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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 85 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The baby ___ across the carpet to her toy.”
    (a) moved (b) crawled (c) came
  2. 2.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The wind went whoosh through the trees.”
    (a) trees (b) whoosh (c) wind
  3. 3.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Meera ___ to the bus stop before it left.”
    (a) dashed (b) ran (c) got
  4. 4.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My kite is torn to pieces,” ___ Zoya.
    (a) sobbed (b) asked (c) giggled
  5. 5.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Dev is scared? (a) Dev was scared. (b) Dev hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (c) Dev gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut.
  6. 6.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Ishaan laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  7. 7.Which strong verb could replace “took” in this sentence?
    “The monkey took the banana from my hand.”
    (a) grabbed (b) gulped (c) tiptoed
  8. 8.Which strong verb means “fell over and over”? (a) peered (b) blazed (c) tumbled
  9. 9.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “May I borrow your eraser___” asked Sahil.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  10. 10.Which sense does this line use?
    “The snail felt slimy on my palm.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) touch
  11. 11.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “The tired runner walked over the finish line.”
    (a) shouted (b) blazed (c) staggered
  12. 12.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The creaky stairs groaned under our feet.”
    (a) stairs (b) groaned (c) creaky
  13. 13.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ parcel arrived on my birthday.”
    (a) mysterious (b) nice (c) okay
  14. 14.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The gloomy cave echoed with our voices.”
    (a) echoed (b) gloomy (c) cave
  15. 15.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Grandpa reads the newspaper every day.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  16. 16.Which strong verb means “moved on hands and knees”? (a) gulped (b) scrubbed (c) crawled
  17. 17.Which sense does this line use?
    “Lightning flashed across the night sky.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) taste
  18. 18.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of toast drifted up the stairs.”
    (a) taste (b) hearing (c) smell
  19. 19.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The doorbell went ___ at noon.”
    (a) ding-dong (b) slurp (c) drip
  20. 20.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Watch out for that car___” shouted Kavya.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) an exclamation mark (!) (c) a question mark (?)
  21. 21.Which strong verb means “chewed with a crunching noise”? (a) munched (b) crawled (c) leapt
  22. 22.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The lion let out a mighty roar.”
    (a) mighty (b) roar (c) lion
  23. 23.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Simran is bored? (a) Simran folded her arms and glared at her brother. (b) Simran counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time. (c) Simran was bored.
  24. 24.Which sentence is a simile? (a) Grandpa reads the newspaper every day. (b) The elephant moved like a slow grey hill. (c) The sun was a golden ball of fire.
  25. 25.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The elephant moved like a slow grey hill. (b) His heart was a drum during the race. (c) The baby slept in the afternoon.
  26. 26.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Catch the ball!” ___ Saanvi.
    (a) whispered (b) shouted (c) giggled
  27. 27.What makes the sound “crackle”? (a) a leaking tap (b) a rooster (c) a campfire
  28. 28.What makes the sound “pitter-patter”? (a) a noisy drinker (b) raindrops (c) a pair of scissors
  29. 29.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ baby giggled in the cot.”
    (a) good (b) fine (c) chubby
  30. 30.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tears filled Aarav’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.”
    (a) cold (b) happy (c) sad
  31. 31.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Simran hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) tired (b) happy (c) sad
  32. 32.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The cat sat on the warm mat. (b) Our teacher is a fountain of ideas. (c) Grandpa’s beard is as white as snow.
  33. 33.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The old car was a tired donkey on the hill.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  34. 34.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Come back here, Moti!” shouted Ishaan. (b) Come back here, Moti! shouted Ishaan. (c) “Come back here, Moti” shouted Ishaan.
  35. 35.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Vihaan was happy.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  36. 36.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The feather was as light as air.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  37. 37.Which sense does this line use?
    “The earth smelled lovely after the first rain.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) taste
  38. 38.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The ducks quack noisily near the pond.”
    (a) quack (b) ducks (c) pond
  39. 39.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The pillow was as soft as a cloud.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  40. 40.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “An owl gave a ___ from the banyan tree.”
    (a) hiss (b) hoot (c) knock

Answer key

  1. crawled
  2. whoosh
  3. dashed
  4. sobbed
  5. Dev gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut.
  6. showing
  7. grabbed
  8. tumbled
  9. a question mark (?)
  10. touch
  11. staggered
  12. creaky
  13. mysterious
  14. gloomy
  15. neither
  16. crawled
  17. sight
  18. smell
  19. ding-dong
  20. an exclamation mark (!)
  21. munched
  22. roar
  23. Simran counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.
  24. The elephant moved like a slow grey hill.
  25. His heart was a drum during the race.
  26. shouted
  27. a campfire
  28. raindrops
  29. chubby
  30. sad
  31. happy
  32. Grandpa’s beard is as white as snow.
  33. metaphor
  34. “Come back here, Moti!” shouted Ishaan.
  35. telling
  36. simile
  37. smell
  38. quack
  39. simile
  40. hoot

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