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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 96 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.What makes the sound “moo”? (a) a crisp papad (b) the wind (c) a cow
  2. 2.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Zoya sighed and flipped through the same comic again.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  3. 3.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as snow”
    (a) black (b) white (c) noisy
  4. 4.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “The tired runner walked over the finish line.”
    (a) nibbled (b) whispered (c) staggered
  5. 5.Which sentence is a simile? (a) My father bought a new umbrella. (b) Our teacher is a fountain of ideas. (c) The elephant moved like a slow grey hill.
  6. 6.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The clouds were cotton balls in the sky. (b) The shop sells pencils and erasers. (c) Her smile was as bright as the sun.
  7. 7.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The snow was a white blanket on the hills. (b) The train left the station at nine. (c) The runner was as quick as lightning.
  8. 8.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I miss my grandma so much___” sobbed Ananya.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  9. 9.What makes the sound “whoosh”? (a) a crisp papad (b) raindrops (c) the wind
  10. 10.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ishaan is happy? (a) Ishaan was happy. (b) Ishaan’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door. (c) Ishaan grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.
  11. 11.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) chair (b) yellow (c) thud
  12. 12.Which sense does this line use?
    “The baby giggled when Dad made funny noises.”
    (a) hearing (b) touch (c) smell
  13. 13.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The oranges ___ out of the bag and down the steps.”
    (a) fell (b) came (c) tumbled
  14. 14.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Arjun was really tired.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  15. 15.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ishaan kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.”
    (a) hungry (b) bored (c) angry
  16. 16.Which sense does this line use?
    “The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour.”
    (a) taste (b) hearing (c) smell
  17. 17.Which sense does this line use?
    “I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row.”
    (a) sight (b) smell (c) hearing
  18. 18.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The fireworks burst like giant flowers.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  19. 19.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ teddy bear sat on my bed.”
    (a) good (b) cuddly (c) fine
  20. 20.Which strong verb means “spoke very softly”? (a) whispered (b) glanced (c) soared
  21. 21.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) knock (b) quickly (c) teacher
  22. 22.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The motorbike went ___ down the road.”
    (a) crunch (b) chirp (c) vroom
  23. 23.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a tortoise”
    (a) loud (b) fast (c) slow
  24. 24.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The diver ___ into the deep pool.”
    (a) plunged (b) fell (c) had
  25. 25.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ rope scraped my hands.”
    (a) rough (b) good (c) nice
  26. 26.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Hee hee, stop tickling me, giggled Nisha. (b) “Hee hee, stop tickling me,” giggled Nisha. (c) “Hee hee, stop tickling me” giggled Nisha.
  27. 27.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) slurp (b) river (c) teacher
  28. 28.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ishaan is hungry? (a) Ishaan kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch. (b) Ishaan was hungry. (c) Ishaan rubbed his eyes and nodded off on the sofa.
  29. 29.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Riya ___ a crunchy apple on the bus.”
    (a) munched (b) got (c) ate
  30. 30.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The mint chutney tasted sour and salty. (b) I saw a rainbow over the green fields. (c) The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink.
  31. 31.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “My kite is torn to pieces”, sobbed Fatima. (b) My kite is torn to pieces, sobbed Fatima. (c) “My kite is torn to pieces,” sobbed Fatima.
  32. 32.What makes the sound “pop”? (a) a cat (b) a balloon (c) a duck
  33. 33.Which strong verb could replace “held” in this sentence?
    “Diya held her mother’s hand in the crowd.”
    (a) raced (b) slammed (c) clutched
  34. 34.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose___” giggled Priya.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)
  35. 35.Which word fits the gap best?
    “How many stars are in the sky?” ___ Vihaan.
    (a) giggled (b) sobbed (c) asked
  36. 36.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The stars were diamonds in the night sky.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  37. 37.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Nisha’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  38. 38.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The balloon burst with a ___.”
    (a) drip (b) splash (c) pop
  39. 39.Which sense does this line use?
    “Dad sniffed the milk to check if it was fresh.”
    (a) hearing (b) taste (c) smell
  40. 40.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aarav could barely keep his eyes open at dinner.”
    (a) telling (b) showing

Answer key

  1. a cow
  2. showing
  3. white
  4. staggered
  5. The elephant moved like a slow grey hill.
  6. Her smile was as bright as the sun.
  7. The runner was as quick as lightning.
  8. a comma (,)
  9. the wind
  10. Ishaan grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.
  11. thud
  12. hearing
  13. tumbled
  14. telling
  15. bored
  16. taste
  17. sight
  18. simile
  19. cuddly
  20. whispered
  21. knock
  22. vroom
  23. slow
  24. plunged
  25. rough
  26. “Hee hee, stop tickling me,” giggled Nisha.
  27. slurp
  28. Ishaan kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.
  29. munched
  30. The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink.
  31. “My kite is torn to pieces,” sobbed Fatima.
  32. a balloon
  33. clutched
  34. a comma (,)
  35. asked
  36. metaphor
  37. showing
  38. pop
  39. smell
  40. showing

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