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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 943 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a peacock”
    (a) humble (b) shy (c) proud
  2. 2.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “My father bought a new umbrella.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  3. 3.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The lake was a mirror for the mountains. (b) We planted a mango tree in the garden. (c) The road was as straight as a ruler.
  4. 4.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The moon was a silver plate in the sky.”
    (a) simile (b) neither (c) metaphor
  5. 5.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) happy (b) tick-tock (c) mango
  6. 6.Which sense does this line use?
    “The sunset painted the sky orange and pink.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) sight
  7. 7.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ananya is scared? (a) Ananya threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!” (b) Ananya was scared. (c) Ananya froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.
  8. 8.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Riya is bored? (a) Riya’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door. (b) Riya was bored. (c) Riya drummed her fingers and stared at the clock.
  9. 9.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Yash kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.”
    (a) bored (b) scared (c) happy
  10. 10.Which strong verb could replace “went” in this sentence?
    “The cat went quietly towards the pigeon.”
    (a) sipped (b) gobbled (c) crept
  11. 11.Which strong verb means “cleaned by rubbing hard”? (a) scrubbed (b) scribbled (c) giggled
  12. 12.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The raindrops went ___ on the roof.”
    (a) chirp (b) pitter-patter (c) ding-dong
  13. 13.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap___” whispered Pooja.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)
  14. 14.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Let us keep the surprise a secret,” whispered Diya. (b) Let us keep the surprise a secret, whispered Diya. (c) “Let us keep the surprise a secret” whispered Diya.
  15. 15.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The lion let out a mighty ___.”
    (a) roar (b) vroom (c) ding-dong
  16. 16.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My sandcastle got washed away,” ___ Nisha.
    (a) giggled (b) asked (c) sobbed
  17. 17.Which sense does this line use?
    “I heard the koel singing in the mango tree.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) hearing
  18. 18.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ puppy chewed my slipper.”
    (a) good (b) naughty (c) okay
  19. 19.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The muddy pond had lots of frogs.”
    (a) pond (b) muddy (c) had
  20. 20.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The golden sun rose over the hills.”
    (a) golden (b) sun (c) rose
  21. 21.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Mum ___ the muddy floor until it shone.”
    (a) scrubbed (b) had (c) cleaned
  22. 22.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The scissors went snip as Mum cut the thread.”
    (a) snip (b) thread (c) scissors
  23. 23.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The old clock went tick-tock in the hall.”
    (a) tick-tock (b) clock (c) hall
  24. 24.Which sense does this line use?
    “The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) touch
  25. 25.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as honey”
    (a) sour (b) bitter (c) sweet
  26. 26.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Pooja is bored? (a) Pooja was bored. (b) Tears filled Pooja’s eyes, and she stared at the floor. (c) Pooja counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.
  27. 27.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen. (b) The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy. (c) The new bicycle shone bright red.
  28. 28.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) green (b) pop (c) pencil
  29. 29.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ kite danced in the sky.”
    (a) colourful (b) nice (c) okay
  30. 30.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) A whiff of incense floated from the temple. (b) The old door creaked as it opened. (c) The river water felt icy on my feet.
  31. 31.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The camera went click at the party.”
    (a) click (b) party (c) camera
  32. 32.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ car zoomed past us.”
    (a) sleek (b) fine (c) okay
  33. 33.Which sense does this line use?
    “The bitter gourd tasted bitter.”
    (a) sight (b) smell (c) taste
  34. 34.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Fatima’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door.”
    (a) angry (b) sad (c) scared
  35. 35.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I have lost my favourite teddy___” sobbed Tara.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  36. 36.What makes the sound “quack”? (a) a duck (b) a heavy bag falling (c) a frog
  37. 37.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “My kite is torn to pieces”, sobbed Rohan. (b) “My kite is torn to pieces,” sobbed Rohan. (c) My kite is torn to pieces, sobbed Rohan.
  38. 38.Which strong verb means “ran very fast”? (a) dashed (b) shouted (c) fluttered
  39. 39.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The busy market was a beehive.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  40. 40.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Diya is sad? (a) Diya gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed her eyes shut. (b) Diya was sad. (c) Diya’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home.

Answer key

  1. proud
  2. neither
  3. The lake was a mirror for the mountains.
  4. metaphor
  5. tick-tock
  6. sight
  7. Ananya froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.
  8. Riya drummed her fingers and stared at the clock.
  9. bored
  10. crept
  11. scrubbed
  12. pitter-patter
  13. a comma (,)
  14. “Let us keep the surprise a secret,” whispered Diya.
  15. roar
  16. sobbed
  17. hearing
  18. naughty
  19. muddy
  20. golden
  21. scrubbed
  22. snip
  23. tick-tock
  24. touch
  25. sweet
  26. Pooja counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.
  27. The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy.
  28. pop
  29. colourful
  30. The old door creaked as it opened.
  31. click
  32. sleek
  33. taste
  34. scared
  35. a comma (,)
  36. a duck
  37. “My kite is torn to pieces,” sobbed Rohan.
  38. dashed
  39. metaphor
  40. Diya’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home.

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