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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 642 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “A butterfly ___ from flower to flower.”
    (a) flew (b) fluttered (c) did
  2. 2.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ clouds floated across the sky.”
    (a) puffy (b) nice (c) okay
  3. 3.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Farhan is scared? (a) Farhan was scared. (b) Farhan laughed, clapped and twirled around the room. (c) Farhan’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.
  4. 4.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as grass”
    (a) loud (b) red (c) green
  5. 5.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) Colourful kites dotted the blue sky. (b) The kulfi tasted of cardamom and saffron. (c) We heard the train whistle far away.
  6. 6.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Fatima is bored? (a) Fatima was bored. (b) Fatima counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time. (c) Fatima beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  7. 7.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Hee hee, that clown has a red nose, giggled Yash. (b) “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose” giggled Yash. (c) “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose,” giggled Yash.
  8. 8.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The tired runner ___ over the finish line.”
    (a) walked (b) staggered (c) made
  9. 9.Which sense does this line use?
    “The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek.”
    (a) smell (b) touch (c) hearing
  10. 10.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose,” ___ Sahil.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  11. 11.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The bees buzzed around the hive. (b) I saw a rainbow over the green fields. (c) The smell of toast drifted up the stairs.
  12. 12.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Priya is cold? (a) Priya laughed, clapped and twirled around the room. (b) Priya rubbed her hands and blew on her fingers. (c) Priya was cold.
  13. 13.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Grandma ___ her hot tea slowly.”
    (a) drank (b) came (c) sipped
  14. 14.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Who painted this lovely picture? asked Riya. (b) “Who painted this lovely picture?” asked Riya. (c) “Who painted this lovely picture” asked Riya.
  15. 15.Which sense does this line use?
    “The snail felt slimy on my palm.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) taste
  16. 16.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ road twisted up the mountain.”
    (a) okay (b) nice (c) narrow
  17. 17.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Dev folded his arms and glared at his brother.”
    (a) angry (b) sad (c) tired
  18. 18.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Fatima felt very cold.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  19. 19.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Watch out for that car!” ___ Aryan.
    (a) giggled (b) whispered (c) shouted
  20. 20.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The cow gave a long moo from the shed.”
    (a) shed (b) moo (c) cow
  21. 21.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The fireworks burst like giant flowers. (b) It rained all night in our town. (c) The playground was an oven in May.
  22. 22.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The scissors went ___ as Mum cut the thread.”
    (a) snip (b) roar (c) sizzle
  23. 23.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) pencil (b) woof (c) window
  24. 24.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The stale bread crumbled in my fingers.”
    (a) bread (b) stale (c) crumbled
  25. 25.Which strong verb means “moved very fast to win”? (a) slammed (b) clutched (c) raced
  26. 26.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The mouse ___ the corner of the cheese.”
    (a) nibbled (b) ate (c) had
  27. 27.Which strong verb could replace “looked” in this sentence?
    “Tara looked into the dark cupboard for her shoes.”
    (a) peered (b) dashed (c) hurled
  28. 28.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) slowly (b) pencil (c) snip
  29. 29.Which sense does this line use?
    “The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy.”
    (a) sight (b) taste (c) smell
  30. 30.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Grandpa reads the newspaper every day. (b) The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang. (c) The old bread was as hard as a rock.
  31. 31.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Is it time for lunch yet___” asked Kabir.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  32. 32.Which sense does this line use?
    “I heard waves crashing on the rocks.”
    (a) touch (b) hearing (c) sight
  33. 33.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour. (b) The pressure cooker hissed three times. (c) I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  34. 34.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “That joke is so funny,” giggled Meera. (b) That joke is so funny, giggled Meera. (c) “That joke is so funny” giggled Meera.
  35. 35.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ baby giggled in the cot.”
    (a) okay (b) chubby (c) nice
  36. 36.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) smell
  37. 37.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The ducks ___ noisily near the pond.”
    (a) pop (b) quack (c) baa
  38. 38.Which sense does this line use?
    “The warm sand tickled my toes.”
    (a) sight (b) taste (c) touch
  39. 39.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The shop sells pencils and erasers. (b) The fireworks burst like giant flowers. (c) The snow was a white blanket on the hills.
  40. 40.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) gentle (b) garden (c) croak

Answer key

  1. fluttered
  2. puffy
  3. Farhan’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.
  4. green
  5. Colourful kites dotted the blue sky.
  6. Fatima counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.
  7. “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose,” giggled Yash.
  8. staggered
  9. touch
  10. giggled
  11. The smell of toast drifted up the stairs.
  12. Priya rubbed her hands and blew on her fingers.
  13. sipped
  14. “Who painted this lovely picture?” asked Riya.
  15. touch
  16. narrow
  17. angry
  18. telling
  19. shouted
  20. moo
  21. The playground was an oven in May.
  22. snip
  23. woof
  24. stale
  25. raced
  26. nibbled
  27. peered
  28. snip
  29. taste
  30. The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang.
  31. a question mark (?)
  32. hearing
  33. The pressure cooker hissed three times.
  34. “That joke is so funny,” giggled Meera.
  35. chubby
  36. smell
  37. quack
  38. touch
  39. The fireworks burst like giant flowers.
  40. croak

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