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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 876 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Neel is sad? (a) Neel counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time. (b) Neel sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing. (c) Neel was sad.
  2. 2.Which strong verb means “threw lightly”? (a) tossed (b) sprinkled (c) tumbled
  3. 3.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Fatima was really happy.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  4. 4.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The snake gave an angry hiss and slid away.”
    (a) hiss (b) snake (c) angry
  5. 5.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen. (b) The new bicycle shone bright red. (c) The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet.
  6. 6.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ fireworks lit up the sky.”
    (a) good (b) dazzling (c) okay
  7. 7.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Kavya’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap.”
    (a) angry (b) tired (c) cold
  8. 8.Which sentence is a simile? (a) Dad’s voice boomed like thunder. (b) The children played cricket after school. (c) The old car was a tired donkey on the hill.
  9. 9.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “Ravi drank his lassi with a slurp.”
    (a) drank (b) slurp (c) lassi
  10. 10.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The baby ___ across the carpet to her toy.”
    (a) came (b) crawled (c) moved
  11. 11.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The microwave gave a ___ when the milk was hot.”
    (a) baa (b) chirp (c) beep
  12. 12.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The fiery chilli made my eyes water.”
    (a) fiery (b) made (c) chilli
  13. 13.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Vihaan froze and held his breath as the floor creaked.”
    (a) angry (b) sad (c) scared
  14. 14.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Grandpa ___ through the park after dinner.”
    (a) did (b) walked (c) strolled
  15. 15.What makes the sound “click”? (a) a pair of scissors (b) a camera (c) a cow
  16. 16.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Zoya was really cold.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  17. 17.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Let us keep the surprise a secret,” whispered Ananya. (b) Let us keep the surprise a secret, whispered Ananya. (c) “Let us keep the surprise a secret” whispered Ananya.
  18. 18.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) river (b) quack (c) table
  19. 19.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Nisha was really happy.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  20. 20.Which sense does this line use?
    “The lake sparkled under the full moon.”
    (a) sight (b) touch (c) smell
  21. 21.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Saanvi’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door.”
    (a) scared (b) tired (c) cold
  22. 22.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) My little brother is a chatterbox. (b) The baby slept like a log. (c) Kabir finished his homework early.
  23. 23.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ road twisted up the mountain.”
    (a) narrow (b) fine (c) nice
  24. 24.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet___” giggled Tenzin.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)
  25. 25.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The icy wind howled all night.”
    (a) wind (b) howled (c) icy
  26. 26.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The new bicycle shone bright red. (b) The snail felt slimy on my palm. (c) The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.
  27. 27.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ dosa crackled on the pan.”
    (a) crispy (b) nice (c) okay
  28. 28.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Priya hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) sad (b) happy (c) bored
  29. 29.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) green (b) garden (c) neigh
  30. 30.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The pakoras ___ in the hot oil.”
    (a) quack (b) pitter-patter (c) sizzle
  31. 31.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Farhan is bored? (a) Farhan sighed and flipped through the same comic again. (b) Farhan was bored. (c) Farhan gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.
  32. 32.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The muddy pond had lots of frogs.”
    (a) had (b) muddy (c) pond
  33. 33.Which sense does this line use?
    “We watched the peacock open its blue tail.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) touch
  34. 34.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The camera went click at the party.”
    (a) camera (b) party (c) click
  35. 35.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour. (b) Dad sniffed the milk to check if it was fresh. (c) The temple bells rang out loudly.
  36. 36.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “That joke is so funny___” giggled Aisha.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)
  37. 37.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My best friend is moving away,” ___ Priya.
    (a) giggled (b) asked (c) sobbed
  38. 38.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Hee hee, stop tickling me” giggled Manav. (b) “Hee hee, stop tickling me”, giggled Manav. (c) “Hee hee, stop tickling me,” giggled Manav.
  39. 39.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Priya’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.”
    (a) hungry (b) cold (c) scared
  40. 40.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “The tired runner walked over the finish line.”
    (a) staggered (b) hurled (c) gulped

Answer key

  1. Neel sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.
  2. tossed
  3. telling
  4. hiss
  5. The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet.
  6. dazzling
  7. cold
  8. Dad’s voice boomed like thunder.
  9. slurp
  10. crawled
  11. beep
  12. fiery
  13. scared
  14. strolled
  15. a camera
  16. telling
  17. “Let us keep the surprise a secret,” whispered Ananya.
  18. quack
  19. telling
  20. sight
  21. scared
  22. My little brother is a chatterbox.
  23. narrow
  24. a comma (,)
  25. icy
  26. The snail felt slimy on my palm.
  27. crispy
  28. happy
  29. neigh
  30. sizzle
  31. Farhan sighed and flipped through the same comic again.
  32. muddy
  33. sight
  34. click
  35. The temple bells rang out loudly.
  36. a comma (,)
  37. sobbed
  38. “Hee hee, stop tickling me,” giggled Manav.
  39. hungry
  40. staggered

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