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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 860 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My sandcastle got washed away,” ___ Ishaan.
    (a) asked (b) sobbed (c) giggled
  2. 2.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The fiery chilli made my eyes water.”
    (a) made (b) chilli (c) fiery
  3. 3.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tara felt very happy.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  4. 4.Which word fits the gap best?
    “How many stars are in the sky?” ___ Aarav.
    (a) giggled (b) sobbed (c) asked
  5. 5.Which sense does this line use?
    “Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.”
    (a) hearing (b) smell (c) sight
  6. 6.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “May I borrow your eraser?” asked Tenzin. (b) May I borrow your eraser? asked Tenzin. (c) “May I borrow your eraser”? asked Tenzin.
  7. 7.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Yash is bored? (a) Yash was bored. (b) Yash drummed his fingers and stared at the clock. (c) Yash’s nose turned pink, and he pulled on a woolly cap.
  8. 8.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Meera kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.”
    (a) hungry (b) scared (c) bored
  9. 9.Which sense does this line use?
    “I looked at the white peak of the mountain.”
    (a) hearing (b) sight (c) taste
  10. 10.Which sense does this line use?
    “The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy.”
    (a) sight (b) taste (c) touch
  11. 11.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) slowly (b) kind (c) splash
  12. 12.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Catch the ball! shouted Manav. (b) “Catch the ball” shouted Manav. (c) “Catch the ball!” shouted Manav.
  13. 13.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, the baby is sleeping” whispered Joseph. (b) “Shh, the baby is sleeping”, whispered Joseph. (c) “Shh, the baby is sleeping,” whispered Joseph.
  14. 14.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The crispy dosa crackled on the pan.”
    (a) crackled (b) dosa (c) crispy
  15. 15.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) I have lost my favourite teddy, sobbed Saanvi. (b) “I have lost my favourite teddy”, sobbed Saanvi. (c) “I have lost my favourite teddy,” sobbed Saanvi.
  16. 16.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ teddy bear sat on my bed.”
    (a) cuddly (b) okay (c) nice
  17. 17.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kabir is tired? (a) Kabir was tired. (b) Kabir’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again. (c) Kabir’s teeth chattered, and he pulled his shawl tighter.
  18. 18.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The motorbike went vroom down the road.”
    (a) road (b) vroom (c) motorbike
  19. 19.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen.”
    (a) sight (b) hearing (c) smell
  20. 20.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The feathery grass tickled my feet.”
    (a) grass (b) tickled (c) feathery
  21. 21.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” asked Riya. (b) Can I have one more laddoo, please? asked Riya. (c) “Can I have one more laddoo, please” asked Riya.
  22. 22.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Diya drummed her fingers and stared at the clock.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  23. 23.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) Colourful kites dotted the blue sky. (b) The bitter gourd tasted bitter. (c) The pressure cooker hissed three times.
  24. 24.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ananya is scared? (a) Ananya’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door. (b) Ananya’s teeth chattered, and she pulled her shawl tighter. (c) Ananya was scared.
  25. 25.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ fireworks lit up the sky.”
    (a) okay (b) nice (c) dazzling
  26. 26.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Sahil is tired? (a) Sahil hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (b) Sahil rubbed his eyes and nodded off on the sofa. (c) Sahil was tired.
  27. 27.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “A tear rolled slowly down Yash’s cheek.”
    (a) sad (b) scared (c) hungry
  28. 28.Which strong verb means “looked for a long time without moving”? (a) stared (b) tumbled (c) gobbled
  29. 29.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The children chattered like a flock of parrots.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  30. 30.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The booming thunder shook the windows.”
    (a) booming (b) shook (c) thunder
  31. 31.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The squishy cushion sank under me.”
    (a) cushion (b) squishy (c) sank
  32. 32.Which strong verb means “took tiny little bites”? (a) nibbled (b) giggled (c) leapt
  33. 33.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ lake reflected the hills.”
    (a) glassy (b) okay (c) fine
  34. 34.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The scissors went ___ as Mum cut the thread.”
    (a) whoosh (b) snip (c) hiss
  35. 35.What makes the sound “clang”? (a) a sneeze (b) a steel plate falling (c) a sheep
  36. 36.Which sense does this line use?
    “The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.”
    (a) smell (b) taste (c) hearing
  37. 37.Which strong verb could replace “burned” in this sentence?
    “The bonfire burned on Lohri night.”
    (a) blazed (b) sipped (c) leapt
  38. 38.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The pakoras sizzle in the hot oil.”
    (a) oil (b) sizzle (c) pakoras
  39. 39.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Grandma ___ her hot tea slowly.”
    (a) sipped (b) had (c) drank
  40. 40.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Aryan grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) sad (b) angry (c) happy

Answer key

  1. sobbed
  2. fiery
  3. telling
  4. asked
  5. sight
  6. “May I borrow your eraser?” asked Tenzin.
  7. Yash drummed his fingers and stared at the clock.
  8. bored
  9. sight
  10. touch
  11. splash
  12. “Catch the ball!” shouted Manav.
  13. “Shh, the baby is sleeping,” whispered Joseph.
  14. crispy
  15. “I have lost my favourite teddy,” sobbed Saanvi.
  16. cuddly
  17. Kabir’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again.
  18. vroom
  19. smell
  20. feathery
  21. “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” asked Riya.
  22. showing
  23. The pressure cooker hissed three times.
  24. Ananya’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door.
  25. dazzling
  26. Sahil rubbed his eyes and nodded off on the sofa.
  27. sad
  28. stared
  29. simile
  30. booming
  31. squishy
  32. nibbled
  33. glassy
  34. snip
  35. a steel plate falling
  36. taste
  37. blazed
  38. sizzle
  39. sipped
  40. happy

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