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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 70 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ ant carried a crumb.”
    (a) tiny (b) nice (c) good
  2. 2.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Imran counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  3. 3.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The busy market was a beehive. (b) The shop sells pencils and erasers. (c) The night was as dark as ink.
  4. 4.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The warm sand tickled my toes. (b) I heard the koel singing in the mango tree. (c) The lemon juice tasted very sour.
  5. 5.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The polished floor squeaked under my shoes.”
    (a) squeaked (b) floor (c) polished
  6. 6.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The girls ___ at the funny cartoon.”
    (a) giggled (b) had (c) laughed
  7. 7.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The snake gave an angry ___ and slid away.”
    (a) boom (b) vroom (c) hiss
  8. 8.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The fireworks burst like giant flowers. (b) The dog barked at the postman. (c) The snow was a white blanket on the hills.
  9. 9.Which sense does this line use?
    “A whistle blew at the start of the race.”
    (a) smell (b) touch (c) hearing
  10. 10.Which sense does this line use?
    “The temple bells rang out loudly.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) hearing
  11. 11.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The hungry boy ___ all the samosas in a minute.”
    (a) gobbled (b) came (c) ate
  12. 12.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kabir is happy? (a) Kabir was happy. (b) Kabir’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again. (c) Kabir beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  13. 13.Which sense does this line use?
    “The scent of Grandma’s perfume filled the room.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) smell
  14. 14.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The foaming river rushed over the rocks.”
    (a) river (b) foaming (c) rushed
  15. 15.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Sahil is bored? (a) Sahil counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time. (b) Sahil was bored. (c) Sahil grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.
  16. 16.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Simran’s eyelids drooped, and she yawned again and again.”
    (a) bored (b) tired (c) scared
  17. 17.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The sparrows chirp on my window sill.”
    (a) window (b) chirp (c) sparrows
  18. 18.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “That joke is so funny”, giggled Sahil. (b) “That joke is so funny” giggled Sahil. (c) “That joke is so funny,” giggled Sahil.
  19. 19.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Neel is cold? (a) Neel was cold. (b) Neel’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet. (c) Neel rubbed his hands and blew on his fingers.
  20. 20.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ market buzzed with voices.”
    (a) okay (b) crowded (c) nice
  21. 21.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Priya’s eyelids drooped, and she yawned again and again.”
    (a) tired (b) happy (c) angry
  22. 22.Which sense does this line use?
    “Lightning flashed across the night sky.”
    (a) sight (b) taste (c) smell
  23. 23.Which strong verb could replace “took” in this sentence?
    “The monkey took the banana from my hand.”
    (a) raced (b) fluttered (c) grabbed
  24. 24.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Look out, the shelf is falling___” shouted Tara.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) an exclamation mark (!)
  25. 25.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ soup filled our bowls.”
    (a) fine (b) nice (c) steaming
  26. 26.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “Grandpa walked through the park after dinner.”
    (a) tumbled (b) fluttered (c) strolled
  27. 27.Which strong verb means “chewed with a crunching noise”? (a) glanced (b) blazed (c) munched
  28. 28.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “After the race, Kabir ___ a whole bottle of water.”
    (a) gulped (b) got (c) drank
  29. 29.What makes the sound “pop”? (a) a balloon (b) a microwave (c) a noisy drinker
  30. 30.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The shaggy dog barked at the stranger.”
    (a) dog (b) barked (c) shaggy
  31. 31.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The cow gave a long ___ from the shed.”
    (a) moo (b) baa (c) cock-a-doodle-doo
  32. 32.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The diver ___ into the deep pool.”
    (a) came (b) fell (c) plunged
  33. 33.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Grandpa ___ through the park after dinner.”
    (a) walked (b) went (c) strolled
  34. 34.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as snow”
    (a) noisy (b) black (c) white
  35. 35.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Diya is bored? (a) Tears filled Diya’s eyes, and she stared at the floor. (b) Diya was bored. (c) Diya counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.
  36. 36.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Nisha kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.”
    (a) sad (b) hungry (c) bored
  37. 37.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The lake sparkled under the full moon. (b) The bitter gourd tasted bitter. (c) The baby giggled when Dad made funny noises.
  38. 38.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The feathery grass tickled my feet.”
    (a) grass (b) feathery (c) tickled
  39. 39.Which sentence is a simile? (a) Meera watered the plants in the morning. (b) Our teacher is a fountain of ideas. (c) The wrestler was as strong as an ox.
  40. 40.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The frogs croak all night in the monsoon.”
    (a) monsoon (b) croak (c) frogs

Answer key

  1. tiny
  2. showing
  3. The busy market was a beehive.
  4. The lemon juice tasted very sour.
  5. polished
  6. giggled
  7. hiss
  8. The snow was a white blanket on the hills.
  9. hearing
  10. hearing
  11. gobbled
  12. Kabir beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  13. smell
  14. foaming
  15. Sahil counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.
  16. tired
  17. chirp
  18. “That joke is so funny,” giggled Sahil.
  19. Neel rubbed his hands and blew on his fingers.
  20. crowded
  21. tired
  22. sight
  23. grabbed
  24. an exclamation mark (!)
  25. steaming
  26. strolled
  27. munched
  28. gulped
  29. a balloon
  30. shaggy
  31. moo
  32. plunged
  33. strolled
  34. white
  35. Diya counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.
  36. hungry
  37. The baby giggled when Dad made funny noises.
  38. feathery
  39. The wrestler was as strong as an ox.
  40. croak

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