← Practice: vivid writing lesson New set →

Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 694 · 40 questions
TalentJR

Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

NameDateTime takenScore ___ / 40
  1. 1.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Kavya’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists.”
    (a) angry (b) sad (c) cold
  2. 2.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) My kite is torn to pieces, sobbed Rohan. (b) “My kite is torn to pieces,” sobbed Rohan. (c) “My kite is torn to pieces”, sobbed Rohan.
  3. 3.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The taxis ___ in the busy street.”
    (a) pitter-patter (b) honk (c) tick-tock
  4. 4.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap, whispered Vihaan. (b) “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap,” whispered Vihaan. (c) “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap” whispered Vihaan.
  5. 5.Which sense does this line use?
    “The temple bells rang out loudly.”
    (a) hearing (b) sight (c) touch
  6. 6.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Yash is sad? (a) A tear rolled slowly down Yash’s cheek. (b) Yash kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard. (c) Yash was sad.
  7. 7.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Imran beamed and hugged everyone in sight.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  8. 8.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The kulfi tasted of cardamom and saffron. (b) The fragrance of roses drifted through the window. (c) The lake sparkled under the full moon.
  9. 9.What makes the sound “quack”? (a) a car horn (b) a duck (c) a noisy drinker
  10. 10.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The old bread was as hard as a rock. (b) The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang. (c) The children played cricket after school.
  11. 11.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “How many stars are in the sky___” asked Yash.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  12. 12.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “Dev walked past his sleeping baby sister.”
    (a) tiptoed (b) grabbed (c) blazed
  13. 13.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The puppy’s nose was as cold as ice. (b) We ate rice and dal for dinner. (c) The sun was a golden ball of fire.
  14. 14.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The oranges ___ out of the bag and down the steps.”
    (a) fell (b) got (c) tumbled
  15. 15.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Where did you put my blue pencil?” ___ Vihaan.
    (a) sobbed (b) giggled (c) asked
  16. 16.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The pigs ___ in the muddy farmyard.”
    (a) oink (b) buzz (c) hiss
  17. 17.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The children jumped into the pool with a splash.”
    (a) splash (b) pool (c) children
  18. 18.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ soup filled our bowls.”
    (a) steaming (b) okay (c) good
  19. 19.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I have lost my favourite teddy___” sobbed Fatima.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  20. 20.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kavya is scared? (a) Kavya was scared. (b) Kavya gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed her eyes shut. (c) Kavya could barely keep her eyes open at dinner.
  21. 21.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Shh, the baby is sleeping, whispered Nisha. (b) “Shh, the baby is sleeping” whispered Nisha. (c) “Shh, the baby is sleeping,” whispered Nisha.
  22. 22.Which sense does this line use?
    “The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink.”
    (a) hearing (b) touch (c) smell
  23. 23.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) How many stars are in the sky? asked Nisha. (b) “How many stars are in the sky” asked Nisha. (c) “How many stars are in the sky?” asked Nisha.
  24. 24.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Saanvi is happy? (a) Saanvi rubbed her eyes and nodded off on the sofa. (b) Saanvi beamed and hugged everyone in sight. (c) Saanvi was happy.
  25. 25.Which strong verb means “cleaned by rubbing hard”? (a) scrubbed (b) sobbed (c) crept
  26. 26.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The fireworks burst like giant flowers. (b) The river was a silver ribbon in the valley. (c) We planted a mango tree in the garden.
  27. 27.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “Ravi drank his lassi with a ___.”
    (a) meow (b) slurp (c) baa
  28. 28.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “We planted a mango tree in the garden.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  29. 29.Which strong verb means “laughed in a light, silly way”? (a) scrubbed (b) giggled (c) dashed
  30. 30.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aryan was really scared.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  31. 31.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The river water felt icy on my feet. (b) The lake sparkled under the full moon. (c) The lemon juice tasted very sour.
  32. 32.Which sense does this line use?
    “The fish market had a strong smell.”
    (a) taste (b) smell (c) sight
  33. 33.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The frogs croak all night in the monsoon.”
    (a) frogs (b) croak (c) monsoon
  34. 34.Which sense does this line use?
    “The medicine had a bitter taste.”
    (a) sight (b) taste (c) hearing
  35. 35.Which strong verb means “walked unsteadily, almost falling”? (a) stared (b) staggered (c) peered
  36. 36.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark. (b) The pressure cooker hissed three times. (c) The clay cup felt hot in my hands.
  37. 37.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ quilt covered the bed.”
    (a) patchwork (b) nice (c) okay
  38. 38.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as an owl”
    (a) foolish (b) silly (c) wise
  39. 39.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The sea tasted very salty. (b) The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen. (c) The crowd cheered loudly for our team.
  40. 40.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The dazzling fireworks lit up the sky.”
    (a) dazzling (b) fireworks (c) lit

Answer key

  1. angry
  2. “My kite is torn to pieces,” sobbed Rohan.
  3. honk
  4. “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap,” whispered Vihaan.
  5. hearing
  6. A tear rolled slowly down Yash’s cheek.
  7. showing
  8. The fragrance of roses drifted through the window.
  9. a duck
  10. The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang.
  11. a question mark (?)
  12. tiptoed
  13. The sun was a golden ball of fire.
  14. tumbled
  15. asked
  16. oink
  17. splash
  18. steaming
  19. a comma (,)
  20. Kavya gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed her eyes shut.
  21. “Shh, the baby is sleeping,” whispered Nisha.
  22. smell
  23. “How many stars are in the sky?” asked Nisha.
  24. Saanvi beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  25. scrubbed
  26. The river was a silver ribbon in the valley.
  27. slurp
  28. neither
  29. giggled
  30. telling
  31. The lake sparkled under the full moon.
  32. smell
  33. croak
  34. taste
  35. staggered
  36. Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.
  37. patchwork
  38. wise
  39. The sea tasted very salty.
  40. dazzling

Free creative writing lessons, practice and worksheets at talentjr.in/creative-writing-for-kids