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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 839 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Tenzin is happy? (a) Tenzin was happy. (b) Tenzin threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!” (c) Tenzin hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.
  2. 2.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ cactus pricked my finger.”
    (a) nice (b) spiky (c) okay
  3. 3.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I dropped my ice cream in the mud___” sobbed Rohan.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)
  4. 4.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The frogs ___ all night in the monsoon.”
    (a) hoot (b) drip (c) croak
  5. 5.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The children chattered like a flock of parrots.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  6. 6.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The cheeky monkey stole Grandpa’s cap.”
    (a) stole (b) cheeky (c) monkey
  7. 7.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The chubby baby giggled in the cot.”
    (a) giggled (b) baby (c) chubby
  8. 8.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Meera watered the plants in the morning. (b) Our teacher is a fountain of ideas. (c) The old bread was as hard as a rock.
  9. 9.What makes the sound “beep”? (a) a horse (b) the wind (c) a microwave
  10. 10.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Kabir’s face turned red, and he clenched his fists.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  11. 11.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ fireworks lit up the sky.”
    (a) good (b) nice (c) dazzling
  12. 12.Which strong verb could replace “took” in this sentence?
    “The monkey took the banana from my hand.”
    (a) grabbed (b) crawled (c) wandered
  13. 13.Which sense does this line use?
    “The new bicycle shone bright red.”
    (a) sight (b) touch (c) smell
  14. 14.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The bitter gourd tasted bitter. (b) The tree bark felt rough under my fingers. (c) Diyas twinkled on every windowsill.
  15. 15.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ market buzzed with voices.”
    (a) nice (b) crowded (c) okay
  16. 16.Which sense does this line use?
    “The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour.”
    (a) hearing (b) smell (c) taste
  17. 17.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Why is the sky blue” asked Joseph. (b) “Why is the sky blue?” asked Joseph. (c) “Why is the sky blue”? asked Joseph.
  18. 18.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Look out, the shelf is falling___” shouted Riya.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) an exclamation mark (!) (c) a question mark (?)
  19. 19.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The clouds were cotton balls in the sky. (b) The new shoes shone like stars. (c) The train left the station at nine.
  20. 20.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The mysterious parcel arrived on my birthday.”
    (a) mysterious (b) parcel (c) arrived
  21. 21.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Maria is angry? (a) Maria was angry. (b) Maria gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping. (c) Maria stamped her foot and slammed the door.
  22. 22.Which strong verb could replace “drank” in this sentence?
    “Grandma drank her hot tea slowly.”
    (a) giggled (b) sipped (c) leapt
  23. 23.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “That joke is so funny___” giggled Dev.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  24. 24.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aarav is hungry? (a) Aarav froze and held his breath as the floor creaked. (b) Aarav kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch. (c) Aarav was hungry.
  25. 25.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The lake was a mirror for the mountains.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  26. 26.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The shiny pebbles sparkled in the stream.”
    (a) shiny (b) pebbles (c) sparkled
  27. 27.What makes the sound “thud”? (a) a heavy bag falling (b) a lion (c) a bee
  28. 28.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The gigantic tree towered over the house.”
    (a) tree (b) towered (c) gigantic
  29. 29.Which strong verb means “walked in a slow, relaxed way”? (a) strolled (b) clutched (c) gobbled
  30. 30.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tenzin hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) bored (b) tired (c) happy
  31. 31.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Nisha stamped her foot and slammed the door.”
    (a) happy (b) angry (c) sad
  32. 32.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The cuddly teddy bear sat on my bed.”
    (a) bear (b) sat (c) cuddly
  33. 33.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) sizzle (b) slowly (c) garden
  34. 34.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) woof (b) green (c) river
  35. 35.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The stars twinkled like tiny diamonds. (b) The teacher wrote the date on the board. (c) The sun was a golden ball of fire.
  36. 36.What makes the sound “vroom”? (a) a sneeze (b) a motorbike (c) a duck
  37. 37.Which strong verb means “moved on hands and knees”? (a) hurled (b) crawled (c) scribbled
  38. 38.Which sense does this line use?
    “The kulfi tasted of cardamom and saffron.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) taste
  39. 39.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The cactus was prickly when I touched it. (b) We watched the peacock open its blue tail. (c) The bees buzzed around the hive.
  40. 40.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Neel is scared? (a) Neel’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door. (b) Neel rubbed his hands and blew on his fingers. (c) Neel was scared.

Answer key

  1. Tenzin hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.
  2. spiky
  3. a comma (,)
  4. croak
  5. simile
  6. cheeky
  7. chubby
  8. Our teacher is a fountain of ideas.
  9. a microwave
  10. showing
  11. dazzling
  12. grabbed
  13. sight
  14. The bitter gourd tasted bitter.
  15. crowded
  16. taste
  17. “Why is the sky blue?” asked Joseph.
  18. an exclamation mark (!)
  19. The clouds were cotton balls in the sky.
  20. mysterious
  21. Maria stamped her foot and slammed the door.
  22. sipped
  23. a comma (,)
  24. Aarav kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.
  25. metaphor
  26. shiny
  27. a heavy bag falling
  28. gigantic
  29. strolled
  30. happy
  31. angry
  32. cuddly
  33. sizzle
  34. woof
  35. The stars twinkled like tiny diamonds.
  36. a motorbike
  37. crawled
  38. taste
  39. The cactus was prickly when I touched it.
  40. Neel’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.

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