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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 939 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) yellow (b) table (c) baa
  2. 2.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as snow”
    (a) white (b) black (c) noisy
  3. 3.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ quilt covered the bed.”
    (a) okay (b) good (c) patchwork
  4. 4.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek. (b) The sunset painted the sky orange and pink. (c) Rain drummed on the tin roof all night.
  5. 5.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Sahil laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  6. 6.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) meow (b) yellow (c) table
  7. 7.Which sense does this line use?
    “A whiff of incense floated from the temple.”
    (a) touch (b) taste (c) smell
  8. 8.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “That joke is so funny” giggled Ananya. (b) “That joke is so funny”, giggled Ananya. (c) “That joke is so funny,” giggled Ananya.
  9. 9.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Tenzin is hungry? (a) Tenzin was hungry. (b) Tenzin kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch. (c) Tenzin’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again.
  10. 10.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) window (b) sizzle (c) teacher
  11. 11.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ peacock spread its tail.”
    (a) nice (b) shimmering (c) fine
  12. 12.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) click (b) garden (c) table
  13. 13.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, the baby is sleeping,” whispered Fatima. (b) Shh, the baby is sleeping, whispered Fatima. (c) “Shh, the baby is sleeping”, whispered Fatima.
  14. 14.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ soup filled our bowls.”
    (a) good (b) steaming (c) fine
  15. 15.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The bees buzz around the mango flowers.”
    (a) buzz (b) bees (c) flowers
  16. 16.Which sense does this line use?
    “Lightning flashed across the night sky.”
    (a) hearing (b) touch (c) sight
  17. 17.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The booming thunder shook the windows.”
    (a) thunder (b) booming (c) shook
  18. 18.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Where did you put my blue pencil? asked Rohan. (b) “Where did you put my blue pencil” asked Rohan. (c) “Where did you put my blue pencil?” asked Rohan.
  19. 19.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The smell of toast drifted up the stairs. (b) The kulfi tasted of cardamom and saffron. (c) Rain drummed on the tin roof all night.
  20. 20.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ chilli made my eyes water.”
    (a) nice (b) fine (c) fiery
  21. 21.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The moon was a silver plate in the sky. (b) The children played cricket after school. (c) The lake shone like a mirror in the sun.
  22. 22.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ market buzzed with voices.”
    (a) crowded (b) fine (c) okay
  23. 23.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The little lamb gave a soft baa.”
    (a) lamb (b) soft (c) baa
  24. 24.Which sentence is a simile? (a) My little brother is a chatterbox. (b) The puppy’s nose was as cold as ice. (c) We ate rice and dal for dinner.
  25. 25.Which strong verb could replace “moved” in this sentence?
    “The baby moved across the carpet to her toy.”
    (a) fluttered (b) crawled (c) munched
  26. 26.Which strong verb could replace “laughed” in this sentence?
    “The girls laughed at the funny cartoon.”
    (a) soared (b) giggled (c) clutched
  27. 27.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “We heard a loud ___ at the front door.”
    (a) thud (b) knock (c) drip
  28. 28.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ monkey stole Grandpa’s cap.”
    (a) good (b) cheeky (c) fine
  29. 29.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ kitten curled up on my lap.”
    (a) okay (b) fluffy (c) fine
  30. 30.What makes the sound “buzz”? (a) a sheep (b) an owl (c) a bee
  31. 31.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ishaan drummed his fingers and stared at the clock.”
    (a) hungry (b) bored (c) scared
  32. 32.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Kabir finished his homework early.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  33. 33.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My goldfish has gone missing,” ___ Neel.
    (a) giggled (b) sobbed (c) asked
  34. 34.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “After the race, Kabir ___ a whole bottle of water.”
    (a) came (b) drank (c) gulped
  35. 35.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) gentle (b) roar (c) teacher
  36. 36.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The crowded market buzzed with voices.”
    (a) crowded (b) buzzed (c) market
  37. 37.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Is it time for lunch yet___” asked Tara.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  38. 38.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, the film is starting___” whispered Saanvi.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  39. 39.Which strong verb could replace “spoke” in this sentence?
    “Rohan spoke crossly under his breath.”
    (a) munched (b) muttered (c) strolled
  40. 40.Which sense does this line use?
    “I saw a rainbow over the green fields.”
    (a) hearing (b) smell (c) sight

Answer key

  1. baa
  2. white
  3. patchwork
  4. The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek.
  5. showing
  6. meow
  7. smell
  8. “That joke is so funny,” giggled Ananya.
  9. Tenzin kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.
  10. sizzle
  11. shimmering
  12. click
  13. “Shh, the baby is sleeping,” whispered Fatima.
  14. steaming
  15. buzz
  16. sight
  17. booming
  18. “Where did you put my blue pencil?” asked Rohan.
  19. The smell of toast drifted up the stairs.
  20. fiery
  21. The moon was a silver plate in the sky.
  22. crowded
  23. baa
  24. The puppy’s nose was as cold as ice.
  25. crawled
  26. giggled
  27. knock
  28. cheeky
  29. fluffy
  30. a bee
  31. bored
  32. neither
  33. sobbed
  34. gulped
  35. roar
  36. crowded
  37. a question mark (?)
  38. a comma (,)
  39. muttered
  40. sight

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