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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 758 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence is a simile? (a) My little sister is as busy as a bee. (b) His heart was a drum during the race. (c) The bus stopped at the school gate.
  2. 2.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as an ox”
    (a) strong (b) tiny (c) weak
  3. 3.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ puppy chewed my slipper.”
    (a) okay (b) good (c) naughty
  4. 4.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) green (b) quack (c) mango
  5. 5.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Maria is scared? (a) Maria was scared. (b) Maria’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door. (c) Maria’s eyelids drooped, and she yawned again and again.
  6. 6.Which strong verb means “chewed with a crunching noise”? (a) dashed (b) stared (c) munched
  7. 7.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Zoya’s heart thumped, and she hid under the sheet.”
    (a) cold (b) bored (c) scared
  8. 8.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Aisha licked her lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.”
    (a) happy (b) angry (c) hungry
  9. 9.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aarav is scared? (a) Aarav froze and held his breath as the floor creaked. (b) Aarav laughed, clapped and twirled around the room. (c) Aarav was scared.
  10. 10.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The lake was a mirror for the mountains. (b) Meera watered the plants in the morning. (c) The fireworks burst like giant flowers.
  11. 11.Which sense does this line use?
    “We watched the peacock open its blue tail.”
    (a) smell (b) sight (c) hearing
  12. 12.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The cow gave a long moo from the shed.”
    (a) shed (b) cow (c) moo
  13. 13.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ grass tickled my feet.”
    (a) okay (b) good (c) feathery
  14. 14.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) happy (b) mango (c) beep
  15. 15.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ river rushed over the rocks.”
    (a) fine (b) okay (c) foaming
  16. 16.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kabir is cold? (a) Kabir was cold. (b) Kabir laughed, clapped and twirled around the room. (c) Kabir’s nose turned pink, and he pulled on a woolly cap.
  17. 17.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) river (b) neigh (c) happy
  18. 18.Which strong verb could replace “cleaned” in this sentence?
    “Mum cleaned the muddy floor until it shone.”
    (a) giggled (b) wandered (c) scrubbed
  19. 19.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ snake slid under the rock.”
    (a) striped (b) okay (c) nice
  20. 20.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Fatima is cold? (a) A tear rolled slowly down Fatima’s cheek. (b) Fatima was cold. (c) Fatima’s teeth chattered, and she pulled her shawl tighter.
  21. 21.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Neel grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  22. 22.Which sense does this line use?
    “The sunset painted the sky orange and pink.”
    (a) smell (b) sight (c) hearing
  23. 23.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The eagle ___ above the hills.”
    (a) flew (b) had (c) soared
  24. 24.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The bitter gourd tasted bitter. (b) The crowd cheered loudly for our team. (c) We watched the peacock open its blue tail.
  25. 25.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ road twisted up the mountain.”
    (a) narrow (b) okay (c) nice
  26. 26.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ teddy bear sat on my bed.”
    (a) okay (b) fine (c) cuddly
  27. 27.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “How many stars are in the sky___” asked Saanvi.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  28. 28.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) hoot (b) teacher (c) quickly
  29. 29.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ananya’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.”
    (a) angry (b) tired (c) hungry
  30. 30.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy. (b) The wet soap slipped from my hands. (c) The lake sparkled under the full moon.
  31. 31.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “It rained all night in our town.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  32. 32.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Stop that runaway goat___” shouted Fatima.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) an exclamation mark (!) (c) a question mark (?)
  33. 33.Which sense does this line use?
    “The old door creaked as it opened.”
    (a) sight (b) smell (c) hearing
  34. 34.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “My best friend is moving away”, sobbed Sahil. (b) “My best friend is moving away” sobbed Sahil. (c) “My best friend is moving away,” sobbed Sahil.
  35. 35.Which strong verb could replace “spoke” in this sentence?
    “Mum spoke softly so that she would not wake the baby.”
    (a) whispered (b) soared (c) crept
  36. 36.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “We planted a mango tree in the garden.”
    (a) simile (b) neither (c) metaphor
  37. 37.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The microwave gave a beep when the milk was hot.”
    (a) beep (b) milk (c) microwave
  38. 38.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The lost child ___ until his mother found him.”
    (a) cried (b) did (c) sobbed
  39. 39.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Riya ___ a crunchy apple on the bus.”
    (a) munched (b) came (c) ate
  40. 40.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) moo (b) happy (c) chair

Answer key

  1. My little sister is as busy as a bee.
  2. strong
  3. naughty
  4. quack
  5. Maria’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door.
  6. munched
  7. scared
  8. hungry
  9. Aarav froze and held his breath as the floor creaked.
  10. The fireworks burst like giant flowers.
  11. sight
  12. moo
  13. feathery
  14. beep
  15. foaming
  16. Kabir’s nose turned pink, and he pulled on a woolly cap.
  17. neigh
  18. scrubbed
  19. striped
  20. Fatima’s teeth chattered, and she pulled her shawl tighter.
  21. showing
  22. sight
  23. soared
  24. The bitter gourd tasted bitter.
  25. narrow
  26. cuddly
  27. a question mark (?)
  28. hoot
  29. hungry
  30. The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy.
  31. neither
  32. an exclamation mark (!)
  33. hearing
  34. “My best friend is moving away,” sobbed Sahil.
  35. whispered
  36. neither
  37. beep
  38. sobbed
  39. munched
  40. moo

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