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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 841 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Watch out for that car!” ___ Tara.
    (a) whispered (b) giggled (c) shouted
  2. 2.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The train left the station at nine. (b) My little sister is as busy as a bee. (c) The library is a treasure chest of stories.
  3. 3.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ sun rose over the hills.”
    (a) okay (b) golden (c) fine
  4. 4.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Maria could barely keep her eyes open at dinner.”
    (a) sad (b) tired (c) cold
  5. 5.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Farhan is happy? (a) Farhan froze and held his breath as the floor creaked. (b) Farhan beamed and hugged everyone in sight. (c) Farhan was happy.
  6. 6.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) gentle (b) garden (c) croak
  7. 7.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ parcel arrived on my birthday.”
    (a) fine (b) mysterious (c) okay
  8. 8.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue. (b) Dad sniffed the milk to check if it was fresh. (c) The old door creaked as it opened.
  9. 9.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The fireworks burst like giant flowers. (b) Grandpa reads the newspaper every day. (c) The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang.
  10. 10.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, the baby is sleeping” whispered Aryan. (b) Shh, the baby is sleeping, whispered Aryan. (c) “Shh, the baby is sleeping,” whispered Aryan.
  11. 11.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) yellow (b) roar (c) pencil
  12. 12.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Farhan is sad? (a) Farhan laughed, clapped and twirled around the room. (b) Farhan was sad. (c) Farhan sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.
  13. 13.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The train left the station at nine. (b) The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang. (c) The new shoes shone like stars.
  14. 14.Which strong verb could replace “put” in this sentence?
    “Nani put sugar over the hot pancakes.”
    (a) sprinkled (b) glanced (c) crept
  15. 15.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The baby slept in the afternoon. (b) The fireworks burst like giant flowers. (c) Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers.
  16. 16.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The golden sun rose over the hills.”
    (a) rose (b) sun (c) golden
  17. 17.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) meow (b) teacher (c) pencil
  18. 18.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “I have lost my favourite teddy”, sobbed Dev. (b) “I have lost my favourite teddy,” sobbed Dev. (c) I have lost my favourite teddy, sobbed Dev.
  19. 19.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Meera watered the plants in the morning.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  20. 20.Which strong verb could replace “drank” in this sentence?
    “After the race, Kabir drank a whole bottle of water.”
    (a) wandered (b) sprinkled (c) gulped
  21. 21.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Joseph’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  22. 22.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ teddy bear sat on my bed.”
    (a) cuddly (b) good (c) fine
  23. 23.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ wind howled all night.”
    (a) icy (b) fine (c) good
  24. 24.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Manav is bored? (a) Manav was bored. (b) Manav could barely keep his eyes open at dinner. (c) Manav kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.
  25. 25.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “An owl gave a ___ from the banyan tree.”
    (a) hoot (b) splash (c) thud
  26. 26.Which strong verb means “spoke very softly”? (a) leapt (b) grabbed (c) whispered
  27. 27.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose,” ___ Sahil.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  28. 28.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as ice”
    (a) loud (b) cold (c) hot
  29. 29.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ mangoes filled the basket.”
    (a) okay (b) nice (c) juicy
  30. 30.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The children ___ at the giant elephant in surprise.”
    (a) stared (b) had (c) looked
  31. 31.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “Ravi drank his lassi with a slurp.”
    (a) drank (b) lassi (c) slurp
  32. 32.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The foaming river rushed over the rocks.”
    (a) rushed (b) foaming (c) river
  33. 33.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The juicy mangoes filled the basket.”
    (a) mangoes (b) juicy (c) filled
  34. 34.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ market buzzed with voices.”
    (a) fine (b) okay (c) crowded
  35. 35.What makes the sound “ding-dong”? (a) a doorbell (b) a car horn (c) the wind
  36. 36.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Stop that runaway goat!” ___ Zoya.
    (a) giggled (b) whispered (c) shouted
  37. 37.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The patchwork quilt covered the bed.”
    (a) quilt (b) covered (c) patchwork
  38. 38.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) green (b) teacher (c) knock
  39. 39.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Catch the ball!” ___ Ananya.
    (a) giggled (b) whispered (c) shouted
  40. 40.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “How many stars are in the sky”? asked Rohan. (b) How many stars are in the sky? asked Rohan. (c) “How many stars are in the sky?” asked Rohan.

Answer key

  1. shouted
  2. The library is a treasure chest of stories.
  3. golden
  4. tired
  5. Farhan beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  6. croak
  7. mysterious
  8. The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.
  9. The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang.
  10. “Shh, the baby is sleeping,” whispered Aryan.
  11. roar
  12. Farhan sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.
  13. The new shoes shone like stars.
  14. sprinkled
  15. Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers.
  16. golden
  17. meow
  18. “I have lost my favourite teddy,” sobbed Dev.
  19. neither
  20. gulped
  21. showing
  22. cuddly
  23. icy
  24. Manav kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.
  25. hoot
  26. whispered
  27. giggled
  28. cold
  29. juicy
  30. stared
  31. slurp
  32. foaming
  33. juicy
  34. crowded
  35. a doorbell
  36. shouted
  37. patchwork
  38. knock
  39. shouted
  40. “How many stars are in the sky?” asked Rohan.

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