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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 822 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aarav is cold? (a) Aarav was cold. (b) Aarav’s nose turned pink, and he pulled on a woolly cap. (c) Aarav kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.
  2. 2.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet___” giggled Sahil.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  3. 3.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tara kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  4. 4.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Joseph is happy? (a) Joseph threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!” (b) Joseph beamed and hugged everyone in sight. (c) Joseph was happy.
  5. 5.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row. (b) The thunder crashed and roared. (c) The scent of Grandma’s perfume filled the room.
  6. 6.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “An owl gave a hoot from the banyan tree.”
    (a) tree (b) owl (c) hoot
  7. 7.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, the film is starting” whispered Tara. (b) Shh, the film is starting, whispered Tara. (c) “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Tara.
  8. 8.Which sense does this line use?
    “The thunder crashed and roared.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) sight
  9. 9.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ car zoomed past us.”
    (a) okay (b) nice (c) sleek
  10. 10.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) gentle (b) mango (c) pitter-patter
  11. 11.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ishaan is happy? (a) Ishaan gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut. (b) Ishaan beamed and hugged everyone in sight. (c) Ishaan was happy.
  12. 12.Which sense does this line use?
    “Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) sight
  13. 13.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) moo (b) chair (c) window
  14. 14.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The leaking tap went ___ in the dark.”
    (a) quack (b) drip (c) vroom
  15. 15.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ananya threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!””
    (a) hungry (b) angry (c) sad
  16. 16.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy. (b) The glue felt sticky between my fingers. (c) I looked at the white peak of the mountain.
  17. 17.Which sense does this line use?
    “The lake sparkled under the full moon.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) smell
  18. 18.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Nisha is happy? (a) Nisha threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!” (b) Nisha was happy. (c) Nisha beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  19. 19.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink. (b) The bees buzzed around the hive. (c) The medicine had a bitter taste.
  20. 20.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Dev felt very happy.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  21. 21.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Come back here, Moti!” ___ Nisha.
    (a) shouted (b) giggled (c) whispered
  22. 22.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The coach ___ to us from across the big field.”
    (a) got (b) spoke (c) shouted
  23. 23.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as grass”
    (a) loud (b) red (c) green
  24. 24.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The pigs ___ in the muddy farmyard.”
    (a) sizzle (b) oink (c) click
  25. 25.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) I heard waves crashing on the rocks. (b) The sea tasted very salty. (c) Dad sniffed the milk to check if it was fresh.
  26. 26.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Sneha is happy? (a) Sneha grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road. (b) Sneha’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class. (c) Sneha was happy.
  27. 27.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The rickety ladder wobbled under Dad’s feet.”
    (a) ladder (b) wobbled (c) rickety
  28. 28.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Stop that runaway goat”! shouted Aryan. (b) “Stop that runaway goat!” shouted Aryan. (c) Stop that runaway goat! shouted Aryan.
  29. 29.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ananya gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.”
    (a) tired (b) happy (c) hungry
  30. 30.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Neel felt very cold.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  31. 31.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy. (b) The warm sand tickled my toes. (c) I heard the koel singing in the mango tree.
  32. 32.What makes the sound “cock-a-doodle-doo”? (a) a rooster (b) a snake (c) thunder
  33. 33.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The baby giggled when Dad made funny noises. (b) The fish market had a strong smell. (c) I tasted the soup and added more salt.
  34. 34.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ road twisted up the mountain.”
    (a) okay (b) good (c) narrow
  35. 35.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek. (b) The lake sparkled under the full moon. (c) The fish market had a strong smell.
  36. 36.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Where did you put my blue pencil?” ___ Neel.
    (a) giggled (b) sobbed (c) asked
  37. 37.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark. (b) The scent of Grandma’s perfume filled the room. (c) The sea tasted very salty.
  38. 38.Which strong verb means “took a very quick look”? (a) glanced (b) nibbled (c) strolled
  39. 39.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ananya shivered and stamped her feet in the snow.”
    (a) cold (b) bored (c) sad
  40. 40.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The mysterious parcel arrived on my birthday.”
    (a) mysterious (b) parcel (c) arrived

Answer key

  1. Aarav’s nose turned pink, and he pulled on a woolly cap.
  2. a comma (,)
  3. showing
  4. Joseph beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  5. I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row.
  6. hoot
  7. “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Tara.
  8. hearing
  9. sleek
  10. pitter-patter
  11. Ishaan beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  12. sight
  13. moo
  14. drip
  15. angry
  16. The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy.
  17. sight
  18. Nisha beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  19. The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink.
  20. telling
  21. shouted
  22. shouted
  23. green
  24. oink
  25. Dad sniffed the milk to check if it was fresh.
  26. Sneha grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.
  27. rickety
  28. “Stop that runaway goat!” shouted Aryan.
  29. hungry
  30. telling
  31. The warm sand tickled my toes.
  32. a rooster
  33. The baby giggled when Dad made funny noises.
  34. narrow
  35. The fish market had a strong smell.
  36. asked
  37. Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.
  38. glanced
  39. cold
  40. mysterious

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