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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 784 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The frogs ___ all night in the monsoon.”
    (a) splash (b) croak (c) chirp
  2. 2.What makes the sound “neigh”? (a) a horse (b) a bee (c) a dog
  3. 3.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tears filled Kabir’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  4. 4.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Grandpa’s beard is as white as snow. (b) The clouds were cotton balls in the sky. (c) The shop sells pencils and erasers.
  5. 5.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Nisha was angry.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  6. 6.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Neel sighed and flipped through the same comic again.”
    (a) bored (b) cold (c) hungry
  7. 7.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Riya is happy? (a) Riya was happy. (b) Riya beamed and hugged everyone in sight. (c) Riya’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists.
  8. 8.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Rohan’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  9. 9.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) slowly (b) woof (c) tall
  10. 10.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Neel is bored? (a) Neel was bored. (b) Neel sighed and flipped through the same comic again. (c) Neel sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.
  11. 11.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The smell of toast drifted up the stairs. (b) The sea tasted very salty. (c) I looked at the white peak of the mountain.
  12. 12.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “Dad gave a loud ___ in the dusty room.”
    (a) roar (b) buzz (c) achoo
  13. 13.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The chubby baby giggled in the cot.”
    (a) giggled (b) chubby (c) baby
  14. 14.Which sense does this line use?
    “The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.”
    (a) taste (b) smell (c) sight
  15. 15.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Riya’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.”
    (a) bored (b) hungry (c) tired
  16. 16.Which strong verb could replace “drank” in this sentence?
    “After the race, Kabir drank a whole bottle of water.”
    (a) muttered (b) blazed (c) gulped
  17. 17.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, we are in the library”, whispered Arjun. (b) Shh, we are in the library, whispered Arjun. (c) “Shh, we are in the library,” whispered Arjun.
  18. 18.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) click (b) mango (c) teacher
  19. 19.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ elephant stomped across the river.”
    (a) nice (b) okay (c) enormous
  20. 20.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The library is a treasure chest of stories. (b) We planted a mango tree in the garden. (c) The night was as dark as ink.
  21. 21.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The cat sat on the warm mat.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  22. 22.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The baby slept in the afternoon. (b) Kabir ran like the wind to catch the bus. (c) His heart was a drum during the race.
  23. 23.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake___” whispered Kabir.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)
  24. 24.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “My goldfish has gone missing___” sobbed Farhan.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  25. 25.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tara stamped her foot and slammed the door.”
    (a) scared (b) angry (c) hungry
  26. 26.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Zoya was really hungry.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  27. 27.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Her smile was as bright as the sun.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  28. 28.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Dev was hungry.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  29. 29.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, we are in the library___” whispered Pooja.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)
  30. 30.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ peacock spread its tail.”
    (a) fine (b) shimmering (c) okay
  31. 31.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) green (b) teacher (c) honk
  32. 32.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) river (b) garden (c) whoosh
  33. 33.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The clouds were cotton balls in the sky. (b) The jalebi was as sweet as honey. (c) The dog barked at the postman.
  34. 34.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose,” ___ Aarav.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  35. 35.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The coach ___ to us from across the big field.”
    (a) shouted (b) spoke (c) did
  36. 36.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) I dropped my ice cream in the mud, sobbed Manav. (b) “I dropped my ice cream in the mud,” sobbed Manav. (c) “I dropped my ice cream in the mud” sobbed Manav.
  37. 37.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The clouds were cotton balls in the sky.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  38. 38.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ananya could barely keep her eyes open at dinner.”
    (a) hungry (b) tired (c) sad
  39. 39.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Do not tell anyone about the party___” whispered Aryan.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  40. 40.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Farhan could barely keep his eyes open at dinner.”
    (a) bored (b) happy (c) tired

Answer key

  1. croak
  2. a horse
  3. showing
  4. The clouds were cotton balls in the sky.
  5. telling
  6. bored
  7. Riya beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  8. showing
  9. woof
  10. Neel sighed and flipped through the same comic again.
  11. The sea tasted very salty.
  12. achoo
  13. chubby
  14. taste
  15. hungry
  16. gulped
  17. “Shh, we are in the library,” whispered Arjun.
  18. click
  19. enormous
  20. The library is a treasure chest of stories.
  21. neither
  22. Kabir ran like the wind to catch the bus.
  23. a comma (,)
  24. a comma (,)
  25. angry
  26. telling
  27. simile
  28. telling
  29. a comma (,)
  30. shimmering
  31. honk
  32. whoosh
  33. The jalebi was as sweet as honey.
  34. giggled
  35. shouted
  36. “I dropped my ice cream in the mud,” sobbed Manav.
  37. metaphor
  38. tired
  39. a comma (,)
  40. tired

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