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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 726 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ananya is scared? (a) Ananya dragged her feet upstairs and flopped on the bed. (b) Ananya was scared. (c) Ananya’s heart thumped, and she hid under the sheet.
  2. 2.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy. (b) The river water felt icy on my feet. (c) Lightning flashed across the night sky.
  3. 3.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The lost child ___ until his mother found him.”
    (a) had (b) sobbed (c) cried
  4. 4.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The motorbike went vroom down the road.”
    (a) vroom (b) motorbike (c) road
  5. 5.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Zoya is tired? (a) Zoya’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists. (b) Zoya’s eyelids drooped, and she yawned again and again. (c) Zoya was tired.
  6. 6.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tenzin dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.”
    (a) hungry (b) happy (c) tired
  7. 7.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The wind went whoosh through the trees.”
    (a) wind (b) whoosh (c) trees
  8. 8.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Ishaan ___ a phone number on his hand.”
    (a) wrote (b) scribbled (c) got
  9. 9.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Sahil is cold? (a) Sahil shivered and stamped his feet in the snow. (b) Sahil rubbed his eyes and nodded off on the sofa. (c) Sahil was cold.
  10. 10.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) click (b) table (c) gentle
  11. 11.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The steaming soup filled our bowls.”
    (a) soup (b) filled (c) steaming
  12. 12.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “I miss my grandma so much” sobbed Arjun. (b) “I miss my grandma so much,” sobbed Arjun. (c) I miss my grandma so much, sobbed Arjun.
  13. 13.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Tenzin is hungry? (a) Tenzin gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping. (b) Tenzin was hungry. (c) Tenzin sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.
  14. 14.Which strong verb could replace “ran” in this sentence?
    “Meera ran to the bus stop before it left.”
    (a) grabbed (b) plunged (c) dashed
  15. 15.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Rohan was tired.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  16. 16.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, we are in the library___” whispered Simran.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  17. 17.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The bees buzzed around the hive. (b) Diyas twinkled on every windowsill. (c) A whiff of incense floated from the temple.
  18. 18.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Mum ___ softly so that she would not wake the baby.”
    (a) made (b) spoke (c) whispered
  19. 19.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ cactus pricked my finger.”
    (a) fine (b) nice (c) spiky
  20. 20.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet___” giggled Imran.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)
  21. 21.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aarav is cold? (a) Aarav shivered and stamped his feet in the snow. (b) Aarav was cold. (c) Aarav gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut.
  22. 22.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Joseph’s face turned red, and he clenched his fists.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  23. 23.Which sentence is a simile? (a) We planted a mango tree in the garden. (b) The sun was a golden ball of fire. (c) The lake shone like a mirror in the sun.
  24. 24.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ dosa crackled on the pan.”
    (a) good (b) nice (c) crispy
  25. 25.Which strong verb could replace “ate” in this sentence?
    “The hungry boy ate all the samosas in a minute.”
    (a) gobbled (b) sobbed (c) stared
  26. 26.What makes the sound “neigh”? (a) a horse (b) a campfire (c) a doorbell
  27. 27.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) I smelled fresh coriander at the vegetable stall. (b) The pressure cooker hissed three times. (c) The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour.
  28. 28.Which sense does this line use?
    “Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.”
    (a) sight (b) smell (c) touch
  29. 29.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The stale bread crumbled in my fingers.”
    (a) bread (b) crumbled (c) stale
  30. 30.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The rooster crowed cock-a-doodle-doo at dawn.”
    (a) cock-a-doodle-doo (b) rooster (c) dawn
  31. 31.Which sense does this line use?
    “Rain drummed on the tin roof all night.”
    (a) hearing (b) smell (c) touch
  32. 32.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Priya is bored? (a) Priya counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time. (b) Priya was bored. (c) Priya gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.
  33. 33.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My kite is torn to pieces,” ___ Aarav.
    (a) sobbed (b) giggled (c) asked
  34. 34.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The chubby baby giggled in the cot.”
    (a) baby (b) giggled (c) chubby
  35. 35.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The old clock went ___ in the hall.”
    (a) tick-tock (b) chirp (c) crunch
  36. 36.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ puppy chewed my slipper.”
    (a) naughty (b) okay (c) nice
  37. 37.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The oranges ___ out of the bag and down the steps.”
    (a) tumbled (b) fell (c) had
  38. 38.What makes the sound “ding-dong”? (a) a rooster (b) a cow (c) a doorbell
  39. 39.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Saanvi gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  40. 40.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a pancake”
    (a) tall (b) round (c) flat

Answer key

  1. Ananya’s heart thumped, and she hid under the sheet.
  2. Lightning flashed across the night sky.
  3. sobbed
  4. vroom
  5. Zoya’s eyelids drooped, and she yawned again and again.
  6. tired
  7. whoosh
  8. scribbled
  9. Sahil shivered and stamped his feet in the snow.
  10. click
  11. steaming
  12. “I miss my grandma so much,” sobbed Arjun.
  13. Tenzin gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.
  14. dashed
  15. telling
  16. a comma (,)
  17. Diyas twinkled on every windowsill.
  18. whispered
  19. spiky
  20. a comma (,)
  21. Aarav shivered and stamped his feet in the snow.
  22. showing
  23. The lake shone like a mirror in the sun.
  24. crispy
  25. gobbled
  26. a horse
  27. I smelled fresh coriander at the vegetable stall.
  28. sight
  29. stale
  30. cock-a-doodle-doo
  31. hearing
  32. Priya counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.
  33. sobbed
  34. chubby
  35. tick-tock
  36. naughty
  37. tumbled
  38. a doorbell
  39. showing
  40. flat

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