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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 951 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “That joke is so funny___” giggled Aisha.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  2. 2.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock” giggled Riya. (b) Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock, giggled Riya. (c) “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock,” giggled Riya.
  3. 3.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) I heard the koel singing in the mango tree. (b) The fish market had a strong smell. (c) The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour.
  4. 4.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy. (b) The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour. (c) I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden.
  5. 5.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The children chattered like a flock of parrots.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  6. 6.What makes the sound “baa”? (a) a sneeze (b) the wind (c) a sheep
  7. 7.What makes the sound “splash”? (a) a heavy bag falling (b) a microwave (c) a jump into a pool
  8. 8.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The lake was a mirror for the mountains.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  9. 9.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a giraffe”
    (a) short (b) tall (c) round
  10. 10.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “Ravi drank his lassi with a ___.”
    (a) slurp (b) cock-a-doodle-doo (c) meow
  11. 11.Which strong verb means “moved slowly and quietly”? (a) giggled (b) crept (c) muttered
  12. 12.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The baby ___ across the carpet to her toy.”
    (a) moved (b) crawled (c) got
  13. 13.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Sahil grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) angry (b) happy (c) tired
  14. 14.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a mouse”
    (a) loud (b) huge (c) quiet
  15. 15.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Shh, the baby is sleeping,” ___ Joseph.
    (a) whispered (b) asked (c) shouted
  16. 16.Which strong verb means “moved very fast to win”? (a) whispered (b) peered (c) raced
  17. 17.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Tenzin is happy? (a) Tenzin was happy. (b) Tenzin grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road. (c) Tenzin gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.
  18. 18.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Sneha was really bored.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  19. 19.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) good (b) sticky (c) okay
  20. 20.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Dad’s voice boomed like thunder. (b) Grandpa reads the newspaper every day. (c) The playground was an oven in May.
  21. 21.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ floor squeaked under my shoes.”
    (a) nice (b) polished (c) okay
  22. 22.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The stale bread crumbled in my fingers.”
    (a) stale (b) bread (c) crumbled
  23. 23.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) garden (b) click (c) mango
  24. 24.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a tortoise”
    (a) slow (b) loud (c) fast
  25. 25.Which strong verb means “took tiny little bites”? (a) scrubbed (b) nibbled (c) blazed
  26. 26.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The colourful kite danced in the sky.”
    (a) colourful (b) kite (c) danced
  27. 27.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “I miss my grandma so much”, sobbed Priya. (b) “I miss my grandma so much” sobbed Priya. (c) “I miss my grandma so much,” sobbed Priya.
  28. 28.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Manav is hungry? (a) Manav was hungry. (b) Manav gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping. (c) Manav counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.
  29. 29.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The icy wind howled all night.”
    (a) howled (b) wind (c) icy
  30. 30.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The mouse ___ the corner of the cheese.”
    (a) nibbled (b) ate (c) came
  31. 31.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Come back here, Moti___” shouted Vihaan.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) an exclamation mark (!) (c) a full stop (.)
  32. 32.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “Our cat lets out a sad ___ at night.”
    (a) thud (b) roar (c) meow
  33. 33.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Sneha is angry? (a) Sneha folded her arms and glared at her brother. (b) Sneha was angry. (c) Sneha kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.
  34. 34.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Meera ___ to the bus stop before it left.”
    (a) ran (b) got (c) dashed
  35. 35.Which strong verb could replace “threw” in this sentence?
    “Dad threw the keys onto the table.”
    (a) tossed (b) crept (c) muttered
  36. 36.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “The lost calf walked through the fields.”
    (a) tumbled (b) wandered (c) sprinkled
  37. 37.Which strong verb could replace “went” in this sentence?
    “The cat went quietly towards the pigeon.”
    (a) nibbled (b) plunged (c) crept
  38. 38.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Dev ___ past his sleeping baby sister.”
    (a) went (b) tiptoed (c) walked
  39. 39.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose,” giggled Farhan. (b) “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose”, giggled Farhan. (c) Ha ha, you have milk on your nose, giggled Farhan.
  40. 40.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The bonfire ___ on Lohri night.”
    (a) made (b) burned (c) blazed

Answer key

  1. a comma (,)
  2. “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock,” giggled Riya.
  3. The fish market had a strong smell.
  4. I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden.
  5. simile
  6. a sheep
  7. a jump into a pool
  8. metaphor
  9. tall
  10. slurp
  11. crept
  12. crawled
  13. happy
  14. quiet
  15. whispered
  16. raced
  17. Tenzin grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.
  18. telling
  19. sticky
  20. The playground was an oven in May.
  21. polished
  22. stale
  23. click
  24. slow
  25. nibbled
  26. colourful
  27. “I miss my grandma so much,” sobbed Priya.
  28. Manav gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.
  29. icy
  30. nibbled
  31. an exclamation mark (!)
  32. meow
  33. Sneha folded her arms and glared at her brother.
  34. dashed
  35. tossed
  36. wandered
  37. crept
  38. tiptoed
  39. “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose,” giggled Farhan.
  40. blazed

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