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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 776 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Aarav ___ at the clock and hurried out.”
    (a) looked (b) glanced (c) went
  2. 2.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) green (b) table (c) drip
  3. 3.Which sense does this line use?
    “Diyas twinkled on every windowsill.”
    (a) sight (b) taste (c) smell
  4. 4.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Ananya’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  5. 5.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Neel’s nose turned pink, and he pulled on a woolly cap.”
    (a) bored (b) cold (c) happy
  6. 6.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The old bread was as hard as a rock. (b) The train left the station at nine. (c) The old car was a tired donkey on the hill.
  7. 7.Which sense does this line use?
    “The golden sand glittered in the sun.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) hearing
  8. 8.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The bees buzzed around the hive. (b) The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek. (c) The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.
  9. 9.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Is it time for lunch yet___” asked Fatima.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)
  10. 10.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) nice (b) good (c) sticky
  11. 11.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) mango (b) gentle (c) crunch
  12. 12.Which sense does this line use?
    “The pressure cooker hissed three times.”
    (a) taste (b) hearing (c) sight
  13. 13.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “I miss my grandma so much,” sobbed Sahil. (b) “I miss my grandma so much”, sobbed Sahil. (c) “I miss my grandma so much” sobbed Sahil.
  14. 14.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Your silly face makes me laugh___” giggled Dev.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  15. 15.Which sense does this line use?
    “The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.”
    (a) taste (b) hearing (c) smell
  16. 16.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose,” giggled Maria. (b) “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose” giggled Maria. (c) “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose”, giggled Maria.
  17. 17.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Simran shivered and stamped her feet in the snow.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  18. 18.What makes the sound “achoo”? (a) a horse (b) a sneeze (c) a balloon
  19. 19.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The hungry boy ___ all the samosas in a minute.”
    (a) gobbled (b) ate (c) came
  20. 20.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) gentle (b) moo (c) slowly
  21. 21.What makes the sound “woof”? (a) a lion (b) a rooster (c) a dog
  22. 22.What makes the sound “cock-a-doodle-doo”? (a) a sheep (b) a rooster (c) a bee
  23. 23.Which sense does this line use?
    “The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) hearing
  24. 24.Which sense does this line use?
    “Lightning flashed across the night sky.”
    (a) touch (b) hearing (c) sight
  25. 25.Which strong verb means “looked for a long time without moving”? (a) scrubbed (b) stared (c) giggled
  26. 26.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The steel plate hit the stone floor with a ___.”
    (a) clang (b) snip (c) beep
  27. 27.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Riya ___ a crunchy apple on the bus.”
    (a) munched (b) ate (c) came
  28. 28.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Come back here, Moti” shouted Joseph. (b) “Come back here, Moti!” shouted Joseph. (c) Come back here, Moti! shouted Joseph.
  29. 29.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The balloon burst with a ___.”
    (a) honk (b) pop (c) knock
  30. 30.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The busy market was a beehive. (b) The train left the station at nine. (c) Dad’s voice boomed like thunder.
  31. 31.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ market buzzed with voices.”
    (a) okay (b) crowded (c) fine
  32. 32.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ kite danced in the sky.”
    (a) colourful (b) okay (c) nice
  33. 33.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Shh, we are in the library,” ___ Aarav.
    (a) whispered (b) shouted (c) asked
  34. 34.Which sense does this line use?
    “I heard the koel singing in the mango tree.”
    (a) sight (b) touch (c) hearing
  35. 35.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Imran laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  36. 36.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The rickety ladder wobbled under Dad’s feet.”
    (a) rickety (b) ladder (c) wobbled
  37. 37.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Can I have one more laddoo, please” asked Saanvi. (b) Can I have one more laddoo, please? asked Saanvi. (c) “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” asked Saanvi.
  38. 38.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “My best friend is moving away___” sobbed Imran.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  39. 39.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Sahil is sad? (a) Sahil stamped his foot and slammed the door. (b) Sahil’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home. (c) Sahil was sad.
  40. 40.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, we are in the library___” whispered Zoya.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)

Answer key

  1. glanced
  2. drip
  3. sight
  4. showing
  5. cold
  6. The old bread was as hard as a rock.
  7. sight
  8. The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek.
  9. a question mark (?)
  10. sticky
  11. crunch
  12. hearing
  13. “I miss my grandma so much,” sobbed Sahil.
  14. a comma (,)
  15. taste
  16. “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose,” giggled Maria.
  17. showing
  18. a sneeze
  19. gobbled
  20. moo
  21. a dog
  22. a rooster
  23. taste
  24. sight
  25. stared
  26. clang
  27. munched
  28. “Come back here, Moti!” shouted Joseph.
  29. pop
  30. The busy market was a beehive.
  31. crowded
  32. colourful
  33. whispered
  34. hearing
  35. showing
  36. rickety
  37. “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” asked Saanvi.
  38. a comma (,)
  39. Sahil’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home.
  40. a comma (,)

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