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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 866 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I dropped my ice cream in the mud___” sobbed Neel.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  2. 2.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) green (b) teacher (c) clang
  3. 3.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) table (b) knock (c) gentle
  4. 4.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Ishaan felt very cold.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  5. 5.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Diya froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  6. 6.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The cheeky monkey stole Grandpa’s cap.”
    (a) stole (b) cheeky (c) monkey
  7. 7.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Yash beamed and hugged everyone in sight.”
    (a) bored (b) happy (c) scared
  8. 8.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Dev was really happy.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  9. 9.Which strong verb means “jumped high or far”? (a) whispered (b) gulped (c) leapt
  10. 10.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as an owl”
    (a) foolish (b) wise (c) silly
  11. 11.Which sense does this line use?
    “The kulfi tasted of cardamom and saffron.”
    (a) taste (b) hearing (c) sight
  12. 12.What makes the sound “quack”? (a) a sheep (b) a heavy bag falling (c) a duck
  13. 13.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Joseph drummed his fingers and stared at the clock.”
    (a) cold (b) bored (c) scared
  14. 14.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The shop sells pencils and erasers.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  15. 15.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) table (b) slowly (c) slurp
  16. 16.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The pressure cooker hissed three times. (b) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue. (c) The river water felt icy on my feet.
  17. 17.Which sense does this line use?
    “The golden sand glittered in the sun.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) taste
  18. 18.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The thunder crashed and roared. (b) The warm sand tickled my toes. (c) The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet.
  19. 19.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The shaggy dog barked at the stranger.”
    (a) shaggy (b) dog (c) barked
  20. 20.Which sense does this line use?
    “I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row.”
    (a) smell (b) taste (c) sight
  21. 21.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Yash laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.”
    (a) bored (b) sad (c) happy
  22. 22.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) moo (b) kind (c) garden
  23. 23.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ garden smelled of roses.”
    (a) okay (b) blooming (c) nice
  24. 24.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Zoya kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.”
    (a) tired (b) hungry (c) angry
  25. 25.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sour lemon made Riya pull a face.”
    (a) lemon (b) pull (c) sour
  26. 26.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Priya beamed and hugged everyone in sight.”
    (a) hungry (b) angry (c) happy
  27. 27.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of toast drifted up the stairs.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) taste
  28. 28.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) garden (b) click (c) quickly
  29. 29.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ market buzzed with voices.”
    (a) crowded (b) okay (c) nice
  30. 30.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The chubby baby giggled in the cot.”
    (a) giggled (b) chubby (c) baby
  31. 31.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The mouse ___ the corner of the cheese.”
    (a) ate (b) made (c) nibbled
  32. 32.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as ice”
    (a) cold (b) hot (c) loud
  33. 33.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tenzin gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.”
    (a) angry (b) hungry (c) bored
  34. 34.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The clay cup felt hot in my hands. (b) I saw a rainbow over the green fields. (c) The mint chutney tasted sour and salty.
  35. 35.Which strong verb means “burned brightly and fiercely”? (a) blazed (b) tossed (c) giggled
  36. 36.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Zoya is sad? (a) A tear rolled slowly down Zoya’s cheek. (b) Zoya’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door. (c) Zoya was sad.
  37. 37.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tara gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed her eyes shut.”
    (a) angry (b) scared (c) bored
  38. 38.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “Ravi drank his lassi with a slurp.”
    (a) slurp (b) lassi (c) drank
  39. 39.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Sahil felt very bored.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  40. 40.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) pencil (b) slowly (c) meow

Answer key

  1. a comma (,)
  2. clang
  3. knock
  4. telling
  5. showing
  6. cheeky
  7. happy
  8. telling
  9. leapt
  10. wise
  11. taste
  12. a duck
  13. bored
  14. neither
  15. slurp
  16. The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.
  17. sight
  18. The thunder crashed and roared.
  19. shaggy
  20. sight
  21. happy
  22. moo
  23. blooming
  24. hungry
  25. sour
  26. happy
  27. smell
  28. click
  29. crowded
  30. chubby
  31. nibbled
  32. cold
  33. hungry
  34. I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  35. blazed
  36. A tear rolled slowly down Zoya’s cheek.
  37. scared
  38. slurp
  39. telling
  40. meow

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