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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 705 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet. (b) The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck. (c) I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  2. 2.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Catch the ball___” shouted Manav.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) an exclamation mark (!) (c) a full stop (.)
  3. 3.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “An owl gave a hoot from the banyan tree.”
    (a) owl (b) hoot (c) tree
  4. 4.Which strong verb could replace “shut” in this sentence?
    “Kabir shut the door when he was cross.”
    (a) sipped (b) hurled (c) slammed
  5. 5.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) My little brother is a chatterbox. (b) We planted a mango tree in the garden. (c) The children chattered like a flock of parrots.
  6. 6.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The sun was a golden ball of fire.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  7. 7.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Stop that runaway goat”! shouted Nisha. (b) “Stop that runaway goat” shouted Nisha. (c) “Stop that runaway goat!” shouted Nisha.
  8. 8.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “The tired runner walked over the finish line.”
    (a) grabbed (b) staggered (c) sobbed
  9. 9.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) click (b) happy (c) mango
  10. 10.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Fatima is angry? (a) Fatima’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists. (b) Fatima was angry. (c) Fatima could barely keep her eyes open at dinner.
  11. 11.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Kabir finished his homework early.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  12. 12.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The children jumped into the pool with a ___.”
    (a) thud (b) beep (c) splash
  13. 13.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The golden sand glittered in the sun. (b) The earth smelled lovely after the first rain. (c) The lemon juice tasted very sour.
  14. 14.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as honey”
    (a) sour (b) bitter (c) sweet
  15. 15.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Dev ___ past his sleeping baby sister.”
    (a) tiptoed (b) got (c) walked
  16. 16.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Ha ha, the goat ate your hat,” giggled Farhan. (b) “Ha ha, the goat ate your hat”, giggled Farhan. (c) “Ha ha, the goat ate your hat” giggled Farhan.
  17. 17.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Imran sighed and flipped through the same comic again.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  18. 18.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The clay cup felt hot in my hands. (b) The new bicycle shone bright red. (c) The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink.
  19. 19.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) snip (b) teacher (c) pencil
  20. 20.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) clang (b) gentle (c) mango
  21. 21.Which sense does this line use?
    “I looked at the white peak of the mountain.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) sight
  22. 22.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Grandpa ___ through the park after dinner.”
    (a) strolled (b) went (c) walked
  23. 23.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ floor squeaked under my shoes.”
    (a) polished (b) fine (c) good
  24. 24.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Maria felt very angry.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  25. 25.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Yash is scared? (a) Yash’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet. (b) Yash was scared. (c) Yash sighed and flipped through the same comic again.
  26. 26.Which strong verb could replace “ate” in this sentence?
    “The hungry boy ate all the samosas in a minute.”
    (a) clutched (b) gobbled (c) scribbled
  27. 27.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Rohan felt very sad.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  28. 28.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Kabir finished his homework early. (b) The old bread was as hard as a rock. (c) The river was a silver ribbon in the valley.
  29. 29.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The narrow road twisted up the mountain.”
    (a) narrow (b) road (c) twisted
  30. 30.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The puffy clouds floated across the sky.”
    (a) floated (b) puffy (c) clouds
  31. 31.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Sneha is bored? (a) Sneha was bored. (b) Sneha sighed and flipped through the same comic again. (c) Sneha’s teeth chattered, and she pulled her shawl tighter.
  32. 32.Which strong verb means “walked in a slow, relaxed way”? (a) gulped (b) shouted (c) strolled
  33. 33.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The lost calf ___ through the fields.”
    (a) walked (b) got (c) wandered
  34. 34.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Grandpa reads the newspaper every day. (b) The moon was a silver plate in the sky. (c) The feather was as light as air.
  35. 35.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.”
    (a) sight (b) touch (c) smell
  36. 36.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ grass tickled my feet.”
    (a) feathery (b) nice (c) good
  37. 37.What makes the sound “moo”? (a) a cow (b) the wind (c) pakoras in hot oil
  38. 38.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The children chattered like a flock of parrots. (b) The playground was an oven in May. (c) My father bought a new umbrella.
  39. 39.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aisha was sad.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  40. 40.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “That joke is so funny,” giggled Kavya. (b) “That joke is so funny” giggled Kavya. (c) That joke is so funny, giggled Kavya.

Answer key

  1. The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet.
  2. an exclamation mark (!)
  3. hoot
  4. slammed
  5. My little brother is a chatterbox.
  6. metaphor
  7. “Stop that runaway goat!” shouted Nisha.
  8. staggered
  9. click
  10. Fatima’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists.
  11. neither
  12. splash
  13. The earth smelled lovely after the first rain.
  14. sweet
  15. tiptoed
  16. “Ha ha, the goat ate your hat,” giggled Farhan.
  17. showing
  18. The clay cup felt hot in my hands.
  19. snip
  20. clang
  21. sight
  22. strolled
  23. polished
  24. telling
  25. Yash’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet.
  26. gobbled
  27. telling
  28. The river was a silver ribbon in the valley.
  29. narrow
  30. puffy
  31. Sneha sighed and flipped through the same comic again.
  32. strolled
  33. wandered
  34. The moon was a silver plate in the sky.
  35. smell
  36. feathery
  37. a cow
  38. The children chattered like a flock of parrots.
  39. telling
  40. “That joke is so funny,” giggled Kavya.

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