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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 701 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Watch out for that car”! shouted Manav. (b) “Watch out for that car!” shouted Manav. (c) “Watch out for that car” shouted Manav.
  2. 2.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sour lemon made Riya pull a face.”
    (a) lemon (b) sour (c) pull
  3. 3.Which sense does this line use?
    “Diyas twinkled on every windowsill.”
    (a) taste (b) smell (c) sight
  4. 4.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Nobody came to my party,” ___ Imran.
    (a) giggled (b) sobbed (c) asked
  5. 5.Which word fits the gap best?
    “I dropped my ice cream in the mud,” ___ Kavya.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  6. 6.Which strong verb means “looked for a long time without moving”? (a) blazed (b) stared (c) nibbled
  7. 7.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) I tasted the soup and added more salt. (b) The scent of Grandma’s perfume filled the room. (c) The lake sparkled under the full moon.
  8. 8.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Shh, the film is starting,” ___ Diya.
    (a) shouted (b) asked (c) whispered
  9. 9.Which sentence is a simile? (a) We planted a mango tree in the garden. (b) The library is a treasure chest of stories. (c) The kitten’s fur felt like silk.
  10. 10.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The lake shone like a mirror in the sun. (b) The cat sat on the warm mat. (c) The moon was a silver plate in the sky.
  11. 11.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The bus stopped at the school gate.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  12. 12.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Diya sighed and flipped through the same comic again.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  13. 13.Which sense does this line use?
    “The fragrance of roses drifted through the window.”
    (a) sight (b) smell (c) hearing
  14. 14.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Sahil kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  15. 15.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “What time does the train leave?” asked Diya. (b) “What time does the train leave” asked Diya. (c) “What time does the train leave”? asked Diya.
  16. 16.Which sense does this line use?
    “I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row.”
    (a) sight (b) touch (c) hearing
  17. 17.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The snake gave an angry ___ and slid away.”
    (a) hiss (b) beep (c) pop
  18. 18.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Watch out for that car___” shouted Aarav.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) an exclamation mark (!) (c) a question mark (?)
  19. 19.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tenzin folded his arms and glared at his brother.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  20. 20.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “What time does the train leave?” asked Aryan. (b) “What time does the train leave”? asked Aryan. (c) What time does the train leave? asked Aryan.
  21. 21.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Saanvi felt very sad.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  22. 22.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The fog was a grey curtain over the town. (b) The stars twinkled like tiny diamonds. (c) It rained all night in our town.
  23. 23.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The raindrops went pitter-patter on the roof.”
    (a) roof (b) pitter-patter (c) raindrops
  24. 24.What makes the sound “click”? (a) a camera (b) pakoras in hot oil (c) a pair of scissors
  25. 25.Which strong verb means “spoke in a low, grumpy voice”? (a) crawled (b) blazed (c) muttered
  26. 26.Which sense does this line use?
    “The tree bark felt rough under my fingers.”
    (a) hearing (b) taste (c) touch
  27. 27.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) gentle (b) pop (c) pencil
  28. 28.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The leaking tap went ___ in the dark.”
    (a) drip (b) beep (c) oink
  29. 29.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The baby slept like a log. (b) Meera watered the plants in the morning. (c) The playground was an oven in May.
  30. 30.Which strong verb could replace “held” in this sentence?
    “Diya held her mother’s hand in the crowd.”
    (a) clutched (b) munched (c) wandered
  31. 31.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ dosa crackled on the pan.”
    (a) good (b) fine (c) crispy
  32. 32.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, we are in the library”, whispered Saanvi. (b) “Shh, we are in the library,” whispered Saanvi. (c) Shh, we are in the library, whispered Saanvi.
  33. 33.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The medicine had a bitter taste. (b) Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark. (c) The warm sand tickled my toes.
  34. 34.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The bonfire ___ on Lohri night.”
    (a) did (b) blazed (c) burned
  35. 35.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ giant snored under the tree.”
    (a) good (b) grumpy (c) fine
  36. 36.Which strong verb could replace “spoke” in this sentence?
    “Mum spoke softly so that she would not wake the baby.”
    (a) whispered (b) sipped (c) sprinkled
  37. 37.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Neel kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  38. 38.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Tara ___ into the dark cupboard for her shoes.”
    (a) made (b) peered (c) looked
  39. 39.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ puppy chewed my slipper.”
    (a) nice (b) fine (c) naughty
  40. 40.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The new shoes shone like stars.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile

Answer key

  1. “Watch out for that car!” shouted Manav.
  2. sour
  3. sight
  4. sobbed
  5. sobbed
  6. stared
  7. The scent of Grandma’s perfume filled the room.
  8. whispered
  9. The kitten’s fur felt like silk.
  10. The lake shone like a mirror in the sun.
  11. neither
  12. showing
  13. smell
  14. showing
  15. “What time does the train leave?” asked Diya.
  16. sight
  17. hiss
  18. an exclamation mark (!)
  19. showing
  20. “What time does the train leave?” asked Aryan.
  21. telling
  22. The fog was a grey curtain over the town.
  23. pitter-patter
  24. a camera
  25. muttered
  26. touch
  27. pop
  28. drip
  29. The baby slept like a log.
  30. clutched
  31. crispy
  32. “Shh, we are in the library,” whispered Saanvi.
  33. Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.
  34. blazed
  35. grumpy
  36. whispered
  37. showing
  38. peered
  39. naughty
  40. simile

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