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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 798 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Kabir finished his homework early. (b) The night was as dark as ink. (c) Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers.
  2. 2.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as ice”
    (a) cold (b) hot (c) loud
  3. 3.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The oranges ___ out of the bag and down the steps.”
    (a) fell (b) made (c) tumbled
  4. 4.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as honey”
    (a) sour (b) sweet (c) bitter
  5. 5.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) teacher (b) roar (c) yellow
  6. 6.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) window (b) tall (c) clang
  7. 7.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The teacher wrote the date on the board. (b) His heart was a drum during the race. (c) My little sister is as busy as a bee.
  8. 8.Which sense does this line use?
    “I saw a rainbow over the green fields.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) touch
  9. 9.What makes the sound “crunch”? (a) a heavy bag falling (b) a crisp papad (c) a dog
  10. 10.Which sense does this line use?
    “A whistle blew at the start of the race.”
    (a) sight (b) taste (c) hearing
  11. 11.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Help, the boat is sinking!” shouted Simran. (b) “Help, the boat is sinking” shouted Simran. (c) Help, the boat is sinking! shouted Simran.
  12. 12.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Pooja’s teeth chattered, and she pulled her shawl tighter.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  13. 13.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The cat sat on the warm mat.”
    (a) simile (b) neither (c) metaphor
  14. 14.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Neel drummed his fingers and stared at the clock.”
    (a) sad (b) bored (c) scared
  15. 15.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The baby giggled when Dad made funny noises. (b) The fragrance of roses drifted through the window. (c) The wet soap slipped from my hands.
  16. 16.What makes the sound “clang”? (a) a camera (b) a steel plate falling (c) an owl
  17. 17.What makes the sound “splash”? (a) a jump into a pool (b) a doorbell (c) thunder
  18. 18.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) whoosh (b) slowly (c) table
  19. 19.Which strong verb could replace “drank” in this sentence?
    “After the race, Kabir drank a whole bottle of water.”
    (a) clutched (b) soared (c) gulped
  20. 20.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The puffy clouds floated across the sky.”
    (a) floated (b) clouds (c) puffy
  21. 21.Which strong verb means “flew high in the sky”? (a) crept (b) nibbled (c) soared
  22. 22.Which sense does this line use?
    “The sunset painted the sky orange and pink.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) sight
  23. 23.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) Lightning flashed across the night sky. (b) The thunder crashed and roared. (c) The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck.
  24. 24.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as grass”
    (a) loud (b) green (c) red
  25. 25.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Why is the sky blue? asked Simran. (b) “Why is the sky blue?” asked Simran. (c) “Why is the sky blue” asked Simran.
  26. 26.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as glass”
    (a) muddy (b) clear (c) soft
  27. 27.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The taxis ___ in the busy street.”
    (a) drip (b) neigh (c) honk
  28. 28.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ baby giggled in the cot.”
    (a) chubby (b) fine (c) nice
  29. 29.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) pop (b) slowly (c) gentle
  30. 30.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Sahil’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.”
    (a) hungry (b) tired (c) angry
  31. 31.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ puppy chewed my slipper.”
    (a) naughty (b) nice (c) good
  32. 32.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The sea tasted very salty. (b) I saw a rainbow over the green fields. (c) The river water felt icy on my feet.
  33. 33.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Saanvi kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  34. 34.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The stale bread crumbled in my fingers.”
    (a) bread (b) crumbled (c) stale
  35. 35.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Diya ___ her mother’s hand in the crowd.”
    (a) did (b) held (c) clutched
  36. 36.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The pigs ___ in the muddy farmyard.”
    (a) croak (b) oink (c) hiss
  37. 37.Which sense does this line use?
    “The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek.”
    (a) sight (b) touch (c) smell
  38. 38.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The baby ___ across the carpet to her toy.”
    (a) moved (b) did (c) crawled
  39. 39.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The bitter gourd tasted bitter. (b) The smell of toast drifted up the stairs. (c) The pressure cooker hissed three times.
  40. 40.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kabir is happy? (a) Kabir grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road. (b) Kabir was happy. (c) Kabir’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again.

Answer key

  1. Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers.
  2. cold
  3. tumbled
  4. sweet
  5. roar
  6. clang
  7. His heart was a drum during the race.
  8. sight
  9. a crisp papad
  10. hearing
  11. “Help, the boat is sinking!” shouted Simran.
  12. showing
  13. neither
  14. bored
  15. The baby giggled when Dad made funny noises.
  16. a steel plate falling
  17. a jump into a pool
  18. whoosh
  19. gulped
  20. puffy
  21. soared
  22. sight
  23. The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck.
  24. green
  25. “Why is the sky blue?” asked Simran.
  26. clear
  27. honk
  28. chubby
  29. pop
  30. hungry
  31. naughty
  32. The river water felt icy on my feet.
  33. showing
  34. stale
  35. clutched
  36. oink
  37. touch
  38. crawled
  39. The pressure cooker hissed three times.
  40. Kabir grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.

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