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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 845 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Kabir finished his homework early. (b) The stars were diamonds in the night sky. (c) Dad’s voice boomed like thunder.
  2. 2.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Zoya was cold.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  3. 3.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) kind (b) achoo (c) teacher
  4. 4.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “The tired runner walked over the finish line.”
    (a) staggered (b) blazed (c) grabbed
  5. 5.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The sunset painted the sky orange and pink. (b) The pressure cooker hissed three times. (c) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.
  6. 6.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Is it time for lunch yet”? asked Diya. (b) “Is it time for lunch yet” asked Diya. (c) “Is it time for lunch yet?” asked Diya.
  7. 7.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) My goldfish has gone missing, sobbed Saanvi. (b) “My goldfish has gone missing”, sobbed Saanvi. (c) “My goldfish has gone missing,” sobbed Saanvi.
  8. 8.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The fluffy kitten curled up on my lap.”
    (a) fluffy (b) curled (c) kitten
  9. 9.Which strong verb could replace “burned” in this sentence?
    “The bonfire burned on Lohri night.”
    (a) giggled (b) blazed (c) sobbed
  10. 10.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The thunder went boom over the hills.”
    (a) hills (b) boom (c) thunder
  11. 11.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Shh, the baby is sleeping, whispered Simran. (b) “Shh, the baby is sleeping”, whispered Simran. (c) “Shh, the baby is sleeping,” whispered Simran.
  12. 12.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “Our cat lets out a sad ___ at night.”
    (a) click (b) meow (c) splash
  13. 13.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ road twisted up the mountain.”
    (a) fine (b) narrow (c) okay
  14. 14.Which strong verb means “threw with great force”? (a) hurled (b) glanced (c) crept
  15. 15.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Yash gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  16. 16.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The snake gave an angry hiss and slid away.”
    (a) angry (b) snake (c) hiss
  17. 17.What makes the sound “croak”? (a) a frog (b) a leaking tap (c) a cow
  18. 18.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The lost calf ___ through the fields.”
    (a) walked (b) wandered (c) went
  19. 19.Which sentence is a simile? (a) We ate rice and dal for dinner. (b) Grandpa’s beard is as white as snow. (c) The snow was a white blanket on the hills.
  20. 20.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ mangoes filled the basket.”
    (a) nice (b) good (c) juicy
  21. 21.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as an ox”
    (a) strong (b) tiny (c) weak
  22. 22.Which sense does this line use?
    “The bees buzzed around the hive.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) taste
  23. 23.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The tree bark felt rough under my fingers. (b) Dad sniffed the milk to check if it was fresh. (c) The thunder crashed and roared.
  24. 24.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, the film is starting” whispered Pooja. (b) Shh, the film is starting, whispered Pooja. (c) “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Pooja.
  25. 25.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The striped snake slid under the rock.”
    (a) striped (b) snake (c) slid
  26. 26.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The snow was a white blanket on the hills. (b) The teacher wrote the date on the board. (c) My little sister is as busy as a bee.
  27. 27.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aisha is hungry? (a) Aisha was hungry. (b) Aisha kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard. (c) Aisha kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.
  28. 28.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aisha is scared? (a) Aisha’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door. (b) Aisha shivered and stamped her feet in the snow. (c) Aisha was scared.
  29. 29.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy. (b) The medicine had a bitter taste. (c) I heard the koel singing in the mango tree.
  30. 30.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ fireworks lit up the sky.”
    (a) dazzling (b) okay (c) fine
  31. 31.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ giant snored under the tree.”
    (a) good (b) okay (c) grumpy
  32. 32.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I dropped my ice cream in the mud___” sobbed Zoya.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  33. 33.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Nisha was hungry.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  34. 34.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The frogs ___ all night in the monsoon.”
    (a) quack (b) boom (c) croak
  35. 35.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The clouds were cotton balls in the sky.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  36. 36.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Meera watered the plants in the morning.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  37. 37.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “My kite is torn to pieces___” sobbed Sahil.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  38. 38.Which strong verb means “scattered tiny bits over something”? (a) scribbled (b) sprinkled (c) gobbled
  39. 39.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Farhan rubbed his hands and blew on his fingers.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  40. 40.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) slowly (b) window (c) snip

Answer key

  1. The stars were diamonds in the night sky.
  2. telling
  3. achoo
  4. staggered
  5. The sunset painted the sky orange and pink.
  6. “Is it time for lunch yet?” asked Diya.
  7. “My goldfish has gone missing,” sobbed Saanvi.
  8. fluffy
  9. blazed
  10. boom
  11. “Shh, the baby is sleeping,” whispered Simran.
  12. meow
  13. narrow
  14. hurled
  15. showing
  16. hiss
  17. a frog
  18. wandered
  19. Grandpa’s beard is as white as snow.
  20. juicy
  21. strong
  22. hearing
  23. The thunder crashed and roared.
  24. “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Pooja.
  25. striped
  26. My little sister is as busy as a bee.
  27. Aisha kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.
  28. Aisha’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door.
  29. I heard the koel singing in the mango tree.
  30. dazzling
  31. grumpy
  32. a comma (,)
  33. telling
  34. croak
  35. metaphor
  36. neither
  37. a comma (,)
  38. sprinkled
  39. showing
  40. snip

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