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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 657 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Zoya is tired? (a) Zoya’s eyelids drooped, and she yawned again and again. (b) Tears filled Zoya’s eyes, and she stared at the floor. (c) Zoya was tired.
  2. 2.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The wet soap slipped from my hands. (b) The new bicycle shone bright red. (c) A whiff of incense floated from the temple.
  3. 3.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ tree towered over the house.”
    (a) okay (b) gigantic (c) nice
  4. 4.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The polished floor squeaked under my shoes.”
    (a) squeaked (b) floor (c) polished
  5. 5.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Vihaan grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) sad (b) happy (c) bored
  6. 6.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) crunch (b) mango (c) kind
  7. 7.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Riya is hungry? (a) Riya stamped her foot and slammed the door. (b) Riya was hungry. (c) Riya’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.
  8. 8.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Grab the rope!” ___ Aryan.
    (a) whispered (b) shouted (c) giggled
  9. 9.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) We ate rice and dal for dinner. (b) Her smile was as bright as the sun. (c) The lake was a mirror for the mountains.
  10. 10.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The cheeky monkey stole Grandpa’s cap.”
    (a) stole (b) cheeky (c) monkey
  11. 11.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a pancake”
    (a) tall (b) round (c) flat
  12. 12.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The tree bark felt rough under my fingers. (b) The old door creaked as it opened. (c) I looked at the white peak of the mountain.
  13. 13.Which strong verb could replace “spoke” in this sentence?
    “Mum spoke softly so that she would not wake the baby.”
    (a) sipped (b) whispered (c) stared
  14. 14.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The tiny ant carried a crumb.”
    (a) carried (b) ant (c) tiny
  15. 15.Which strong verb could replace “ate” in this sentence?
    “The hungry boy ate all the samosas in a minute.”
    (a) peered (b) dashed (c) gobbled
  16. 16.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Tara is tired? (a) Tara beamed and hugged everyone in sight. (b) Tara could barely keep her eyes open at dinner. (c) Tara was tired.
  17. 17.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Aryan dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.”
    (a) tired (b) sad (c) scared
  18. 18.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Meera’s eyelids drooped, and she yawned again and again.”
    (a) tired (b) happy (c) bored
  19. 19.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The leaking tap went ___ in the dark.”
    (a) slurp (b) click (c) drip
  20. 20.Which strong verb could replace “wrote” in this sentence?
    “Ishaan wrote a phone number on his hand.”
    (a) scribbled (b) slammed (c) tiptoed
  21. 21.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The snake gave an angry ___ and slid away.”
    (a) hiss (b) oink (c) crackle
  22. 22.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “My goldfish has gone missing” sobbed Pooja. (b) My goldfish has gone missing, sobbed Pooja. (c) “My goldfish has gone missing,” sobbed Pooja.
  23. 23.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Arjun is hungry? (a) Arjun was hungry. (b) Arjun kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard. (c) Arjun licked his lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.
  24. 24.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ lake reflected the hills.”
    (a) glassy (b) okay (c) good
  25. 25.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “I bit the crisp papad with a crunch.”
    (a) papad (b) crisp (c) crunch
  26. 26.Which strong verb means “moved on hands and knees”? (a) grabbed (b) crawled (c) nibbled
  27. 27.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The squishy cushion sank under me.”
    (a) sank (b) cushion (c) squishy
  28. 28.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The dry logs ___ in the campfire.”
    (a) neigh (b) crackle (c) whoosh
  29. 29.Which strong verb could replace “ran” in this sentence?
    “The two friends ran to the gate to see who was fastest.”
    (a) raced (b) sprinkled (c) whispered
  30. 30.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sticky jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) jalebis (b) sticky (c) dripped
  31. 31.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) table (b) green (c) chirp
  32. 32.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as snow”
    (a) white (b) black (c) noisy
  33. 33.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The feathery grass tickled my feet.”
    (a) grass (b) tickled (c) feathery
  34. 34.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ chilli made my eyes water.”
    (a) okay (b) nice (c) fiery
  35. 35.Which strong verb could replace “fell” in this sentence?
    “The oranges fell out of the bag and down the steps.”
    (a) staggered (b) dashed (c) tumbled
  36. 36.Which strong verb means “ran very fast”? (a) dashed (b) tumbled (c) fluttered
  37. 37.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ puppy chewed my slipper.”
    (a) okay (b) good (c) naughty
  38. 38.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Diya licked her lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  39. 39.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Saanvi laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.”
    (a) angry (b) bored (c) happy
  40. 40.What makes the sound “pop”? (a) a camera (b) a balloon (c) a bee

Answer key

  1. Zoya’s eyelids drooped, and she yawned again and again.
  2. The wet soap slipped from my hands.
  3. gigantic
  4. polished
  5. happy
  6. crunch
  7. Riya’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.
  8. shouted
  9. The lake was a mirror for the mountains.
  10. cheeky
  11. flat
  12. I looked at the white peak of the mountain.
  13. whispered
  14. tiny
  15. gobbled
  16. Tara could barely keep her eyes open at dinner.
  17. tired
  18. tired
  19. drip
  20. scribbled
  21. hiss
  22. “My goldfish has gone missing,” sobbed Pooja.
  23. Arjun licked his lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.
  24. glassy
  25. crunch
  26. crawled
  27. squishy
  28. crackle
  29. raced
  30. sticky
  31. chirp
  32. white
  33. feathery
  34. fiery
  35. tumbled
  36. dashed
  37. naughty
  38. showing
  39. happy
  40. a balloon

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