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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 872 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which strong verb could replace “laughed” in this sentence?
    “The girls laughed at the funny cartoon.”
    (a) giggled (b) munched (c) tossed
  2. 2.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The stars were diamonds in the night sky. (b) Dad’s voice boomed like thunder. (c) The bus stopped at the school gate.
  3. 3.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) I tasted the soup and added more salt. (b) Rain drummed on the tin roof all night. (c) The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek.
  4. 4.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ bus rattled down the road.”
    (a) rusty (b) nice (c) fine
  5. 5.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The lake was a mirror for the mountains. (b) Kabir finished his homework early. (c) The new shoes shone like stars.
  6. 6.Which word fits the gap best?
    “What time does the train leave?” ___ Fatima.
    (a) sobbed (b) giggled (c) asked
  7. 7.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The jalebi was as sweet as honey. (b) We planted a mango tree in the garden. (c) Our teacher is a fountain of ideas.
  8. 8.Which strong verb could replace “wrote” in this sentence?
    “Ishaan wrote a phone number on his hand.”
    (a) scribbled (b) trudged (c) sipped
  9. 9.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ clouds floated across the sky.”
    (a) good (b) nice (c) puffy
  10. 10.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The shop sells pencils and erasers. (b) Her smile was as bright as the sun. (c) The old car was a tired donkey on the hill.
  11. 11.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The juicy mangoes filled the basket.”
    (a) mangoes (b) filled (c) juicy
  12. 12.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ baby giggled in the cot.”
    (a) nice (b) good (c) chubby
  13. 13.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “We planted a mango tree in the garden.”
    (a) simile (b) neither (c) metaphor
  14. 14.Which sense does this line use?
    “The fragrance of roses drifted through the window.”
    (a) taste (b) smell (c) touch
  15. 15.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Rohan is sad? (a) Rohan shivered and stamped his feet in the snow. (b) Rohan was sad. (c) Rohan sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.
  16. 16.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Tara is tired? (a) Tara was tired. (b) Tara licked her lips as the smell of dosas drifted in. (c) Tara rubbed her eyes and nodded off on the sofa.
  17. 17.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tears filled Diya’s eyes, and she stared at the floor.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  18. 18.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ cave echoed with our voices.”
    (a) okay (b) gloomy (c) fine
  19. 19.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, we are in the library,” whispered Aryan. (b) Shh, we are in the library, whispered Aryan. (c) “Shh, we are in the library”, whispered Aryan.
  20. 20.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The pigs oink in the muddy farmyard.”
    (a) pigs (b) muddy (c) oink
  21. 21.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The gloomy cave echoed with our voices.”
    (a) echoed (b) cave (c) gloomy
  22. 22.Which sense does this line use?
    “I looked at the white peak of the mountain.”
    (a) sight (b) touch (c) taste
  23. 23.Which sense does this line use?
    “The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) taste
  24. 24.Which strong verb means “ate very fast and greedily”? (a) plunged (b) staggered (c) gobbled
  25. 25.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The bowler ___ the ball towards the stumps.”
    (a) threw (b) hurled (c) made
  26. 26.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.”
    (a) touch (b) hearing (c) smell
  27. 27.Which strong verb means “spoke very loudly”? (a) soared (b) shouted (c) staggered
  28. 28.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ owl hooted from the branch.”
    (a) speckled (b) good (c) nice
  29. 29.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ pebbles sparkled in the stream.”
    (a) shiny (b) good (c) nice
  30. 30.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Maria froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.”
    (a) bored (b) scared (c) happy
  31. 31.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ananya is cold? (a) Ananya’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap. (b) Ananya was cold. (c) Ananya beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  32. 32.Which sentence is a simile? (a) My father bought a new umbrella. (b) Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers. (c) The puppy’s nose was as cold as ice.
  33. 33.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ pond had lots of frogs.”
    (a) nice (b) muddy (c) okay
  34. 34.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Pooja is scared? (a) Pooja gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed her eyes shut. (b) Pooja was scared. (c) Pooja grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.
  35. 35.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen.”
    (a) smell (b) sight (c) hearing
  36. 36.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Grandpa reads the newspaper every day. (b) The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang. (c) The pillow was as soft as a cloud.
  37. 37.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Imran was bored.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  38. 38.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Dev was scared.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  39. 39.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Rohan froze and held his breath as the floor creaked.”
    (a) sad (b) scared (c) happy
  40. 40.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The shimmering peacock spread its tail.”
    (a) peacock (b) shimmering (c) spread

Answer key

  1. giggled
  2. Dad’s voice boomed like thunder.
  3. Rain drummed on the tin roof all night.
  4. rusty
  5. The lake was a mirror for the mountains.
  6. asked
  7. The jalebi was as sweet as honey.
  8. scribbled
  9. puffy
  10. The old car was a tired donkey on the hill.
  11. juicy
  12. chubby
  13. neither
  14. smell
  15. Rohan sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.
  16. Tara rubbed her eyes and nodded off on the sofa.
  17. showing
  18. gloomy
  19. “Shh, we are in the library,” whispered Aryan.
  20. oink
  21. gloomy
  22. sight
  23. taste
  24. gobbled
  25. hurled
  26. smell
  27. shouted
  28. speckled
  29. shiny
  30. scared
  31. Ananya’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap.
  32. The puppy’s nose was as cold as ice.
  33. muddy
  34. Pooja gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed her eyes shut.
  35. smell
  36. The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang.
  37. telling
  38. telling
  39. scared
  40. shimmering

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