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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 795 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) garden (b) pencil (c) slurp
  2. 2.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Riya could barely keep her eyes open at dinner.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  3. 3.Which strong verb means “took a very quick look”? (a) muttered (b) glanced (c) leapt
  4. 4.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kavya is sad? (a) Tears filled Kavya’s eyes, and she stared at the floor. (b) Kavya was sad. (c) Kavya’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.
  5. 5.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Pooja beamed and hugged everyone in sight.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  6. 6.Which sense does this line use?
    “Rain drummed on the tin roof all night.”
    (a) hearing (b) smell (c) taste
  7. 7.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ishaan is happy? (a) Ishaan was happy. (b) Ishaan shivered and stamped his feet in the snow. (c) Ishaan hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.
  8. 8.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Pooja is sad? (a) Pooja’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home. (b) Pooja’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door. (c) Pooja was sad.
  9. 9.Which sense does this line use?
    “The scent of Grandma’s perfume filled the room.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) touch
  10. 10.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The jalebi was as sweet as honey.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  11. 11.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The baby slept like a log. (b) We ate rice and dal for dinner. (c) Her bedroom is a pigsty.
  12. 12.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ananya is tired? (a) Ananya stamped her foot and slammed the door. (b) Ananya was tired. (c) Ananya could barely keep her eyes open at dinner.
  13. 13.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The golden sand glittered in the sun. (b) The scent of Grandma’s perfume filled the room. (c) The pressure cooker hissed three times.
  14. 14.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “A tear rolled slowly down Priya’s cheek.”
    (a) sad (b) tired (c) bored
  15. 15.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Shh, the film is starting,” ___ Sahil.
    (a) shouted (b) whispered (c) asked
  16. 16.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Sahil’s face turned red, and he clenched his fists.”
    (a) angry (b) tired (c) cold
  17. 17.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek. (b) The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour. (c) I looked at the white peak of the mountain.
  18. 18.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Our teacher is a fountain of ideas.”
    (a) simile (b) neither (c) metaphor
  19. 19.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ lemon made Riya pull a face.”
    (a) nice (b) sour (c) okay
  20. 20.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) Colourful kites dotted the blue sky. (b) The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy. (c) Rain drummed on the tin roof all night.
  21. 21.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The snake gave an angry hiss and slid away.”
    (a) angry (b) hiss (c) snake
  22. 22.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The snow was a white blanket on the hills.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  23. 23.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) quickly (b) river (c) meow
  24. 24.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap, whispered Kabir. (b) “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap,” whispered Kabir. (c) “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap” whispered Kabir.
  25. 25.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake” whispered Fatima. (b) “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake”, whispered Fatima. (c) “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake,” whispered Fatima.
  26. 26.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The crowd cheered loudly for our team. (b) The tree bark felt rough under my fingers. (c) The lake sparkled under the full moon.
  27. 27.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ chilli made my eyes water.”
    (a) good (b) nice (c) fiery
  28. 28.Which strong verb means “shut hard and loudly”? (a) crawled (b) slammed (c) sprinkled
  29. 29.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Rohan ___ crossly under his breath.”
    (a) muttered (b) spoke (c) had
  30. 30.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) happy (b) boom (c) teacher
  31. 31.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The pigs oink in the muddy farmyard.”
    (a) oink (b) pigs (c) muddy
  32. 32.Which word fits the gap best?
    “I dropped my ice cream in the mud,” ___ Priya.
    (a) sobbed (b) giggled (c) asked
  33. 33.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Grandpa’s beard is as white as snow.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  34. 34.Which strong verb could replace “ate” in this sentence?
    “The mouse ate the corner of the cheese.”
    (a) shouted (b) scrubbed (c) nibbled
  35. 35.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, the exam has begun,” whispered Yash. (b) Shh, the exam has begun, whispered Yash. (c) “Shh, the exam has begun”, whispered Yash.
  36. 36.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The camera went ___ at the party.”
    (a) click (b) neigh (c) pitter-patter
  37. 37.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) achoo (b) green (c) kind
  38. 38.What makes the sound “click”? (a) a camera (b) pakoras in hot oil (c) a doorbell
  39. 39.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The old car was a tired donkey on the hill. (b) Dad’s voice boomed like thunder. (c) The teacher wrote the date on the board.
  40. 40.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The snow was a white blanket on the hills. (b) Grandpa’s beard is as white as snow. (c) The dog barked at the postman.

Answer key

  1. slurp
  2. showing
  3. glanced
  4. Tears filled Kavya’s eyes, and she stared at the floor.
  5. showing
  6. hearing
  7. Ishaan hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.
  8. Pooja’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home.
  9. smell
  10. simile
  11. The baby slept like a log.
  12. Ananya could barely keep her eyes open at dinner.
  13. The pressure cooker hissed three times.
  14. sad
  15. whispered
  16. angry
  17. The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek.
  18. metaphor
  19. sour
  20. Rain drummed on the tin roof all night.
  21. hiss
  22. metaphor
  23. meow
  24. “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap,” whispered Kabir.
  25. “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake,” whispered Fatima.
  26. The crowd cheered loudly for our team.
  27. fiery
  28. slammed
  29. muttered
  30. boom
  31. oink
  32. sobbed
  33. simile
  34. nibbled
  35. “Shh, the exam has begun,” whispered Yash.
  36. click
  37. achoo
  38. a camera
  39. The old car was a tired donkey on the hill.
  40. Grandpa’s beard is as white as snow.

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