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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 900 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Her bedroom is a pigsty. (b) The cat sat on the warm mat. (c) The children chattered like a flock of parrots.
  2. 2.Which strong verb could replace “went” in this sentence?
    “The cat went quietly towards the pigeon.”
    (a) giggled (b) gobbled (c) crept
  3. 3.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I miss my grandma so much___” sobbed Sneha.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  4. 4.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Vihaan was really cold.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  5. 5.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “My kite is torn to pieces,” sobbed Meera. (b) “My kite is torn to pieces”, sobbed Meera. (c) “My kite is torn to pieces” sobbed Meera.
  6. 6.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) I smelled fresh coriander at the vegetable stall. (b) The sunset painted the sky orange and pink. (c) The thunder crashed and roared.
  7. 7.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue. (b) The golden sand glittered in the sun. (c) The clay cup felt hot in my hands.
  8. 8.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a feather”
    (a) dark (b) light (c) heavy
  9. 9.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sticky jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) sticky (b) dripped (c) jalebis
  10. 10.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The snail felt slimy on my palm. (b) Colourful kites dotted the blue sky. (c) The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.
  11. 11.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My goldfish has gone missing,” ___ Farhan.
    (a) asked (b) sobbed (c) giggled
  12. 12.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The bus stopped at the school gate.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  13. 13.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Dev ___ past his sleeping baby sister.”
    (a) walked (b) made (c) tiptoed
  14. 14.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen.”
    (a) smell (b) touch (c) hearing
  15. 15.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The golden sun rose over the hills.”
    (a) rose (b) sun (c) golden
  16. 16.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Your silly face makes me laugh,” ___ Aarav.
    (a) giggled (b) sobbed (c) asked
  17. 17.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Ishaan ___ a phone number on his hand.”
    (a) wrote (b) came (c) scribbled
  18. 18.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The little lamb gave a soft baa.”
    (a) soft (b) baa (c) lamb
  19. 19.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) oink (b) happy (c) pencil
  20. 20.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) I saw a rainbow over the green fields. (b) The kulfi tasted of cardamom and saffron. (c) I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden.
  21. 21.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “Our cat lets out a sad meow at night.”
    (a) meow (b) night (c) cat
  22. 22.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) A whiff of incense floated from the temple. (b) The mint chutney tasted sour and salty. (c) The crowd cheered loudly for our team.
  23. 23.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The rusty bus rattled down the road.”
    (a) rattled (b) rusty (c) bus
  24. 24.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The scent of Grandma’s perfume filled the room. (b) I heard waves crashing on the rocks. (c) The cactus was prickly when I touched it.
  25. 25.Which strong verb means “ran very fast”? (a) dashed (b) gulped (c) scrubbed
  26. 26.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “The tired runner walked over the finish line.”
    (a) whispered (b) scribbled (c) staggered
  27. 27.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Manav’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  28. 28.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The bees buzzed around the hive. (b) Lightning flashed across the night sky. (c) The snail felt slimy on my palm.
  29. 29.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) mango (b) happy (c) quack
  30. 30.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aisha is cold? (a) Aisha was cold. (b) Aisha’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap. (c) Aisha sat alone, hugging her knees and sniffing.
  31. 31.What makes the sound “vroom”? (a) a camera (b) a dog (c) a motorbike
  32. 32.Which sense does this line use?
    “The wet soap slipped from my hands.”
    (a) sight (b) touch (c) hearing
  33. 33.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tears filled Kabir’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.”
    (a) sad (b) bored (c) scared
  34. 34.Which sense does this line use?
    “I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden.”
    (a) smell (b) taste (c) touch
  35. 35.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The bees ___ around the mango flowers.”
    (a) roar (b) woof (c) buzz
  36. 36.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Stop that runaway goat___” shouted Rohan.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) an exclamation mark (!) (c) a full stop (.)
  37. 37.Which strong verb means “cried noisily”? (a) sobbed (b) leapt (c) clutched
  38. 38.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) beep (b) slowly (c) garden
  39. 39.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ishaan grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) angry (b) happy (c) sad
  40. 40.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Saanvi is scared? (a) Saanvi froze and held her breath as the floor creaked. (b) Saanvi dragged her feet upstairs and flopped on the bed. (c) Saanvi was scared.

Answer key

  1. Her bedroom is a pigsty.
  2. crept
  3. a comma (,)
  4. telling
  5. “My kite is torn to pieces,” sobbed Meera.
  6. The thunder crashed and roared.
  7. The golden sand glittered in the sun.
  8. light
  9. sticky
  10. Colourful kites dotted the blue sky.
  11. sobbed
  12. neither
  13. tiptoed
  14. smell
  15. golden
  16. giggled
  17. scribbled
  18. baa
  19. oink
  20. I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden.
  21. meow
  22. The crowd cheered loudly for our team.
  23. rusty
  24. The scent of Grandma’s perfume filled the room.
  25. dashed
  26. staggered
  27. showing
  28. The snail felt slimy on my palm.
  29. quack
  30. Aisha’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap.
  31. a motorbike
  32. touch
  33. sad
  34. smell
  35. buzz
  36. an exclamation mark (!)
  37. sobbed
  38. beep
  39. happy
  40. Saanvi froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.

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