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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 736 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Ishaan kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  2. 2.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The cat sat on the warm mat. (b) The tired dog snored like a tractor. (c) The stars were diamonds in the night sky.
  3. 3.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aarav is happy? (a) Aarav stamped his foot and slammed the door. (b) Aarav was happy. (c) Aarav beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  4. 4.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “A tear rolled slowly down Kavya’s cheek.”
    (a) sad (b) scared (c) happy
  5. 5.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ cave echoed with our voices.”
    (a) gloomy (b) fine (c) good
  6. 6.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, we are in the library” whispered Simran. (b) Shh, we are in the library, whispered Simran. (c) “Shh, we are in the library,” whispered Simran.
  7. 7.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Rohan laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.”
    (a) tired (b) scared (c) happy
  8. 8.Which sense does this line use?
    “Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.”
    (a) sight (b) smell (c) taste
  9. 9.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The booming thunder shook the windows.”
    (a) shook (b) booming (c) thunder
  10. 10.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “My best friend is moving away___” sobbed Joseph.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  11. 11.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “My sandcastle got washed away___” sobbed Manav.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  12. 12.What makes the sound “honk”? (a) a clock (b) a car horn (c) a snake
  13. 13.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The shop sells pencils and erasers.”
    (a) simile (b) neither (c) metaphor
  14. 14.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “Dad gave a loud achoo in the dusty room.”
    (a) dusty (b) room (c) achoo
  15. 15.Which strong verb means “walked unsteadily, almost falling”? (a) scribbled (b) nibbled (c) staggered
  16. 16.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, the baby is sleeping,” whispered Farhan. (b) “Shh, the baby is sleeping”, whispered Farhan. (c) “Shh, the baby is sleeping” whispered Farhan.
  17. 17.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Meera felt very cold.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  18. 18.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) I tasted the soup and added more salt. (b) The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen. (c) I heard waves crashing on the rocks.
  19. 19.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “The tired runner walked over the finish line.”
    (a) muttered (b) plunged (c) staggered
  20. 20.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) kind (b) mango (c) oink
  21. 21.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ teddy bear sat on my bed.”
    (a) fine (b) good (c) cuddly
  22. 22.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “An owl gave a ___ from the banyan tree.”
    (a) hoot (b) moo (c) woof
  23. 23.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a giraffe”
    (a) tall (b) round (c) short
  24. 24.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Rohan is hungry? (a) Rohan was hungry. (b) Rohan gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping. (c) Tears filled Rohan’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.
  25. 25.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Kavya grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) sad (b) angry (c) happy
  26. 26.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The wind went whoosh through the trees.”
    (a) wind (b) trees (c) whoosh
  27. 27.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.”
    (a) sight (b) hearing (c) smell
  28. 28.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The thunder went boom over the hills.”
    (a) boom (b) thunder (c) hills
  29. 29.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The steel plate hit the stone floor with a clang.”
    (a) plate (b) stone (c) clang
  30. 30.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) pencil (b) crackle (c) window
  31. 31.What makes the sound “hiss”? (a) a crisp papad (b) a lion (c) a snake
  32. 32.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) roar (b) teacher (c) table
  33. 33.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Aarav gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut.”
    (a) scared (b) angry (c) sad
  34. 34.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tenzin’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  35. 35.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) My kite is torn to pieces, sobbed Simran. (b) “My kite is torn to pieces” sobbed Simran. (c) “My kite is torn to pieces,” sobbed Simran.
  36. 36.Which sense does this line use?
    “Lightning flashed across the night sky.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) smell
  37. 37.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Watch out for that car___” shouted Pooja.
    (a) an exclamation mark (!) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  38. 38.Which strong verb means “took a very quick look”? (a) gobbled (b) tumbled (c) glanced
  39. 39.Which sense does this line use?
    “The lake sparkled under the full moon.”
    (a) touch (b) taste (c) sight
  40. 40.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a bee”
    (a) lazy (b) busy (c) silent

Answer key

  1. showing
  2. The tired dog snored like a tractor.
  3. Aarav beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  4. sad
  5. gloomy
  6. “Shh, we are in the library,” whispered Simran.
  7. happy
  8. sight
  9. booming
  10. a comma (,)
  11. a comma (,)
  12. a car horn
  13. neither
  14. achoo
  15. staggered
  16. “Shh, the baby is sleeping,” whispered Farhan.
  17. telling
  18. I tasted the soup and added more salt.
  19. staggered
  20. oink
  21. cuddly
  22. hoot
  23. tall
  24. Rohan gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.
  25. happy
  26. whoosh
  27. smell
  28. boom
  29. clang
  30. crackle
  31. a snake
  32. roar
  33. scared
  34. showing
  35. “My kite is torn to pieces,” sobbed Simran.
  36. sight
  37. an exclamation mark (!)
  38. glanced
  39. sight
  40. busy

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