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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 836 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The clouds were cotton balls in the sky.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  2. 2.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The puppy’s nose was as cold as ice. (b) We ate rice and dal for dinner. (c) The lake was a mirror for the mountains.
  3. 3.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “We walked home through the deep mud.”
    (a) soared (b) trudged (c) sipped
  4. 4.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Farhan grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  5. 5.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ monkey stole Grandpa’s cap.”
    (a) fine (b) cheeky (c) good
  6. 6.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, the exam has begun___” whispered Simran.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  7. 7.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Grandpa reads the newspaper every day.”
    (a) simile (b) neither (c) metaphor
  8. 8.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Kabir gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  9. 9.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Vihaan sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.”
    (a) happy (b) cold (c) sad
  10. 10.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) table (b) yellow (c) honk
  11. 11.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ dosa crackled on the pan.”
    (a) nice (b) crispy (c) good
  12. 12.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ peacock spread its tail.”
    (a) nice (b) good (c) shimmering
  13. 13.Which strong verb could replace “held” in this sentence?
    “Diya held her mother’s hand in the crowd.”
    (a) peered (b) wandered (c) clutched
  14. 14.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The eagle ___ above the hills.”
    (a) soared (b) got (c) flew
  15. 15.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Ishaan was sad.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  16. 16.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Nani ___ sugar over the hot pancakes.”
    (a) sprinkled (b) put (c) came
  17. 17.Which strong verb could replace “shut” in this sentence?
    “Kabir shut the door when he was cross.”
    (a) slammed (b) crawled (c) soared
  18. 18.Which sense does this line use?
    “The mint chutney tasted sour and salty.”
    (a) smell (b) taste (c) hearing
  19. 19.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ lemon made Riya pull a face.”
    (a) good (b) sour (c) nice
  20. 20.Which strong verb could replace “cleaned” in this sentence?
    “Mum cleaned the muddy floor until it shone.”
    (a) soared (b) trudged (c) scrubbed
  21. 21.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ kite danced in the sky.”
    (a) colourful (b) fine (c) good
  22. 22.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) green (b) pencil (c) whoosh
  23. 23.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ teddy bear sat on my bed.”
    (a) good (b) okay (c) cuddly
  24. 24.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) green (b) hiss (c) river
  25. 25.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ishaan’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.”
    (a) happy (b) tired (c) hungry
  26. 26.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Run, the bus is leaving___” shouted Simran.
    (a) an exclamation mark (!) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  27. 27.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Diya is happy? (a) Diya kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard. (b) Diya grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road. (c) Diya was happy.
  28. 28.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The cheeky monkey stole Grandpa’s cap.”
    (a) stole (b) cheeky (c) monkey
  29. 29.Which strong verb means “flew high in the sky”? (a) crawled (b) soared (c) whispered
  30. 30.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Hee hee, stop tickling me___” giggled Saanvi.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  31. 31.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) boom (b) gentle (c) kind
  32. 32.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet___” giggled Nisha.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  33. 33.Which strong verb could replace “drank” in this sentence?
    “Grandma drank her hot tea slowly.”
    (a) peered (b) sipped (c) tossed
  34. 34.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Pooja drummed her fingers and stared at the clock.”
    (a) hungry (b) happy (c) bored
  35. 35.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Nisha was scared.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  36. 36.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ lake reflected the hills.”
    (a) nice (b) okay (c) glassy
  37. 37.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The icy wind howled all night.”
    (a) icy (b) howled (c) wind
  38. 38.Which strong verb could replace “ran” in this sentence?
    “The two friends ran to the gate to see who was fastest.”
    (a) raced (b) gobbled (c) peered
  39. 39.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The gigantic tree towered over the house.”
    (a) towered (b) tree (c) gigantic
  40. 40.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark. (b) The mint chutney tasted sour and salty. (c) The smell of toast drifted up the stairs.

Answer key

  1. metaphor
  2. The puppy’s nose was as cold as ice.
  3. trudged
  4. showing
  5. cheeky
  6. a comma (,)
  7. neither
  8. showing
  9. sad
  10. honk
  11. crispy
  12. shimmering
  13. clutched
  14. soared
  15. telling
  16. sprinkled
  17. slammed
  18. taste
  19. sour
  20. scrubbed
  21. colourful
  22. whoosh
  23. cuddly
  24. hiss
  25. hungry
  26. an exclamation mark (!)
  27. Diya grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.
  28. cheeky
  29. soared
  30. a comma (,)
  31. boom
  32. a comma (,)
  33. sipped
  34. bored
  35. telling
  36. glassy
  37. icy
  38. raced
  39. gigantic
  40. The mint chutney tasted sour and salty.

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