”
    (a) short (b) round (c) tall
  12. 12.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) roar (b) window (c) river
  13. 13.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Is it time for lunch yet?” ___ Fatima.
    (a) asked (b) sobbed (c) giggled
  14. 14.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The playground was an oven in May.”
    (a) simile (b) neither (c) metaphor
  15. 15.What makes the sound “quack”? (a) a sparrow (b) a pig (c) a duck
  16. 16.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “We planted a mango tree in the garden.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  17. 17.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ ant carried a crumb.”
    (a) good (b) fine (c) tiny
  18. 18.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Fatima is angry? (a) Fatima’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists. (b) Fatima was angry. (c) Fatima rubbed her eyes and nodded off on the sofa.
  19. 19.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The children played cricket after school. (b) The elephant moved like a slow grey hill. (c) Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers.
  20. 20.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Kabir ___ the door when he was cross.”
    (a) shut (b) went (c) slammed
  21. 21.Which sense does this line use?
    “The golden sand glittered in the sun.”
    (a) sight (b) hearing (c) smell
  22. 22.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The puppy’s nose was as cold as ice. (b) My father bought a new umbrella. (c) Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers.
  23. 23.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Manav is happy? (a) Manav was happy. (b) Manav dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed. (c) Manav beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  24. 24.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Zoya is hungry? (a) Zoya drummed her fingers and stared at the clock. (b) Zoya was hungry. (c) Zoya kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.
  25. 25.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “We ate rice and dal for dinner.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  26. 26.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake___” whispered Tenzin.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  27. 27.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue. (b) We watched the peacock open its blue tail. (c) I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden.
  28. 28.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ kitten curled up on my lap.”
    (a) fluffy (b) okay (c) fine
  29. 29.Which strong verb could replace “shut” in this sentence?
    “Kabir shut the door when he was cross.”
    (a) strolled (b) trudged (c) slammed
  30. 30.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The clouds were cotton balls in the sky. (b) The dog barked at the postman. (c) The lake shone like a mirror in the sun.
  31. 31.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Dev was really scared.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  32. 32.Which strong verb means “burned brightly and fiercely”? (a) blazed (b) clutched (c) muttered
  33. 33.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Help, the boat is sinking! shouted Simran. (b) “Help, the boat is sinking”! shouted Simran. (c) “Help, the boat is sinking!” shouted Simran.
  34. 34.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ cave echoed with our voices.”
    (a) nice (b) gloomy (c) fine
  35. 35.Which strong verb could replace “moved” in this sentence?
    “The baby moved across the carpet to her toy.”
    (a) crawled (b) tumbled (c) scrubbed
  36. 36.Which sense does this line use?
    “The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy.”
    (a) sight (b) hearing (c) touch
  37. 37.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The traffic jam was a long metal snake.”
    (a) simile (b) neither (c) metaphor
  38. 38.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The blooming garden smelled of roses.”
    (a) garden (b) smelled (c) blooming
  39. 39.Which strong verb means “drank in tiny mouthfuls”? (a) dashed (b) scrubbed (c) sipped
  40. 40.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink. (b) Lightning flashed across the night sky. (c) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.

Answer key

  1. smell
  2. The golden sand glittered in the sun.
  3. cock-a-doodle-doo
  4. muttered
  5. Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.
  6. The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour.
  7. woof
  8. giggled
  9. sour
  10. sad
  11. tall
  12. roar
  13. asked
  14. metaphor
  15. a duck
  16. neither
  17. tiny
  18. Fatima’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists.
  19. The elephant moved like a slow grey hill.
  20. slammed
  21. sight
  22. Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers.
  23. Manav beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  24. Zoya kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.
  25. neither
  26. a comma (,)
  27. The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.
  28. fluffy
  29. slammed
  30. The lake shone like a mirror in the sun.
  31. telling
  32. blazed
  33. “Help, the boat is sinking!” shouted Simran.
  34. gloomy
  35. crawled
  36. touch
  37. metaphor
  38. blooming
  39. sipped
  40. Lightning flashed across the night sky.

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