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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 89 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The river was a silver ribbon in the valley. (b) The elephant moved like a slow grey hill. (c) My father bought a new umbrella.
  2. 2.Which sense does this line use?
    “The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.”
    (a) hearing (b) smell (c) taste
  3. 3.What makes the sound “cock-a-doodle-doo”? (a) a rooster (b) thunder (c) a snake
  4. 4.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) good (b) okay (c) sticky
  5. 5.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Joseph rubbed his eyes and nodded off on the sofa.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  6. 6.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) My little sister is as busy as a bee. (b) The dog barked at the postman. (c) The fog was a grey curtain over the town.
  7. 7.Which strong verb means “walked around with no plan”? (a) clutched (b) peered (c) wandered
  8. 8.Which strong verb could replace “looked” in this sentence?
    “Aarav looked at the clock and hurried out.”
    (a) dashed (b) gobbled (c) glanced
  9. 9.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Meera is sad? (a) Meera’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap. (b) Meera was sad. (c) A tear rolled slowly down Meera’s cheek.
  10. 10.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The fragrance of roses drifted through the window. (b) We heard the train whistle far away. (c) I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  11. 11.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, the baby is sleeping”, whispered Tara. (b) “Shh, the baby is sleeping” whispered Tara. (c) “Shh, the baby is sleeping,” whispered Tara.
  12. 12.Which sentence is a simile? (a) Meera watered the plants in the morning. (b) The lake shone like a mirror in the sun. (c) The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang.
  13. 13.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The shaggy dog barked at the stranger.”
    (a) dog (b) barked (c) shaggy
  14. 14.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ pebbles sparkled in the stream.”
    (a) shiny (b) fine (c) nice
  15. 15.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Ha ha, the goat ate your hat”, giggled Kabir. (b) “Ha ha, the goat ate your hat,” giggled Kabir. (c) Ha ha, the goat ate your hat, giggled Kabir.
  16. 16.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ cave echoed with our voices.”
    (a) nice (b) fine (c) gloomy
  17. 17.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I miss my grandma so much___” sobbed Zoya.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  18. 18.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The fish market had a strong smell. (b) The thunder crashed and roared. (c) The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.
  19. 19.Which sense does this line use?
    “The lemon juice tasted very sour.”
    (a) sight (b) taste (c) hearing
  20. 20.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Let us keep the surprise a secret,” ___ Ananya.
    (a) asked (b) whispered (c) shouted
  21. 21.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “A tear rolled slowly down Imran’s cheek.”
    (a) scared (b) sad (c) hungry
  22. 22.Which sense does this line use?
    “The cactus was prickly when I touched it.”
    (a) sight (b) touch (c) hearing
  23. 23.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) cock-a-doodle-doo (b) garden (c) happy
  24. 24.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Joseph licked his lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.”
    (a) hungry (b) scared (c) happy
  25. 25.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) Colourful kites dotted the blue sky. (b) The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich. (c) The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen.
  26. 26.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The tired dog snored like a tractor. (b) The clouds were cotton balls in the sky. (c) The bus stopped at the school gate.
  27. 27.Which strong verb could replace “ran” in this sentence?
    “Meera ran to the bus stop before it left.”
    (a) clutched (b) whispered (c) dashed
  28. 28.Which word fits the gap best?
    “I have lost my favourite teddy,” ___ Simran.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  29. 29.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The traffic jam was a long metal snake. (b) The bus stopped at the school gate. (c) Kabir ran like the wind to catch the bus.
  30. 30.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The fluffy kitten curled up on my lap.”
    (a) kitten (b) curled (c) fluffy
  31. 31.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Help, the boat is sinking___” shouted Vihaan.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) an exclamation mark (!) (c) a full stop (.)
  32. 32.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The fish market had a strong smell. (b) The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck. (c) I looked at the white peak of the mountain.
  33. 33.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ sun rose over the hills.”
    (a) fine (b) nice (c) golden
  34. 34.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Priya’s eyelids drooped, and she yawned again and again.”
    (a) scared (b) cold (c) tired
  35. 35.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My goldfish has gone missing,” ___ Joseph.
    (a) giggled (b) asked (c) sobbed
  36. 36.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as grass”
    (a) green (b) red (c) loud
  37. 37.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) kind (b) table (c) thud
  38. 38.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Ha ha, you have milk on your nose, giggled Meera. (b) “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose”, giggled Meera. (c) “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose,” giggled Meera.
  39. 39.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “An owl gave a hoot from the banyan tree.”
    (a) tree (b) owl (c) hoot
  40. 40.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Sahil’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.”
    (a) telling (b) showing

Answer key

  1. The river was a silver ribbon in the valley.
  2. taste
  3. a rooster
  4. sticky
  5. showing
  6. The fog was a grey curtain over the town.
  7. wandered
  8. glanced
  9. A tear rolled slowly down Meera’s cheek.
  10. We heard the train whistle far away.
  11. “Shh, the baby is sleeping,” whispered Tara.
  12. The lake shone like a mirror in the sun.
  13. shaggy
  14. shiny
  15. “Ha ha, the goat ate your hat,” giggled Kabir.
  16. gloomy
  17. a comma (,)
  18. The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.
  19. taste
  20. whispered
  21. sad
  22. touch
  23. cock-a-doodle-doo
  24. hungry
  25. The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen.
  26. The clouds were cotton balls in the sky.
  27. dashed
  28. sobbed
  29. The traffic jam was a long metal snake.
  30. fluffy
  31. an exclamation mark (!)
  32. The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck.
  33. golden
  34. tired
  35. sobbed
  36. green
  37. thud
  38. “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose,” giggled Meera.
  39. hoot
  40. showing

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