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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 734 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tenzin sighed and flipped through the same comic again.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  2. 2.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sour lemon made Riya pull a face.”
    (a) lemon (b) sour (c) pull
  3. 3.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The squishy cushion sank under me.”
    (a) cushion (b) squishy (c) sank
  4. 4.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The doorbell went ___ at noon.”
    (a) thud (b) ding-dong (c) whoosh
  5. 5.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The hungry boy ___ all the samosas in a minute.”
    (a) ate (b) gobbled (c) got
  6. 6.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Saanvi counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.”
    (a) scared (b) angry (c) bored
  7. 7.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The cheeky monkey stole Grandpa’s cap.”
    (a) cheeky (b) stole (c) monkey
  8. 8.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The old clock went ___ in the hall.”
    (a) buzz (b) tick-tock (c) boom
  9. 9.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Maria’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap.”
    (a) cold (b) tired (c) hungry
  10. 10.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Imran kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.”
    (a) scared (b) bored (c) sad
  11. 11.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake,” ___ Imran.
    (a) asked (b) shouted (c) whispered
  12. 12.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark. (b) I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden. (c) The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet.
  13. 13.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ soup filled our bowls.”
    (a) good (b) okay (c) steaming
  14. 14.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ lemon made Riya pull a face.”
    (a) okay (b) sour (c) good
  15. 15.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ puppy chewed my slipper.”
    (a) naughty (b) good (c) nice
  16. 16.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ mangoes filled the basket.”
    (a) good (b) nice (c) juicy
  17. 17.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Joseph was sad.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  18. 18.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aryan is sad? (a) Aryan’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door. (b) Tears filled Aryan’s eyes, and he stared at the floor. (c) Aryan was sad.
  19. 19.Which sense does this line use?
    “The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) hearing
  20. 20.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Rohan is tired? (a) Rohan dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed. (b) Rohan was tired. (c) Rohan’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home.
  21. 21.Which strong verb means “took a very quick look”? (a) munched (b) crept (c) glanced
  22. 22.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as honey”
    (a) sweet (b) bitter (c) sour
  23. 23.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The balloon burst with a ___.”
    (a) croak (b) roar (c) pop
  24. 24.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The temple bells rang out loudly. (b) I felt the cool breeze on my face. (c) I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden.
  25. 25.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “That joke is so funny”, giggled Riya. (b) That joke is so funny, giggled Riya. (c) “That joke is so funny,” giggled Riya.
  26. 26.Which sense does this line use?
    “The thunder crashed and roared.”
    (a) hearing (b) taste (c) sight
  27. 27.Which sense does this line use?
    “I smelled fresh coriander at the vegetable stall.”
    (a) sight (b) smell (c) hearing
  28. 28.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ lake reflected the hills.”
    (a) nice (b) glassy (c) good
  29. 29.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “Ravi drank his lassi with a ___.”
    (a) splash (b) oink (c) slurp
  30. 30.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The temple bells rang out loudly. (b) The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy. (c) I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row.
  31. 31.What makes the sound “woof”? (a) a snake (b) a doorbell (c) a dog
  32. 32.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The bees buzzed around the hive. (b) The kulfi tasted of cardamom and saffron. (c) Dad sniffed the milk to check if it was fresh.
  33. 33.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The crispy dosa crackled on the pan.”
    (a) crispy (b) dosa (c) crackled
  34. 34.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) sticky (b) nice (c) fine
  35. 35.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Mum ___ softly so that she would not wake the baby.”
    (a) whispered (b) spoke (c) had
  36. 36.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The lake shone like a mirror in the sun.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  37. 37.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The lemon juice tasted very sour. (b) A whistle blew at the start of the race. (c) A whiff of incense floated from the temple.
  38. 38.Which strong verb could replace “ate” in this sentence?
    “The hungry boy ate all the samosas in a minute.”
    (a) crawled (b) gobbled (c) fluttered
  39. 39.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet,” ___ Manav.
    (a) asked (b) sobbed (c) giggled
  40. 40.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ kite danced in the sky.”
    (a) fine (b) colourful (c) nice

Answer key

  1. showing
  2. sour
  3. squishy
  4. ding-dong
  5. gobbled
  6. bored
  7. cheeky
  8. tick-tock
  9. cold
  10. bored
  11. whispered
  12. The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet.
  13. steaming
  14. sour
  15. naughty
  16. juicy
  17. telling
  18. Tears filled Aryan’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.
  19. touch
  20. Rohan dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.
  21. glanced
  22. sweet
  23. pop
  24. I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden.
  25. “That joke is so funny,” giggled Riya.
  26. hearing
  27. smell
  28. glassy
  29. slurp
  30. I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row.
  31. a dog
  32. Dad sniffed the milk to check if it was fresh.
  33. crispy
  34. sticky
  35. whispered
  36. simile
  37. A whiff of incense floated from the temple.
  38. gobbled
  39. giggled
  40. colourful

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