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Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 843 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Manav is happy? (a) Manav threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!” (b) Manav grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road. (c) Manav was happy.
  2. 2.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “That joke is so funny___” giggled Manav.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  3. 3.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake” whispered Sneha. (b) “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake,” whispered Sneha. (c) Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake, whispered Sneha.
  4. 4.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) tall (b) mango (c) drip
  5. 5.Which strong verb means “spoke very softly”? (a) scrubbed (b) scribbled (c) whispered
  6. 6.What makes the sound “moo”? (a) a duck (b) a cow (c) a snake
  7. 7.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kabir is happy? (a) Kabir was happy. (b) Kabir threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!” (c) Kabir beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  8. 8.Which sentence is a simile? (a) Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers. (b) The elephant moved like a slow grey hill. (c) The bus stopped at the school gate.
  9. 9.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ lion dozed in the shade.”
    (a) okay (b) sleepy (c) fine
  10. 10.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Riya is angry? (a) Riya was angry. (b) Riya’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class. (c) Riya’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists.
  11. 11.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The dog barked at the postman.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  12. 12.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a bee”
    (a) silent (b) lazy (c) busy
  13. 13.Which sense does this line use?
    “The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink.”
    (a) sight (b) touch (c) smell
  14. 14.What makes the sound “roar”? (a) a bee (b) a rooster (c) a lion
  15. 15.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The lake shone like a mirror in the sun. (b) The playground was an oven in May. (c) The train left the station at nine.
  16. 16.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Shh, we are in the library, whispered Neel. (b) “Shh, we are in the library” whispered Neel. (c) “Shh, we are in the library,” whispered Neel.
  17. 17.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The doorbell went ding-dong at noon.”
    (a) ding-dong (b) doorbell (c) noon
  18. 18.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as an ox”
    (a) strong (b) weak (c) tiny
  19. 19.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) thud (b) yellow (c) chair
  20. 20.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen. (b) I heard waves crashing on the rocks. (c) The sea tasted very salty.
  21. 21.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “Dad gave a loud ___ in the dusty room.”
    (a) pop (b) achoo (c) cock-a-doodle-doo
  22. 22.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Shh, we are in the library,” ___ Fatima.
    (a) shouted (b) asked (c) whispered
  23. 23.Which strong verb means “walked in a slow, relaxed way”? (a) gulped (b) strolled (c) giggled
  24. 24.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Yash is happy? (a) Yash’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door. (b) Yash hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (c) Yash was happy.
  25. 25.Which sense does this line use?
    “I felt the cool breeze on my face.”
    (a) smell (b) touch (c) taste
  26. 26.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap,” whispered Sahil. (b) “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap” whispered Sahil. (c) “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap”, whispered Sahil.
  27. 27.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The squishy cushion sank under me.”
    (a) cushion (b) squishy (c) sank
  28. 28.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) I tasted the soup and added more salt. (b) The tree bark felt rough under my fingers. (c) A whistle blew at the start of the race.
  29. 29.Which sense does this line use?
    “A whistle blew at the start of the race.”
    (a) smell (b) sight (c) hearing
  30. 30.Which strong verb could replace “cleaned” in this sentence?
    “Mum cleaned the muddy floor until it shone.”
    (a) staggered (b) scrubbed (c) strolled
  31. 31.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “That joke is so funny___” giggled Simran.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  32. 32.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “My father bought a new umbrella.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  33. 33.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ishaan’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.”
    (a) angry (b) scared (c) tired
  34. 34.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) I looked at the white peak of the mountain. (b) The smell of toast drifted up the stairs. (c) The bitter gourd tasted bitter.
  35. 35.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The medicine had a bitter taste. (b) A whiff of incense floated from the temple. (c) The golden sand glittered in the sun.
  36. 36.Which sense does this line use?
    “The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck.”
    (a) taste (b) hearing (c) touch
  37. 37.Which strong verb means “spoke in a low, grumpy voice”? (a) muttered (b) nibbled (c) fluttered
  38. 38.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My goldfish has gone missing,” ___ Kavya.
    (a) giggled (b) sobbed (c) asked
  39. 39.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Let us keep the surprise a secret,” whispered Tara. (b) “Let us keep the surprise a secret” whispered Tara. (c) “Let us keep the surprise a secret”, whispered Tara.
  40. 40.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The stale bread crumbled in my fingers.”
    (a) bread (b) crumbled (c) stale

Answer key

  1. Manav grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.
  2. a comma (,)
  3. “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake,” whispered Sneha.
  4. drip
  5. whispered
  6. a cow
  7. Kabir beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  8. The elephant moved like a slow grey hill.
  9. sleepy
  10. Riya’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists.
  11. neither
  12. busy
  13. smell
  14. a lion
  15. The playground was an oven in May.
  16. “Shh, we are in the library,” whispered Neel.
  17. ding-dong
  18. strong
  19. thud
  20. I heard waves crashing on the rocks.
  21. achoo
  22. whispered
  23. strolled
  24. Yash hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.
  25. touch
  26. “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap,” whispered Sahil.
  27. squishy
  28. I tasted the soup and added more salt.
  29. hearing
  30. scrubbed
  31. a comma (,)
  32. neither
  33. scared
  34. I looked at the white peak of the mountain.
  35. A whiff of incense floated from the temple.
  36. touch
  37. muttered
  38. sobbed
  39. “Let us keep the surprise a secret,” whispered Tara.
  40. stale

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