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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 847 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Pooja’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists.”
    (a) cold (b) angry (c) tired
  2. 2.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The pakoras sizzle in the hot oil.”
    (a) pakoras (b) sizzle (c) oil
  3. 3.Which sense does this line use?
    “A whiff of incense floated from the temple.”
    (a) hearing (b) touch (c) smell
  4. 4.Which sense does this line use?
    “The golden sand glittered in the sun.”
    (a) hearing (b) sight (c) smell
  5. 5.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ quilt covered the bed.”
    (a) nice (b) patchwork (c) okay
  6. 6.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The booming thunder shook the windows.”
    (a) shook (b) booming (c) thunder
  7. 7.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Saanvi was angry.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  8. 8.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ishaan’s teeth chattered, and he pulled his shawl tighter.”
    (a) cold (b) hungry (c) angry
  9. 9.Which strong verb could replace “looked” in this sentence?
    “The children looked at the giant elephant in surprise.”
    (a) stared (b) scrubbed (c) munched
  10. 10.Which strong verb means “drank in tiny mouthfuls”? (a) sipped (b) whispered (c) strolled
  11. 11.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Run, the bus is leaving!” shouted Zoya. (b) “Run, the bus is leaving”! shouted Zoya. (c) Run, the bus is leaving! shouted Zoya.
  12. 12.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Mum ___ the muddy floor until it shone.”
    (a) got (b) scrubbed (c) cleaned
  13. 13.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The baby ___ across the carpet to her toy.”
    (a) crawled (b) moved (c) went
  14. 14.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue. (b) We heard the train whistle far away. (c) The new bicycle shone bright red.
  15. 15.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Hee hee, stop tickling me,” ___ Imran.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  16. 16.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The bees buzzed around the hive. (b) The smell of toast drifted up the stairs. (c) The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour.
  17. 17.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap___” whispered Fatima.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  18. 18.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “We ___ home through the deep mud.”
    (a) trudged (b) walked (c) did
  19. 19.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Aryan hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) sad (b) happy (c) tired
  20. 20.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The eagle ___ above the hills.”
    (a) flew (b) soared (c) came
  21. 21.What makes the sound “clang”? (a) a lion (b) a sneeze (c) a steel plate falling
  22. 22.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ clouds floated across the sky.”
    (a) nice (b) good (c) puffy
  23. 23.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock” giggled Dev. (b) “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock,” giggled Dev. (c) Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock, giggled Dev.
  24. 24.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) kind (b) quickly (c) slurp
  25. 25.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Kabir finished his homework early. (b) The wrestler was as strong as an ox. (c) My little brother is a chatterbox.
  26. 26.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ stairs groaned under our feet.”
    (a) okay (b) creaky (c) fine
  27. 27.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The steaming soup filled our bowls.”
    (a) soup (b) steaming (c) filled
  28. 28.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Simran is angry? (a) Simran shivered and stamped her feet in the snow. (b) Simran was angry. (c) Simran threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!”
  29. 29.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The fiery chilli made my eyes water.”
    (a) fiery (b) chilli (c) made
  30. 30.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) crunch (b) tall (c) slowly
  31. 31.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The steel plate hit the stone floor with a ___.”
    (a) woof (b) clang (c) oink
  32. 32.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) I heard the koel singing in the mango tree. (b) The glue felt sticky between my fingers. (c) The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy.
  33. 33.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Ishaan gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  34. 34.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The little lamb gave a soft ___.”
    (a) oink (b) thud (c) baa
  35. 35.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ car zoomed past us.”
    (a) nice (b) sleek (c) fine
  36. 36.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, the film is starting”, whispered Arjun. (b) “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Arjun. (c) Shh, the film is starting, whispered Arjun.
  37. 37.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen. (b) The lake sparkled under the full moon. (c) The thunder crashed and roared.
  38. 38.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The sea tasted very salty. (b) The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek. (c) I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  39. 39.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ dog barked at the stranger.”
    (a) good (b) shaggy (c) nice
  40. 40.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The puppy’s nose was as cold as ice. (b) The clouds were cotton balls in the sky. (c) The baby slept in the afternoon.

Answer key

  1. angry
  2. sizzle
  3. smell
  4. sight
  5. patchwork
  6. booming
  7. telling
  8. cold
  9. stared
  10. sipped
  11. “Run, the bus is leaving!” shouted Zoya.
  12. scrubbed
  13. crawled
  14. The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.
  15. giggled
  16. The smell of toast drifted up the stairs.
  17. a comma (,)
  18. trudged
  19. happy
  20. soared
  21. a steel plate falling
  22. puffy
  23. “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock,” giggled Dev.
  24. slurp
  25. My little brother is a chatterbox.
  26. creaky
  27. steaming
  28. Simran threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!”
  29. fiery
  30. crunch
  31. clang
  32. I heard the koel singing in the mango tree.
  33. showing
  34. baa
  35. sleek
  36. “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Arjun.
  37. The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.
  38. The sea tasted very salty.
  39. shaggy
  40. The puppy’s nose was as cold as ice.

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