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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 803 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The rooster crowed cock-a-doodle-doo at dawn.”
    (a) rooster (b) cock-a-doodle-doo (c) dawn
  2. 2.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink. (b) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue. (c) Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.
  3. 3.What makes the sound “meow”? (a) a duck (b) a cat (c) a car horn
  4. 4.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tenzin folded his arms and glared at his brother.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  5. 5.What makes the sound “hiss”? (a) a visitor at the door (b) a snake (c) a microwave
  6. 6.Which strong verb could replace “flew” in this sentence?
    “A butterfly flew from flower to flower.”
    (a) fluttered (b) clutched (c) shouted
  7. 7.What makes the sound “sizzle”? (a) a sparrow (b) pakoras in hot oil (c) a camera
  8. 8.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The bees buzzed around the hive. (b) The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck. (c) The fragrance of roses drifted through the window.
  9. 9.Which strong verb means “wrote quickly and untidily”? (a) sobbed (b) scribbled (c) clutched
  10. 10.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aryan is tired? (a) Aryan was tired. (b) Aryan’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet. (c) Aryan’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again.
  11. 11.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The leaking tap went drip in the dark.”
    (a) tap (b) drip (c) dark
  12. 12.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ pebbles sparkled in the stream.”
    (a) good (b) shiny (c) nice
  13. 13.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ chilli made my eyes water.”
    (a) good (b) nice (c) fiery
  14. 14.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a pancake”
    (a) round (b) flat (c) tall
  15. 15.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Sahil’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.”
    (a) cold (b) angry (c) scared
  16. 16.Which strong verb could replace “threw” in this sentence?
    “The bowler threw the ball towards the stumps.”
    (a) sobbed (b) strolled (c) hurled
  17. 17.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The motorbike went vroom down the road.”
    (a) motorbike (b) vroom (c) road
  18. 18.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Do not tell anyone about the party,” ___ Priya.
    (a) shouted (b) asked (c) whispered
  19. 19.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Neel is scared? (a) Neel threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!” (b) Neel was scared. (c) Neel’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.
  20. 20.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Priya was bored.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  21. 21.Which sense does this line use?
    “The kulfi tasted of cardamom and saffron.”
    (a) taste (b) hearing (c) touch
  22. 22.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Imran could barely keep his eyes open at dinner.”
    (a) tired (b) hungry (c) happy
  23. 23.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Do not tell anyone about the party___” whispered Imran.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  24. 24.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The golden sun rose over the hills.”
    (a) golden (b) rose (c) sun
  25. 25.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Farhan hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) sad (b) tired (c) happy
  26. 26.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Pooja gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed her eyes shut.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  27. 27.Which word fits the gap best?
    “I have lost my favourite teddy,” ___ Aisha.
    (a) sobbed (b) asked (c) giggled
  28. 28.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The bus stopped at the school gate. (b) The clouds were cotton balls in the sky. (c) The puppy’s nose was as cold as ice.
  29. 29.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The steaming soup filled our bowls.”
    (a) steaming (b) filled (c) soup
  30. 30.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aryan hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  31. 31.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Joseph’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home.”
    (a) happy (b) scared (c) sad
  32. 32.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “The lost calf walked through the fields.”
    (a) sipped (b) stared (c) wandered
  33. 33.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The sparrows chirp on my window sill.”
    (a) sparrows (b) window (c) chirp
  34. 34.Which sense does this line use?
    “I looked at the white peak of the mountain.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) hearing
  35. 35.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a feather”
    (a) heavy (b) dark (c) light
  36. 36.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ananya is scared? (a) Ananya was scared. (b) Ananya beamed and hugged everyone in sight. (c) Ananya’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door.
  37. 37.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Priya’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home.”
    (a) angry (b) happy (c) sad
  38. 38.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “We heard a loud ___ at the front door.”
    (a) drip (b) beep (c) knock
  39. 39.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Who painted this lovely picture?” ___ Ishaan.
    (a) asked (b) sobbed (c) giggled
  40. 40.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang. (b) The new shoes shone like stars. (c) Kabir finished his homework early.

Answer key

  1. cock-a-doodle-doo
  2. The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink.
  3. a cat
  4. showing
  5. a snake
  6. fluttered
  7. pakoras in hot oil
  8. The fragrance of roses drifted through the window.
  9. scribbled
  10. Aryan’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again.
  11. drip
  12. shiny
  13. fiery
  14. flat
  15. scared
  16. hurled
  17. vroom
  18. whispered
  19. Neel’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.
  20. telling
  21. taste
  22. tired
  23. a comma (,)
  24. golden
  25. happy
  26. showing
  27. sobbed
  28. The clouds were cotton balls in the sky.
  29. steaming
  30. showing
  31. sad
  32. wandered
  33. chirp
  34. sight
  35. light
  36. Ananya’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door.
  37. sad
  38. knock
  39. asked
  40. The new shoes shone like stars.

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