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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 946 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as ice”
    (a) cold (b) hot (c) loud
  2. 2.Which sense does this line use?
    “I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) taste
  3. 3.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The fireworks burst like giant flowers. (b) The teacher wrote the date on the board. (c) Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers.
  4. 4.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap___” whispered Vihaan.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  5. 5.Which sense does this line use?
    “The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek.”
    (a) taste (b) touch (c) hearing
  6. 6.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a lion”
    (a) slow (b) brave (c) soft
  7. 7.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Farhan is sad? (a) Farhan was sad. (b) Tears filled Farhan’s eyes, and he stared at the floor. (c) Farhan folded his arms and glared at his brother.
  8. 8.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) We watched the peacock open its blue tail. (b) I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden. (c) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.
  9. 9.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “How many stars are in the sky?” asked Nisha. (b) How many stars are in the sky? asked Nisha. (c) “How many stars are in the sky” asked Nisha.
  10. 10.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Who painted this lovely picture?” asked Aisha. (b) “Who painted this lovely picture”? asked Aisha. (c) Who painted this lovely picture? asked Aisha.
  11. 11.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Why is the sky blue? asked Kabir. (b) “Why is the sky blue?” asked Kabir. (c) “Why is the sky blue” asked Kabir.
  12. 12.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The sunset painted the sky orange and pink. (b) I heard the koel singing in the mango tree. (c) The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck.
  13. 13.Which sense does this line use?
    “The fragrance of roses drifted through the window.”
    (a) hearing (b) taste (c) smell
  14. 14.Which sense does this line use?
    “I heard waves crashing on the rocks.”
    (a) taste (b) smell (c) hearing
  15. 15.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Kavya sighed and flipped through the same comic again.”
    (a) angry (b) bored (c) scared
  16. 16.Which sense does this line use?
    “Lightning flashed across the night sky.”
    (a) sight (b) hearing (c) touch
  17. 17.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The camera went click at the party.”
    (a) camera (b) party (c) click
  18. 18.Which sense does this line use?
    “Diyas twinkled on every windowsill.”
    (a) taste (b) hearing (c) sight
  19. 19.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Who painted this lovely picture___” asked Vihaan.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  20. 20.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The stars were diamonds in the night sky. (b) The bus stopped at the school gate. (c) The water was as clear as glass.
  21. 21.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Come back here, Moti!” ___ Zoya.
    (a) giggled (b) shouted (c) whispered
  22. 22.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ baby giggled in the cot.”
    (a) chubby (b) good (c) okay
  23. 23.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The warm sand tickled my toes. (b) The crowd cheered loudly for our team. (c) I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  24. 24.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Look out, the shelf is falling___” shouted Joseph.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) an exclamation mark (!)
  25. 25.What makes the sound “boom”? (a) a pig (b) thunder (c) a noisy drinker
  26. 26.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) slowly (b) teacher (c) honk
  27. 27.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ peacock spread its tail.”
    (a) shimmering (b) nice (c) okay
  28. 28.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck. (b) A whiff of incense floated from the temple. (c) Rain drummed on the tin roof all night.
  29. 29.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Farhan rubbed his hands and blew on his fingers.”
    (a) cold (b) sad (c) happy
  30. 30.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Rohan ___ crossly under his breath.”
    (a) went (b) muttered (c) spoke
  31. 31.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The snow was a white blanket on the hills. (b) Grandpa’s beard is as white as snow. (c) The shop sells pencils and erasers.
  32. 32.Which strong verb could replace “jumped” in this sentence?
    “The deer jumped over the fallen log.”
    (a) clutched (b) leapt (c) muttered
  33. 33.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Maria is happy? (a) Maria grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road. (b) Maria sighed and flipped through the same comic again. (c) Maria was happy.
  34. 34.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Aryan kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.”
    (a) happy (b) hungry (c) scared
  35. 35.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Farhan grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  36. 36.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “We heard a loud ___ at the front door.”
    (a) knock (b) pitter-patter (c) pop
  37. 37.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ soup filled our bowls.”
    (a) good (b) nice (c) steaming
  38. 38.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The busy market was a beehive.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  39. 39.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Stop that runaway goat___” shouted Saanvi.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) an exclamation mark (!) (c) a full stop (.)
  40. 40.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The smell of toast drifted up the stairs. (b) I heard waves crashing on the rocks. (c) The clay cup felt hot in my hands.

Answer key

  1. cold
  2. sight
  3. Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers.
  4. a comma (,)
  5. touch
  6. brave
  7. Tears filled Farhan’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.
  8. The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.
  9. “How many stars are in the sky?” asked Nisha.
  10. “Who painted this lovely picture?” asked Aisha.
  11. “Why is the sky blue?” asked Kabir.
  12. I heard the koel singing in the mango tree.
  13. smell
  14. hearing
  15. bored
  16. sight
  17. click
  18. sight
  19. a question mark (?)
  20. The stars were diamonds in the night sky.
  21. shouted
  22. chubby
  23. I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  24. an exclamation mark (!)
  25. thunder
  26. honk
  27. shimmering
  28. The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck.
  29. cold
  30. muttered
  31. Grandpa’s beard is as white as snow.
  32. leapt
  33. Maria grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.
  34. hungry
  35. showing
  36. knock
  37. steaming
  38. metaphor
  39. an exclamation mark (!)
  40. The clay cup felt hot in my hands.

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