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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 955 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Sneha was really sad.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  2. 2.Which strong verb means “cleaned by rubbing hard”? (a) gobbled (b) scrubbed (c) raced
  3. 3.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) chair (b) kind (c) cock-a-doodle-doo
  4. 4.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Fatima is hungry? (a) Fatima was hungry. (b) Fatima beamed and hugged everyone in sight. (c) Fatima licked her lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.
  5. 5.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ road twisted up the mountain.”
    (a) good (b) okay (c) narrow
  6. 6.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “Ravi drank his lassi with a ___.”
    (a) woof (b) slurp (c) croak
  7. 7.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Who painted this lovely picture___” asked Sneha.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)
  8. 8.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark. (b) The earth smelled lovely after the first rain. (c) The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.
  9. 9.Which strong verb means “ran very fast”? (a) scribbled (b) dashed (c) munched
  10. 10.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Yash is sad? (a) Yash was sad. (b) Tears filled Yash’s eyes, and he stared at the floor. (c) Yash counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.
  11. 11.Which sense does this line use?
    “Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.”
    (a) smell (b) sight (c) taste
  12. 12.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap,” ___ Rohan.
    (a) shouted (b) asked (c) whispered
  13. 13.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The feathery grass tickled my feet.”
    (a) feathery (b) grass (c) tickled
  14. 14.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Run, the bus is leaving”! shouted Yash. (b) “Run, the bus is leaving!” shouted Yash. (c) “Run, the bus is leaving” shouted Yash.
  15. 15.Which sense does this line use?
    “The scent of Grandma’s perfume filled the room.”
    (a) sight (b) smell (c) hearing
  16. 16.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The night was as dark as ink. (b) The traffic jam was a long metal snake. (c) The children played cricket after school.
  17. 17.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue. (b) The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck. (c) The new bicycle shone bright red.
  18. 18.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet___” giggled Maria.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  19. 19.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Sneha’s heart thumped, and she hid under the sheet.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  20. 20.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Your silly face makes me laugh,” ___ Rohan.
    (a) sobbed (b) giggled (c) asked
  21. 21.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The sunset painted the sky orange and pink. (b) The cactus was prickly when I touched it. (c) The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.
  22. 22.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Diya felt very hungry.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  23. 23.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The doorbell went ___ at noon.”
    (a) ding-dong (b) crackle (c) croak
  24. 24.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Saanvi felt very hungry.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  25. 25.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ floor squeaked under my shoes.”
    (a) fine (b) polished (c) good
  26. 26.Which sense does this line use?
    “The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink.”
    (a) hearing (b) taste (c) smell
  27. 27.Which word fits the gap best?
    “I have lost my favourite teddy,” ___ Arjun.
    (a) giggled (b) asked (c) sobbed
  28. 28.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The eagle ___ above the hills.”
    (a) came (b) flew (c) soared
  29. 29.Which strong verb means “wrote quickly and untidily”? (a) staggered (b) giggled (c) scribbled
  30. 30.Which sense does this line use?
    “I saw a rainbow over the green fields.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) hearing
  31. 31.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose,” ___ Diya.
    (a) asked (b) sobbed (c) giggled
  32. 32.Which sense does this line use?
    “The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.”
    (a) sight (b) taste (c) touch
  33. 33.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Farhan kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.”
    (a) sad (b) bored (c) hungry
  34. 34.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Ananya felt very happy.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  35. 35.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The shaggy dog barked at the stranger.”
    (a) barked (b) dog (c) shaggy
  36. 36.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The polished floor squeaked under my shoes.”
    (a) squeaked (b) polished (c) floor
  37. 37.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Farhan is angry? (a) Farhan was angry. (b) Farhan could barely keep his eyes open at dinner. (c) Farhan’s face turned red, and he clenched his fists.
  38. 38.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ bus rattled down the road.”
    (a) fine (b) rusty (c) nice
  39. 39.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aisha felt very sad.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  40. 40.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ bread crumbled in my fingers.”
    (a) stale (b) nice (c) good

Answer key

  1. telling
  2. scrubbed
  3. cock-a-doodle-doo
  4. Fatima licked her lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.
  5. narrow
  6. slurp
  7. a question mark (?)
  8. The earth smelled lovely after the first rain.
  9. dashed
  10. Tears filled Yash’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.
  11. sight
  12. whispered
  13. feathery
  14. “Run, the bus is leaving!” shouted Yash.
  15. smell
  16. The traffic jam was a long metal snake.
  17. The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck.
  18. a comma (,)
  19. showing
  20. giggled
  21. The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.
  22. telling
  23. ding-dong
  24. telling
  25. polished
  26. smell
  27. sobbed
  28. soared
  29. scribbled
  30. sight
  31. giggled
  32. taste
  33. hungry
  34. telling
  35. shaggy
  36. polished
  37. Farhan’s face turned red, and he clenched his fists.
  38. rusty
  39. telling
  40. stale

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