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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 682 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The children played cricket after school. (b) The new shoes shone like stars. (c) The moon was a silver plate in the sky.
  2. 2.Which strong verb could replace “shut” in this sentence?
    “Kabir shut the door when he was cross.”
    (a) slammed (b) munched (c) plunged
  3. 3.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “Dev walked past his sleeping baby sister.”
    (a) tiptoed (b) fluttered (c) hurled
  4. 4.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The leaking tap went ___ in the dark.”
    (a) snip (b) drip (c) cock-a-doodle-doo
  5. 5.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Sahil hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  6. 6.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Riya grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  7. 7.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Grandma ___ her hot tea slowly.”
    (a) went (b) sipped (c) drank
  8. 8.Which sense does this line use?
    “A whiff of incense floated from the temple.”
    (a) taste (b) touch (c) smell
  9. 9.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Manav was really cold.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  10. 10.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The train left the station at nine.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  11. 11.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ thunder shook the windows.”
    (a) nice (b) good (c) booming
  12. 12.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The spiky cactus pricked my finger.”
    (a) pricked (b) cactus (c) spiky
  13. 13.Which strong verb means “drank in tiny mouthfuls”? (a) sipped (b) soared (c) muttered
  14. 14.What makes the sound “moo”? (a) a duck (b) the wind (c) a cow
  15. 15.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) drip (b) river (c) teacher
  16. 16.Which strong verb means “ate very fast and greedily”? (a) gobbled (b) leapt (c) crawled
  17. 17.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Grandpa ___ through the park after dinner.”
    (a) did (b) walked (c) strolled
  18. 18.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink. (b) We heard the train whistle far away. (c) I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  19. 19.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The elephant moved like a slow grey hill. (b) The moon was a silver plate in the sky. (c) We planted a mango tree in the garden.
  20. 20.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The scissors went ___ as Mum cut the thread.”
    (a) snip (b) meow (c) click
  21. 21.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The children ___ at the giant elephant in surprise.”
    (a) did (b) stared (c) looked
  22. 22.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The striped snake slid under the rock.”
    (a) striped (b) slid (c) snake
  23. 23.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Who painted this lovely picture?” ___ Simran.
    (a) sobbed (b) asked (c) giggled
  24. 24.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ giant snored under the tree.”
    (a) okay (b) fine (c) grumpy
  25. 25.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Stop that runaway goat___” shouted Arjun.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) an exclamation mark (!) (c) a question mark (?)
  26. 26.Which sense does this line use?
    “I tasted the soup and added more salt.”
    (a) touch (b) taste (c) sight
  27. 27.Which sense does this line use?
    “The lemon juice tasted very sour.”
    (a) taste (b) touch (c) sight
  28. 28.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Meera was really bored.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  29. 29.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The pakoras ___ in the hot oil.”
    (a) vroom (b) sizzle (c) thud
  30. 30.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ soup filled our bowls.”
    (a) okay (b) steaming (c) fine
  31. 31.What makes the sound “splash”? (a) a jump into a pool (b) an owl (c) a car horn
  32. 32.Which strong verb could replace “cleaned” in this sentence?
    “Mum cleaned the muddy floor until it shone.”
    (a) stared (b) scrubbed (c) fluttered
  33. 33.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) nice (b) okay (c) sticky
  34. 34.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I miss my grandma so much___” sobbed Kabir.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)
  35. 35.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The diver ___ into the deep pool.”
    (a) fell (b) plunged (c) got
  36. 36.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The shop sells pencils and erasers.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  37. 37.Which strong verb means “took a very quick look”? (a) leapt (b) sipped (c) glanced
  38. 38.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Meera sighed and flipped through the same comic again.”
    (a) bored (b) happy (c) cold
  39. 39.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The children jumped into the pool with a ___.”
    (a) splash (b) quack (c) thud
  40. 40.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) pencil (b) boom (c) teacher

Answer key

  1. The new shoes shone like stars.
  2. slammed
  3. tiptoed
  4. drip
  5. showing
  6. showing
  7. sipped
  8. smell
  9. telling
  10. neither
  11. booming
  12. spiky
  13. sipped
  14. a cow
  15. drip
  16. gobbled
  17. strolled
  18. I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  19. The elephant moved like a slow grey hill.
  20. snip
  21. stared
  22. striped
  23. asked
  24. grumpy
  25. an exclamation mark (!)
  26. taste
  27. taste
  28. telling
  29. sizzle
  30. steaming
  31. a jump into a pool
  32. scrubbed
  33. sticky
  34. a comma (,)
  35. plunged
  36. neither
  37. glanced
  38. bored
  39. splash
  40. boom

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